Alice in the Land of Steam

Alice and Ringo's wonderful journey to find the lost girl's queen depicts a dynamic and diverse fantasy world. The clichéd story surface hides an unfamiliar story line. It gets rid of the routine personality profile. The establishment of group personality allows readers to understand more. It is a rare masterpiece that gives me a clear sense of that astonishing world. It gave me rare comfort in this era when most novels are boring. Unfortunately, there are too few readers of this book, and it is difficult for non-old bookworms to appreciate the fiery soul context in it.

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The Seven Witches of Chaos are all fools who are easily deceived. Tiandis says one thing and does another, all relying on his nice words to easily fool the Seven Witches of Chaos. After reading Tiandisi's concept, I felt like a crazy person, because after seeing the earth, I thought that the fault of my world was due to the magic power, so I had to wipe out all the magic power, and I couldn't fix it. This idea was made with just a slap on the forehead. This person is simply the ultimate devilish Alice. When you see a weak board, instead of trying to make up for it, you cut all the other ones that are higher than the short board into short boards. This is simply outrageous. It can only be said that the villain is not an ordinary crotch puller. It was okay when there was not much writing in the early stage. However, when the conflict of ideas was written in detail, it was childish and ridiculous. Other villains all hope for progress, relief for all mankind, and sublimation of the collective, but Tiandis is like Lakuri. The inequality of life levels does not want to improve the lower levels, but instead suppresses the higher ones. It feels like they want everyone to be equal, so they all suppress the rich. I don't quite understand why the villain has to be made so outrageous. It's very disgusting and childish. It feels like the cultural level of people all over the world is too low but their power level is not low, and the goals they pursue are very funny.

It feels more like a female video (minus one star for subjectivity), the male protagonist is not aggressive, and the auxiliary role does not feel like a sense of substitution (minus one star), ✔️The real exploration and the search for the truth are worth pondering (plus one point), the battle scenes are more like victory by tricking, in this case, anyone can file C position, but position C is the heroine? (Minus one point) Changing the audience track should be wider.

Let me first talk about the advantages that I personally think: 1. A very interesting and detailed setting of the steam fantasy worldview. Although it is based on the classic events of medieval history, geographical sights and monuments in various countries in the real world, the so-called "magical side of history" hidden lines and related sequences shaped by the fantasy part are set in quite detailed and easy-to-understand terms. 2. The various jokes make people smile and are easy to see. The use of battles in a way similar to video games is also very interesting. People who like to read light novels and ACGN subculture can see most of the jokes and make people laugh. 3. The emotional description, handling of character relationships and characterization are quite good, which is one of the reasons why this book reads like a light novel. Ringer, the male protagonist of the classic light novel who is "facially paralyzed" but is actually Asashi and has a sister, Alice, the "genius player" who loves to play with treasures... Each volume is also an adventure story with a classic flow, exploring the connection between ancient legends and the girl's throne and solving problems. This places high demands on the author's brilliance in storytelling. Obviously, the author was not very skilled at the beginning. The story of Linwell City in the first part is quite fluent, and it relies entirely on enough fantasy medieval descriptions to attract readers. In the second part, it is obviously much better. The echoes of ancient legends, dramas, and truth are quite beautiful. The subsequent chapters are also written in this context, which is exciting and interesting enough. 4. The delicate writing style and the ignorant and simple love described by this writing style are quite touching. The simple two words "destiny". After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages that I personally think: 1. The delicate writing style also brings "The Riddler" and lengthy environment descriptions. To be honest, I skipped lines to read these descriptions. I roughly know what is being described, so I pay close attention to the plot advancement and setting explanations in character dialogues. 2. The description of combat is actually rather perfunctory, but it is understandable. After all, playing the game yourself and describing how to play the game are two different things. But combat-related settings, especially numerical settings, are too difficult. (The following contains spoilers) The Judgment Cannon is 150m long and has a caliber of 20m, which is equivalent to only 7.5 Times the caliber. Even if this is a magic cannon, it must be in line with the diameter ratio of modern artillery, which is more in line with the steam fantasy world view. This number is more like the author set it to fit the overall size of the Feiyamente. Not to mention the more casual numerical strength settings in the Alice game. 3. Give me more Ringer scenes. It's so cool to pretend to be a "facial paralyzed" protagonist, okay? 🤔🤔🤔

He looked at me and made him laugh. I thought that if the magic power could not be restored naturally, if I used it too much, it would lead to the end of the Dharma. I found out that there are villas where I can't live under the bridge. Are you human beings? Just protect humanity. You are in charge of the entire world, and instead of protecting endangered species and plants, you are destroying them. Who taught you some science and technology? Let's go play with boiling water, and he'll give me some mana technology to surprise me! You gave your magic power to the other side, making you laugh when you woke up. When you woke up, you slapped yourself twice to see if it was a dream. Instead of riding in a sports car, learn to walk next door, right? There are so many races that all use their resources and do not study how to achieve racial unity and engage in racial discrimination. How can we use so many magical plants to cause environmental damage? Do you want to cut it or not?

Haha, the name of the novel is like an ancient butter RPG

I was too discouraged in the early stage. I wrote the protagonist as a cold person and then vigorously described Alice. It felt a bit overwhelming and made me feel that Alice is the protagonist.

So whether the main character is male or female, if it is female, I will put it on the bookshelf and try doge.

Alas, I feel that the presence of the male protagonist is too weak. Alice, who has strong combat power, has been weakened like a miscellaneous fish. She has always been a comedian. It is difficult to imagine that she is Tiandisi's sister at the same time. From the whole plot, it is just to show off the male protagonist. The male protagonist feels that he has no special abilities except for the attraction to the opposite sex. BYD female protagonist Alice has been weakened into a single-core creature. Well, removing the male protagonist and letting Alice become Feng Aotian is much more enjoyable than now, and the protagonist's strategy relies solely on the girl's goodwill. Itsuka Shido is more capable than the protagonist. Alice will only unlock her strength when the plot requires it. As soon as the plot is over, she is labeled as a Down syndrome orphan with an IQ of minus 200. Although the fake male protagonist is not annoying, Alice is really miserable.