Immortal Master

1. Ordinary people's way of writing: I put the battery into the flashlight. 2. The normal author's writing: I stuffed two AA batteries into the somewhat worn flashlight. 3. How to write the Water God: Now, I have an old-fashioned flashlight in my hand. Holding it, I felt uneasy. I looked at it and found that, like other old-fashioned flashlights, it had a cover on the hip that could be opened by rotating. When I opened the lid, as I expected, I was speechless when I saw that it was empty inside. My brows furrowed tightly, and the feeling of wanting to commit suicide by throwing myself into a lake hit me from all directions. Because I was faced with a difficult decision: go downstairs and buy two batteries, or find two batteries at home. There is no trouble in life. Although it is daytime and I haven't had breakfast yet, as the only old-fashioned flashlight, it does not have two AA batteries in it, which is very, very unreasonable. Has anyone heard of such a thing? How could I allow something that no one had ever heard of to happen? I'm human too! I have feelings too! ! ! Just... Making a choice is really, really, hard. When I go downstairs to buy batteries, I have to put on clothes and pants, I have to be careful that I forgot to bring my keys, I have to avoid speeding cars on the street, and I have to be wary of meteorites in the sky; thinking about this, I am speechless. . . But if you look for it at home, my dear friends, in this age, who else still has AA batteries in their home? I thought about it over and over again, and was in a dilemma. I thought about it for almost two hours. . . Finally, I couldn't help but let out a deep sigh. Well, I can only put these two AA batteries in my pocket. These two batteries were love tokens given to me by my former and former girlfriends. I thought I didn't have to make such a sacrifice, but it wasn't true. Everyone was involved in the whirlpool of flashlights and batteries. Life is a life of problem solving, and if you have an old-fashioned flashlight that doesn't have the right center of gravity, stick the batteries in it.

What's the point of upgrading your ultimate move to a powerful one and increasing the damage? As a level 1 mage, your mana is simply not enough to amplify your move.

The old monk poured a bucket of gasoline on the young monk, lit a match and asked the young monk: "What have you realized?" The young monk said: "If you don't blow, you will die." The old monk took out the windproof lighter again and asked the young monk, "What have you realized?" The young monk said, "I will blow it even if I die." At this time, the lighter suddenly went out on its own. The old monk didn't light it for a long time, and stared down at the young monk without speaking for a long time. The young monk lowered his head and said weakly: "You are trying to get angry."

It is another fantasy magic book that combines the East and the West, making people want to read it. Just like our ancient Chinese Lao Tzu, the Taoist priests are all white-skinned, European and American, and the Taoist priests all have European and American names, which are neither fish nor fowl.

Although seven or eight years have passed since one hundred chapters (probably), compared to the total number of 10,000, it is a bit insignificant. I don't know how many chapters the author wants to write before the official open beta.

After reading about three hundred chapters, I can tell you my feelings. I just read the first 100 pictures as cool articles. I read them quite quickly and saw about 100 of them at once. It was okay to fight Donglin at the fifth level. Then when I saw Chapter 180. I just feel like I can't stand it anymore. The 100 pictures from 180 to 270 took me twice as long as the previous 150 pictures. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. Although this sentence is a bit inappropriate, it is relevant. I feel that the author's outline and various settings at the beginning were incomplete. At least in the first 150 pictures, I didn't fully understand them. There are also some settings about the protagonist's past life background and experience. If I remember correctly, I didn't see any description in the article of how long the game had been in operation before the protagonist traveled through time? There are also some settings where you can clearly feel that loopholes and holes were filled in later. Of course it would be great to fill this in. There are some questions that I don't bother to ask. If I raise them, I might answer them in one sentence. This is the author's setting. But let me tell you something, doesn't a mage need a blue bar to use his skills? What is your specific blue amount? Haven't you written it? It's just that I remember writing a few times in the early stage, including a bunch of skills and what percentage of mana was left. Then there are blood, skill, damage, etc. There is no comparison of skills and so on, so you can't tell the strength. It feels nondescript. Since you have already written about the data panel, don't you think so? For example, the damage of fireball at level 10 is 100 + spirit × 2, and the damage at level 11 is 200 + spirit × 2.1. Then compare the data of an attack skill that can only be learned at the second level. For example, the fireball damage is 180 + spirit × 2, and there is a 10% burn slowdown after hitting. In the Good Guys, the skill damage defense can only be set by yourself, although there is a protagonist who uses attack skills to defeat monsters to test the damage. But the description can only be described as breaking the defense and being unable to resist. There is also the forging skill obtained in the early stage to strengthen the equipment. It can be strengthened by 6 at level 20, but it has not been improved for a long time until level 50. After passing this forging skill, other skills are all 90. After reaching 100, it is still 50. There is no improvement in the forging skill from level 20 to level 50, let alone this forging skill. Is it forging or strengthening? Level 20 can add 6, but level 50 can add 8+9+10? And according to the routines written by the author, the skills at level 50 or 51 should mutate, such as being able to fuse equipment and forge equipment by yourself. Then there is the issue of attribute points. I mentioned attribute points when I was about 150 cards in. There are too few ways to obtain them. Although some other ways to obtain it were added later. But if you get attribute points in the early stage, can't you take pills or some genius treasures? Oops, I don't seem to see any description in the article of how other non-protagonist characters improve their attributes? Then from Chapter 150 to Chapter 200, it was more difficult for me to read, because I felt that there was no breaking point in the water like in daily life. Then I added a bunch of ooxx. It can only be said that the outline is not well conceived, and the settings are not very complete. As a reader, I suggest that the author write a pre-book outline and set up the book in the future. These things are like weapons. The quality of the sword is different between getting a sword embryo directly and slowly tinkering with it. I have read a lot of game articles, such as The Super Mechanic, The Indestructible Stronghold Master, and The Indestructible Online Game.

I seem to have read a book with the same theme as this one

Keep up with the speed. I haven't read game novels in many years.

The subject matter is good, but the plot is too boring. There are several reasons. The first is that the protagonist cannot upgrade and is stuck at level 1 , and it takes 10,000 years to unlock the upgrade. I don't know what the author's purpose is for this setting, but I can only say that this setting is not good. Why is it bad? Because the protagonist you set like this can only learn some very common spells, although he can become very powerful, it is not as good as normal upgrading to learn those naturally powerful forbidden spells and other spells This will cause the protagonist's subsequent fights to always be the same, which is not exciting and boring to watch, and the subsequent plot will not progress Also, the map in this book is too small, really too small. I have read more than 100 chapters and the protagonist is still standing still. To go out, go to other countries and other maps, you have to wander around in the desert... You said that the protagonist has obtained the funds, and also obtained the mage tower inheritance. In the end, he is still wandering around in the desert. It feels watery when he looks at it. In the end, it is not broken. Fast forward to the plot where the player arrives [e mot=default,04/]There is a feeling that the author feels that the writing is broken and he wants to finish it quickly It's a pity that this subject matter is such a shame. By the way, author, do you still remember that you recommended a book about wizard immortality? Even though it's a mess, the plot of that book is pretty good. You can learn from it.

If you don't practice in seclusion and practice well, you always say you have prepared enough supplies for several years, and then they are gone in a few months, and you go out to wander around from time to time, you will not be able to write thousands of chapters in ten thousand years!