Zhuge Dali's Cheating Boyfriend

Recently, because of iPartment 5, there are many such themes, and the heroines are all powerful. Of course, I think most people come here for her. However, most of the other books either describe the male protagonist as a licking dog, or they are too sexual. And Dali's character as a top student is not fully reflected, and of course the writing is also poor. The writing of this book is good. The characters of the protagonist and Dali and others are very obvious, and they are more in line with the original work (after all, it is difficult for a fan to fully write the characters of the original work) The protagonist is a genius, and his background is clearly explained, as well as his relationship with other people in the apartment. However, one thing that I personally feel is not good is that the relationship between the other characters and the protagonist is too close. Almost all of them have known each other since childhood and are too familiar with each other. This may cause other characters to be just foils and deviate from the original feeling of Love Apartment, because in this TV series, apart from the scenes, there is no absolute protagonist. But after all, it is a fan fiction, and it more satisfies our regrets. In this regard, the author writes very well. When the protagonist first appeared, he almost took everyone's future into consideration to make up for the regrets in those TV series. Although Vigor appears later, it feels too proactive, but it is in line with the setting of a top student, and he will respect his "seniors" very much. Presumably in the original work, everyone can see Dali's feelings for Yifei. It's not obvious, but it still gives people a feeling of respect. The protagonist's view of emotions is well designed, very clear, and has his own understanding. Although he knows that Dali is his choice, he also writes some problems that will arise from the two characters' personalities, and writes the plot of love in a very real way. An ex-girlfriend, Huang Yao, was added later. It doesn't have much impact, but it stimulates Dali's feelings for the protagonist. However, I hope you won't write too many plots about his ex-girlfriend later. The protagonist you wrote was too good for his ex-girlfriend, which made everyone uncomfortable, and what you wrote was not good for her, and the real feeling was lost, so try to cut it off as early as possible. But the setting of Chen Nuo later is really bad. She is just a manager of a company, interfering in the private affairs of the company owner without authorization, and the protagonist is very cowardly in front of her. Some people may say that it is because the company has always been managed by Chen Nuo and the protagonist feels that she is working hard, or because of her loyalty. But this is not a reason for management to interfere at will with the controller. Even if you are a friend, you will overly interfere in other people's emotional problems, make decisions without telling the protagonist, and object to who the protagonist is with. This will only make people hate you. (Of course, there are many such routines and plots in stallion novels) Some people say that it's good that Chen Nuo didn't betray the protagonist, so what the protagonist does to her is natural, but don't forget that the protagonist is a genius and the absolute controller of this company. Even the company's ideas belong to the protagonist. Without the protagonist, what would the company do? Without Chen Nuo, the protagonist can start over at any time, and this company is just one of the industries to him. The important core of what the protagonist does is his person. In the end, iPartment is a drama that is comfortable and emotional for everyone to watch. Some routines will only ruin it. Even though the original work only allowed a few couples to get together in five parts, it didn't feel sadistic. Well, that's all. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard. It is a very good book and I hope it can be completed.

Unlike other powerful novels, the author's writing style is excellent, and he does not blindly go into the plot, but successfully creates the image of the protagonist. I hope the author understands that he is an update robot with no emotions! [Emot=default,52/]

I have written novels before and thought it would be easy. Only after writing did I realize how difficult it was. I didn't know how to write, so I thought about the plot one by one and wrote whatever came to mind. After you finish writing, you have to read it again and revise it. But it didn't take long to give up. So I admire authors who can persevere. Yesterday I saw a chapter posted by the author and what I wanted to say was that I felt very tired and that I had been working hard without any reward. I would like to say that the author should not give up. Your writing is very interesting and has its own characteristics and features. It is the best-looking among other fics I have read. So I don't want the author to give up and persevere. The results of your work are considered very good. Come on, believe in yourself, people will always encounter setbacks. When the author puts it on the shelves, I will always subscribe and continue to support you. I'll order as much as you want. This is the first time I post something like this, because I don't want to see a good piece of work disappear like this. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

You know, there are many people who want to watch iPartment, but they don't want Zhang Wei and Dali to be dismantled, because I like Zhang Wei's Dali, and I have already achieved results (hahahaha, drink and add cephalosporins). How can I say that Zhang Wei, the most classy man in iPartment, has been miserable for three seasons, and it is rare to see him in the final season. When I saw that Dali was taken away in the novel and he was left alone to continue to be miserable, I actually felt very bad. Moreover, the title of your book... Was very aggressive, which made people like me preconceptions and messed with Zhang Wei. Then after reading your book, I found that it was actually not bad, because Zhang Wei was an orphan, and he and Dali were really not suitable for each other in the early stage. This book gave Zhang Wei a well-matched family and gave him a happy ending. I am very happy, hahaha. My favorite drama that I can watch several times is Love Apartment. I like and am satisfied with the people in it, and I don't have many thoughts of dismantling the original plot, but this book is ok. Like me, those who don't want to see Zhang Wei demolished can actually try reading a few chapters of the miserable fifth season. I have read another book, and it was a grab at the beginning, and then I stopped reading it. I can't say it's not good, it's just a hedge against me. Best wishes to the author. This is a normal comedy, so don't make too many tragedies. I can't stand it, and there's really a lot to be written in the barrage space in episode 13. I watched the episode of Grass (a kind of plant) for more than an hour, and I almost thought I couldn't get out of it... Oh, by the way, there's a sentence in it that I like very much and have already stolen my micro-signature, hahaha. When it comes to relationships, I also like to be absolutely possessive and relatively independent, because games and chasing are equally important. So what if they are single, be happy.

Tell me emotionally. I want the author to accept Huang Yao. She has also grown up and knows how to love. Give her a chance and she will change. Time has proven that she will never leave her for 6 years. But reason tells me that there is only one life. Life is incomplete. Only a broken life is full of desire for exploration. But really. Give Huang Yao a good ending

This is the last time I will comment on the results as a fan. By the time you see this post, I will no longer be a fan. After all, everyone has their own path to take, and there is always a gap between life and dreams. If you try to step aside, it will only become more and more difficult. No matter how dazzling your idol is, it will always be out of reach; no matter how cute and perfect your results are, you won't know every fan. Don't blame me, I can't always live in the world of chasing stars. I want to giggle every day looking at the magazine photos of my results, dream about her face, follow her new dramas, and buy her peripherals. However, I can't, because I clearly understand that fans and idols, reality and ideals, are almost opposites. It is undoubtedly a huge pain to lose the fans who dreamed of it, broke their promises, and gave up on continuing to make achievements. I will spend my whole life making up for the regrets I have caused. Therefore, from now on I will not be her fan, but fulfill the responsibility of a husband to love her. Thank you all for continuing to chase my wife, I will take better care of her.

Don't think of it as loving Wu Tongren, don't think of it as loving Wu Tongren, don't think of it as loving Wu Tongren! Say important things three times If the author writes a female channel, I will definitely support it Just think of this book as a good book wrapped in the Aiwu world view. It is all original plots, which is different from other Aiwu novels I have read. If you want to see Pure Love Five, turn left when you go out and there are plenty of them, there is no need to waste your time here. Maybe my IQ is low, I have to guess a lot of riddles, but I like this feeling jio I also hope that the author can maintain his own style and don't listen to other people's nonsense. He doesn't understand but others do. Also, stop reading your own books and complain about yourself, leaving readers with nothing to complain about.

Do they all like Zhuge Dali so much?

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Although I know that many people like Dali, but like this, how can I explain to Dali at night, my dear Guoguo.