Douluo: the Dark Devil Tiger Becomes the Evil God!

My heart is higher than the sky, my life is thinner than paper. I said I want to cultivate to become a god and defeat Tang San. However, after three years, I reached level 18 at the age of 9, and my mental power is still 183. I also repaired my brain after retraining😅 Tang San's spiritual consciousness as mentioned above is still affecting 50's brain. If you don't suppress it, you still support it. Do you think you can support a soul to withstand long-term brainwashing? 😆Didn't the evil tiger rely on devouring to improve in the first place, and the original Dou Yi didn't have a stable foundation. Beating Tang San was like beating Sun Tzu, but in the end, he devoured him into the same fw as Tianmeng. I can only say what kind of author writes what kind of protagonist.

The writing is the same as 💩. He only reached level 18 after practicing for three years. He shouted to kill Tang San every day, but in the end he didn't practice well. I think I can only be Tang San🐶

The work is of poor quality and there are many incidents that reduce IQ. As a dark evil tiger, the use of its own power is only so low. I don't understand how it survived from Dou 1 to Dou 3. The protagonist has lived for about 30,000 years, and his mental state He is still so unstable, he still wants to reach the circle of great gods, he is wishful thinking, he is only level 18 at the age of 9, his focus in the early stage is entirely on Gu Yue, Na'er and Snow Emperor, and he doesn't see the courage to move forward at all. It is so toxic that it is not appreciable. Summary: It's poisonous, and the early explanation is incomplete. Although the author's ideals and writing style in the storytelling area are very good, I still recommend that you do it step by step.

1The heroine problem: Gu Yue, Na'er, Snow Emperor. (Huo Yun'er Pendant is also the heroine, but because she is an original character, there won't be too much plot. She is more like a maid.) Tentatively three (four). 2Setting problem: As for the million-year-old soul beast transforming into an adult, the soul power cultivation level is too low, the mental power is too low, etc. In fact, I still think about it so much, because I can also see that this is not a book about high-level soul power and high killing. To correct this, Gu Yue's mental strength at this stage in the sealed state is only 119 points (Chapter 69 of the original work) It's okay to write casually about levels 30 and 40, and mental strength of 1,000 and 1,000 points. Readers, please don't pay so much attention to less important issues. Of course, if it's wrong, it's also the author's fault, and the readers are the right ones! ! ! 3 [Plot question]: After all, this book "borrows" the setting of Dragon King Yuhao from the book next door. I think the setting of handed down souls and Pokémon is very interesting and will be used in subsequent battles. It mainly focuses on character plots, fun, and some show-offs (the upcoming one about blowing up Shrek Academy). Readers can also tell that the pace is not very fast. 4 [Father is kind and son is filial]: Because after all, Tang Wulin, the protagonist of Legend of the Dragon King, will interact with the protagonist of the original work no matter what the fandom is, and the interaction with the original protagonist is also very crucial, such as Dou Yi to torture Tang San, Dou Er to transform into Yu Hao to rebel against Tang San, or join the sun and moon to fight to win over Yu Hao to rebel against Tang San. I really can't think of any other way to solve Tang Wulin's story. If I really killed him directly, there would be no need to write about it. After all, Tang Wulin is a tool. How to cause the protagonist to attack the Tang Shenwang through Tang Wulin is a constant and exciting point. Let me think about how to satisfy readers. 5Blow up Shrek Academy: Highly explosive scenes, Eternal Heaven explodes Shrek. The tricky thing now is that I wrote the story about the bombing of Shrek Academy too early (originally I thought of it as a story about Duoshui Shuishui's Donghai City Academy, but I thought it was watery and bland, so I just fast-forwarded to the bombing of Shrek Academy, and Na'er was taken away to lead to the plot. The twist is not too blunt) and it has already reached the point where it has to be bombed, otherwise it will be a big poison. How to explode, how to develop after the explosion, and how to solve the problem of Naer running away. The most important issue is Na'er. The original plan was to keep her by her side (she was too young and too early to be afraid of river crabs, and she repeatedly emphasized the Silver Dragon King who is more than 100,000 years old), and then get involved with Gu Yue. But now the opposite has been chosen. 5Brief description of character: Then we can only write Na'er as that kind of character (the heroine regrets it when she grows up and begs the hero for forgiveness. Why does it feel like a male protagonist's urban novel?) If it doesn't work, you can change it! ! ! Gu Yue's character: I, the co-owner of the Silver Dragon King Soul Beast, (Queen), should obey me, (but I have repeatedly encountered obstacles, trying to prove that I am right in front of Jiang Chen, what does it feel like?) Snow Emperor... The new chapter will lead to the story of the peerless Tang Sect who was coaxed by the protagonist to call him daddy. This grudge has been held for thousands of years, and now he has returned and is determined to trample the hero under his feet and call him mommy? Anyway! ! ! If you have any comments, you can give them and the author can refer to them! As for the typo problem, long press to select the text and mark it to remind me to make corrections. Writer Assistant is not very easy to use and sometimes it cannot be detected.

Too rubbish Na'er is so disgusting Damn the main character looks like a cuckold At first glance, it turned out to be the author who asked Shengsheng to help Tang San give birth to a child. I'm disgusted by you again The protagonist is still a loser After cultivating the soul beast for a million years, I couldn't survive the tribulation, so I re-cultivated it. This makes it understandable that Dragon God is a bastard But you were promoted to level eight in three years If the protagonist doesn't practice, he just eats, drinks and has fun. Said the protagonist wants to become a god He is a complete waste. Yu Xiaogang is better than the protagonist. You write a book to disgust people and make them feel unhappy and crazy. You are really successful

There are too many poisonous points, sponsoring the son of Tang 50 enemy, what the hell, they have all traveled through time, let alone the Holy Mother, they share the same origin, betrayal is difficult, why do so many people like to play the role of father and son, and when they see Lan Xuanyu, they don't want to watch it (Douxi is not good) (no malice) and leave. (Maybe different people have different opinions, but it's really hard to read)

The most useless 100,000-year-old soul beast has the spiritual power of the spiritual abyss realm. The 500,000-year-old soul beast has the spiritual power of the spiritual realm. The million-year-old soul beast must be in the divine origin realm. The protagonist, the million-year-old soul beast, is still in the spiritual abyss realm. He is simply a clown.

It's extremely poisonous. After reading a few chapters, the male protagonist looks like a perverted lunatic. You know, I rarely stand on Tang San's side. Compared with the protagonist, Tang San is both pure and pure.

I'm too lazy to complain, but the author's description of the protagonist as a dream is really against the sky. One of them is still a fw ice silkworm who slept for a million years, and a dark evil evil tiger devoured him for a million years. He actually said that he is better than Tianmeng. It's really disgusting. Also, the character of the protagonist is really not as good as many people in reality. What on earth have you done in 20,000 years? It's just disgusting. Third, right? You haven't learned anything, you don't have any back-up skills. You see a top family helping you, your ancestor, but you refuse to run to Donghai City. You must be sick. They have already done something to Tang Wulin's soul, which can swallow blood. Why are you still following him? When I saw the original text, "I can finally pretend to be awesome," I just wanted to laugh. Twenty thousand years of living on a dog, it's worse than a dog.

I wanted to read this book when I first saw it, but after reading the comments, I read it for a while, and then looked at who the author was. I didn't expect that it was actually the previous book of Inheritance and Destruction. I can only say that you are a cuckold. I really didn't know that you wrote this, and I didn't even know you. What kind of mentality did you use to write it? None of your books have received good reviews. In the early stage of Inheritance and Destruction, it was said that the Goddess of Life was ruthless and ended up giving Tang San a child. It was so 6. The rating was quite high at first, but you raised the rating to something like 6.