The Beloved Returns at the End of the Night

Let me first say that my language below may make you angry, but please be sure to read it. The number of words is a bit too much and I don't have time to look for typos and awkward sentences. I hope you can understand. First of all, let me explain that the writing is good. I read Korean entertainment novels purely for Taeyeon. I am sure that 70% of those who read Korean entertainment novels read it because of their favorite stars. I skipped to read your book by looking at the catalog. I skipped through a few chapters and I didn't even know the male protagonist's name or what his job was. When I saw how much the male protagonist loved Kim Taeyeon in the first part and then later, it made my heart really hurt. Maybe you have experienced it, maybe you haven't. This is the main reason why I gave you two stars. Secondly, there are too many emotional scenes. You are writing about a male protagonist. Most boys don't like emotional dramas because emotional dramas are too heartbreaking. I don't know if you have read the book Korean Entertainment Master of Acting. If you haven't read it, you can read it. After reading this book, he felt a faint sense of happiness. I don't know what other people think. Anyway, when I read Korean Entertainment's single heroine Kim Taeyeon, the most important thing I wanted to do was to let the characters in the book fill in the vague feeling about the idol in my heart. I wanted to bring myself into the male protagonist, instead of going around torturing the heart. Reading the heartbreaking will only make people feel worse, which makes people not want to continue. Keep reading, and after reading all the sweetness and happiness between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, you will feel happy and have an urge to continue reading. For example, when I watched The Actor, I could finish it in one go without any pause. I even stayed up late. I even forgot to submit the proposal. Although I have not read a few chapters of your book, I am sure that I will never finish it after reading the entire book. I can have that feeling when watching The Master of Acting, that feeling that time does not pass easily...,,,,,,, I don't know how to say it, that's what it means, I don't know the specific meaning. I just finished reading The Master of Acting in one day and one night, and my head feels buzzing. I will give you a few opinions. First, give up this book, or end it hastily. This book can be said to be in vain. Second, if you want to make your own Korean As entertainment novels become popular, try writing stories with a single heroine that is not heart-breaking. No matter who the heroine is, it is much better than Korean entertainment novels and harem novels that are sadistic even if you don't know whether it is a single heroine or a harem novel. For example, if you write a novel with a single heroine, Lin Yoon-ah or Kim Taeyeon, or any one of them, as long as your writing is not particularly bad, their fans will read it and reward you. For example, I just discovered a Korean entertainment novel called From Scratch. In the book "The Best of Times", you two are almost the same as you in terms of chapters, writing style, etc., But his book has been read by more people than yours, and the reward money is more than yours. The reason is that the female protagonist in his book list is not sad. Third, don't write the male protagonist's career in such an exaggerated way. I remember accidentally seeing a Korean entertainment novel. The female protagonist is Lin Yoona. The male protagonist seems to have been killed by a challenge after becoming an immortal, and then traveled to the present day. The real world then went crazy and started to show off, it was an urban style, Korean entertainment novels are best to take a warm route, there is also a book where the female protagonist is Kim Taeyeon and there seems to be Jessica Jung, she seems to be a third party, the male protagonist should be a mysterious force that travels from one world to another, similar to the Dragon Team often written in urban novels. Then his teammates died in a mission, and he retired to become a comedy host. He seems to need a system? ? ? Brother-in-law is still Yoo Jae-seok. I read it a long time ago and almost forgot about it. 4. It's best not to have a third party. Even if you have some work, don't be an idol. You can't imagine how badly that book was scolded by Jessica's fans. If you have a third-party idol, you will be criticized by the fans of that idol. 5. Always remember that single-girl dramas are more popular than harem dramas🔥, I I have read more than two hundred Korean entertainment novels and I haven't found a harem novel that is more popular than a single girl. Basically, that's it. My head hurts and I can't think of what to say. I'll fill it in for you when I remember. I can't believe that I actually wrote 1,448 words. The above is purely a personal opinion, don't criticize me if you don't like it (you may not criticize me if you criticize me),,,,,,,,,, I hope the author can consider adopting the above, I feel like my head is about to explode. Regardless of whether you adopt my opinions or not, thank you for taking the time to read my opinions.,,, Thank you again

I like your books very much. Just now I learned that there are only five people in Girls' Generation and SNSD has ended. I don't think I will read any books about them anymore. This is the last Korean entertainment I will read. Goodbye girls!

I'll give you a suggestion, don't write this book. Writing Korean entertainment-type novels is generally only liked by students, and they all have no money. Two: Write a domestic novel and feel immersed in it.

One word, it's so confusing, I can't understand it when I read it, huge poison

I don't have the patience to read on🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

Come on, I look forward to your follow-up, it will definitely become popular

This Kim Taeyeon's mother is a bitch, oh, no, the bitch still knows how to repay kindness, she is a scumbag