
Plane Developers Starting from Zhu Xian
by I Am Smiling
About This Novel
After learning from the pain, I decided not to write a bunch of random things about the world like before! Instead, it describes the beginning of each volume, starting directly from Zhu Xian... Several worlds after that have been determined! Hope everyone supports it!
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Official(55)Scraped 4d ago
I have to say a few words
As a protagonist with an infinite world to explore, I don't think it's necessary to not give the protagonist a bit of magnanimity, right? You can't accept Qingyun's favor without giving anything in return, and you can't take everything without being offline, right? How do you feel? Nowadays, it seems that only this kind of extremely selfish protagonist is liked by others! I write novels to feel more comfortable. In reality, I have a lot of helplessness and cannot be upright, so I hope I can get it in novels! You can't be too selfish in reality! Is it more selfish in the novel? I have to say something!
The writing about time travel is good, but can people be so holy?
Whether the author was stabbed intentionally or not, there is probably no way to settle this grudge easily. Being harmed by a fellow sect in public and the sect not dealing with it will not make people feel distraught.
I don't like this Lu Xueqi. The writing is too extreme and completely different from the cold and fairy-like Lu Xueqi in the original work. Author, you don't have to like Lu Xueqi, please don't write like this. After all, Zhu Xian is the first fairy novel I have read. It is a very good classic in my impression. In your hands, this book is very poorly written and the character description is too strange.
Stallion: Show mercy everywhere, never take away a cloud Harem: Just like the emperor's harem of three thousand beauties in ancient times Some people have some misunderstandings about this If you don't like it, don't criticize me, it's just my personal understanding.
It feels like the protagonist is reversing history
1. The protagonist's real-life experience leads the protagonist to think that science is technology, which is actually wrong! Science is a learning tool created by humans to understand the world. 2. Science and technology are two concepts. These two terms have determined the direction of development. The focus of science is on learning the word, and the focus of science and technology is on the word skill. 3. Learn mathematics, physics and chemistry well so that you can travel all over the world without fear. This is not just a talk. It also includes a series of cognitive and logical thinking methods. 4. Science is the foundation of technology, and technology is only a result of scientific development. The protagonist's subjective consciousness feels that the scientific system is not as good as the spiritual practice system. 5. If the protagonist's teacher in real life knew that the protagonist became like this after time travel, he would not dare to say that he is the protagonist's teacher. I also don't know if the protagonist has ever heard of material science? Biology? Energetics? To kill the protagonist, all you need is the protagonist's gene. It depends on whether you practice quickly or the bacteria mutate quickly. 6. The protagonist goes all over the world to learn other people's training techniques. Even if he doesn't learn the basic theories of a cultivation civilization, he starts from the basics to learn, understand and innovate. He relies on the protagonist's own subjective consciousness to guess the rationality of the techniques. 7. The way the protagonist develops determines that the protagonist's achievements will not be very high. When the protagonist falls into a (thinking disorder), no one can correct the mistake. The protagonist only needs to go one way to a dead end. The key is that no one can correct the mistake.
I hope the author writes a book and makes the protagonist more bloody.
The protagonist was innocently despised and provoked, then easily forgiven, and then beaten into a dog by the master. And then he was driven away. The uncle asked him for help. Because of the teacher's sister's magic, he accidentally scared the junior sister to tears. Then he was beaten up by the uncle and smiled bitterly. I'm really speechless.
Everything else is good, just don't be too arrogant. As a man, I can't stand it. As for Baguio, I won't say anything. As for the senior sister, why does the one who went to Qingyun have to find Lu Xueqi? This kind of temperament is impossible to accept even if a woman pursues a man. If she really accepts her man, then do it wholeheartedly. How many female protagonists are there? (Dongfang sisters, two, Lu Xueqi, Baguio, Ning Zhongze, five) Not to mention they are all sincere, I am a man, I really don't have that much energy, don't be a stud. What a man yearns for is one wife, two concubines, a wife (whether gentle or domineering, in short, he can establish authority at home, at least he can control the concubine), the concubine can be gentle, generous, naughty, but not a stud. One wife and two concubines is best. I am a man, but the stallion is really bad and the family cannot survive at all. Don't tell me that none of them are jealous, and each of them is gentle and generous. That's impossible. After all, a person's energy is limited, so don't be a stallion.
As bland as boiled water!
After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the protagonist is just a good old man like salted fish, and never meets the protagonist of Zhu Xian. The more I read the novel, the more I feel depressed. Can anyone tell me whether there will be a harem porn story or the protagonist's dark and murderous direction?
Dog licking article
Keeping a running account, the main character is too soft, not suitable for me to watch, bye bye
It is suggested that Tian Linger should be taken away, and Qi Hao's hypocritical pig should not be humiliated again. The original novel wanted to shoot that hypocritical guy to death when he looked at it.
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Official(55)Scraped 4d ago
I have to say a few words
As a protagonist with an infinite world to explore, I don't think it's necessary to not give the protagonist a bit of magnanimity, right? You can't accept Qingyun's favor without giving anything in return, and you can't take everything without being offline, right? How do you feel? Nowadays, it seems that only this kind of extremely selfish protagonist is liked by others! I write novels to feel more comfortable. In reality, I have a lot of helplessness and cannot be upright, so I hope I can get it in novels! You can't be too selfish in reality! Is it more selfish in the novel? I have to say something!
The writing about time travel is good, but can people be so holy?
Whether the author was stabbed intentionally or not, there is probably no way to settle this grudge easily. Being harmed by a fellow sect in public and the sect not dealing with it will not make people feel distraught.
I don't like this Lu Xueqi. The writing is too extreme and completely different from the cold and fairy-like Lu Xueqi in the original work. Author, you don't have to like Lu Xueqi, please don't write like this. After all, Zhu Xian is the first fairy novel I have read. It is a very good classic in my impression. In your hands, this book is very poorly written and the character description is too strange.
Stallion: Show mercy everywhere, never take away a cloud Harem: Just like the emperor's harem of three thousand beauties in ancient times Some people have some misunderstandings about this If you don't like it, don't criticize me, it's just my personal understanding.
It feels like the protagonist is reversing history
1. The protagonist's real-life experience leads the protagonist to think that science is technology, which is actually wrong! Science is a learning tool created by humans to understand the world. 2. Science and technology are two concepts. These two terms have determined the direction of development. The focus of science is on learning the word, and the focus of science and technology is on the word skill. 3. Learn mathematics, physics and chemistry well so that you can travel all over the world without fear. This is not just a talk. It also includes a series of cognitive and logical thinking methods. 4. Science is the foundation of technology, and technology is only a result of scientific development. The protagonist's subjective consciousness feels that the scientific system is not as good as the spiritual practice system. 5. If the protagonist's teacher in real life knew that the protagonist became like this after time travel, he would not dare to say that he is the protagonist's teacher. I also don't know if the protagonist has ever heard of material science? Biology? Energetics? To kill the protagonist, all you need is the protagonist's gene. It depends on whether you practice quickly or the bacteria mutate quickly. 6. The protagonist goes all over the world to learn other people's training techniques. Even if he doesn't learn the basic theories of a cultivation civilization, he starts from the basics to learn, understand and innovate. He relies on the protagonist's own subjective consciousness to guess the rationality of the techniques. 7. The way the protagonist develops determines that the protagonist's achievements will not be very high. When the protagonist falls into a (thinking disorder), no one can correct the mistake. The protagonist only needs to go one way to a dead end. The key is that no one can correct the mistake.
I hope the author writes a book and makes the protagonist more bloody.
The protagonist was innocently despised and provoked, then easily forgiven, and then beaten into a dog by the master. And then he was driven away. The uncle asked him for help. Because of the teacher's sister's magic, he accidentally scared the junior sister to tears. Then he was beaten up by the uncle and smiled bitterly. I'm really speechless.
Everything else is good, just don't be too arrogant. As a man, I can't stand it. As for Baguio, I won't say anything. As for the senior sister, why does the one who went to Qingyun have to find Lu Xueqi? This kind of temperament is impossible to accept even if a woman pursues a man. If she really accepts her man, then do it wholeheartedly. How many female protagonists are there? (Dongfang sisters, two, Lu Xueqi, Baguio, Ning Zhongze, five) Not to mention they are all sincere, I am a man, I really don't have that much energy, don't be a stud. What a man yearns for is one wife, two concubines, a wife (whether gentle or domineering, in short, he can establish authority at home, at least he can control the concubine), the concubine can be gentle, generous, naughty, but not a stud. One wife and two concubines is best. I am a man, but the stallion is really bad and the family cannot survive at all. Don't tell me that none of them are jealous, and each of them is gentle and generous. That's impossible. After all, a person's energy is limited, so don't be a stallion.
As bland as boiled water!
After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the protagonist is just a good old man like salted fish, and never meets the protagonist of Zhu Xian. The more I read the novel, the more I feel depressed. Can anyone tell me whether there will be a harem porn story or the protagonist's dark and murderous direction?
Dog licking article
Keeping a running account, the main character is too soft, not suitable for me to watch, bye bye
It is suggested that Tian Linger should be taken away, and Qi Hao's hypocritical pig should not be humiliated again. The original novel wanted to shoot that hypocritical guy to death when he looked at it.









