People Write Diaries in Douluo, and Bibi Dong Criticizes Them Like Crazy

LSPs, come out! Green Tang San steals the heroine.

I can't watch it anymore. This time travel is too messy and the relationship is too messy. I can't continue to talk about seeing three generations calling the same person husband, and the word is too awkward. It's not that I don't have a love mind, and the scenes in bed every day are not what a stallion is. I hope it can be changed. I can't read it after writing it like this. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to give a bad review. Yu Xiaogang's scenes in the early stage were too mindless from the beginning. Although I also hate this character, the writing is too stupid and it is not consistent. Don't say anything that makes me unable to stand it. Go read the original work. The completely unreasonable intelligence reduction will only make people lose the desire to read. One star for the initial plot and another star for the author's encouragement. The protagonist is a pure thoroughbred and a pervert.

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This male protagonist is so obscene, it makes me feel numb all over with embarrassment. He writes a diary in person and is so obscene but still pretends to be gentle. How did the author come up with this set of operations? You don't think it's very humorous and interesting, right? ? But a normal person would only feel that this is a crazy person who says one thing but does another, and is well-dressed. The system is just a channel to show you your wretched temperament, right? I especially like to describe the protagonist's wretched psychological activities. When I see a beautiful girl, I will complain in a long paragraph of hundreds of words. I wish I could drool like Brother Pig. I didn't expect that you also set the protagonist as a special soldier. Isn't this a pure street hooligan? ? 🤣🤣 The writing style is decent, but I like to fill it with water. Half of a chapter is a psychological description of the protagonist. Why don't you change the name to a memoir?

There are too many poisonous points, and the first protagonist has no explanation. He is a time traveler and knows the plot of Douluo Continent. Ah Yin has not verified the authenticity and believes it inexplicably. He is so empathetic. There is another titled Douluo who was scolded by an ordinary person and has no temper at all. It is so successful that it disgusts me. There is no reason for no one to watch it. What age is it and the writing is so disgusting?

Can you please stop calling everyone in the diary "wife" and "infatuated" every time? Yes, the heroine also believes everything after reading the diary, and there is no process at all!

It's a very rational analysis. First of all, there are many flaws in the setting of the novel. The outrageous male protagonist who traveled through Douluo and knew the timeline without a system wouldn't his first reaction be to look for fairy grass? And you need to learn the knowledge of soul beast identification, right? Not to mention that a 16-year-old who awakened his martial soul and still has full soul power, how can the Wuhun Temple not pay attention? The result is a direct description of the male protagonist who has been practicing in the mountains for more than ten years to become a titled Douluo... If there is no system, who will hunt the soul beast for you? You don't have Tang San's hidden weapons and skills... Secondly, the male protagonist is too wretched and devalued. He only thinks about women, and they often have sex for just one night or a few days. I am very curious as to why he can have sex for so long? And you do it every day. In your eyes, women are just used to drive piles? ? Do you understand moderation and respect? Then there is the issue of the timeline. You must know that in the original work, Qianrenxue was 10 years older than Tang San, and Bibi Dong gave birth to Qianrenxue when she was 26. Bibi Dong was 36 when Tang San was born. As a result, the male protagonist had his beard cut off when Bibi Dong was eighteen or nineteen years old, and Liu Erlong was about fourteen or fifteen years old, and A Yin was about the same. Even minors are not spared? Then Qianrenxue will be born within 3 years of the mission call card? ? Your timeline is several years ahead of schedule. Moreover, by the time Tang San is born, the male protagonist will be at least 50, and Ning Rongrong and others will be over 60 when they appear when they are twelve years old, so why wait for these girls? ? Do you want to be so perverted? Isn't it okay for the male protagonist to have a few sons and woo girls like Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing? Tang Yuehua Thousand Blades Snow Bibi Dongliu Erlong Bo Saixi Ayin Xiaowu mother and daughter are not enough? Then there is the issue of the acquaintance between Bo Saixi and Tang Chen Qiandaoliu. In the original work, during the years when Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang fell in love, Wuhun Palace sent troops to Poseidon Island to recruit them, but they were defeated and rushed back. Because of this, Qiandaoliu knew that there were strong men on Poseidon Island. He went with Tang Chen to Poseidon Island and met Bo Saixi. But you haven't attacked Poseidon Island yet? Are these people already acquainted? ? Do you think if you had known Qian Daoliu in advance, you would have agreed to Qian Xunji sending people to Poseidon Island? ? ? What's even more outrageous is that taking the Star Anise Ice Grass and Lie Huo Xingjiaoshu requires the power of Ice and Fire Liangyi to neutralize the eyes? Moreover, these two medicines do not increase soul power and must be taken immediately after picking. As a result, you took it back to Ah Yin and gave it to Ah Yin without using the ice and fire eyes to temper the body... It is even more outrageous that Cockscomb Phoenix Sunflower, a fairy herb that increases soul power and martial soul attributes, dares to absorb a ten thousand year soul ring at level 40 after you take it? ? ? Don't you know that the age of a soul ring is related to physical strength? Didn't you know that the ten thousand year soul ring has soul vibration? Tang San was mentally strong because of his pupil training, and he absorbed Ten Thousand Years from the Immortal Grass Tempering Body. How dare you let Liu Erlong absorb Ten Thousand Years? ? ? The fan should at least understand the settings before writing, right?

Bibi Dong didn't lead the male protagonist to wipe Yu Xiaogang's mouth. It was really disgusting to me. If I were the male protagonist, I would turn around and leave. Anyone can really see the woman they want wiping another man's mouth with a handkerchief. This man has suffered. If it were me, I would just turn around and leave. I am already disgusting. I have to avoid getting more disgusting in the future.

When writing about Qian Renxue, I uploaded pictures for everyone to see.

You idiot, what do you write about a titled Douluo? You idiot, how hypocritical are you to use a diary to write about it? Tan San is ten thousand times better than you, brother.