
Mysterious Resurrection to Eliminate Terror
by The Pawn Crossing The River Has No Way Out
About This Novel
Traveling to a mysteriously resurrected world, with no cheats but good luck, how should I survive in this world where hell has become empty? In the despair of knowing the future, Sun Fusheng could only move forward like a pawn crossing the river. It's my first time writing a book and I have no experience. The first paragraphs are a bit poor without experience, but after a few chapters it gets better.
What Readers Think
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Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
I started writing too fast
Although it was quite exciting at the beginning, it was really fast. I felt like I was going to die for no reason, and I really wanted a descendant, and He Yuelian agreed so happily. The plot felt okay, and it didn't overwhelm the protagonist.
All I can say is that I haven't understood it yet.
You just want to give birth to a child, and then die and become a ghost to protect the child. I am also drunk with your mentality. Is this the protagonist?
Although the rhythm is a bit choppy, it feels okay. Don't give up.
It was pretty good at first, but after writing the Douluo chapter, it was scrapped. Douluo is a famous idiot, and most of the books were scrapped as soon as they were written.
Damn, it's too fast. That's a rough explanation.
Update it quickly, one update a day is enough, who reads it?
Write slowly, be scary, don't be invincible right from the start, or you won't be able to write anymore! Go. . . .
Author, does your name appear too often? Dozens of times in one article🤗
Update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly
Do you have the ability to destroy Xiao Zhang's layout? Just go find He Yuelian
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Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
I started writing too fast
Although it was quite exciting at the beginning, it was really fast. I felt like I was going to die for no reason, and I really wanted a descendant, and He Yuelian agreed so happily. The plot felt okay, and it didn't overwhelm the protagonist.
All I can say is that I haven't understood it yet.
You just want to give birth to a child, and then die and become a ghost to protect the child. I am also drunk with your mentality. Is this the protagonist?
Although the rhythm is a bit choppy, it feels okay. Don't give up.
It was pretty good at first, but after writing the Douluo chapter, it was scrapped. Douluo is a famous idiot, and most of the books were scrapped as soon as they were written.
Damn, it's too fast. That's a rough explanation.
Update it quickly, one update a day is enough, who reads it?
Write slowly, be scary, don't be invincible right from the start, or you won't be able to write anymore! Go. . . .
Author, does your name appear too often? Dozens of times in one article🤗
Update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly
Do you have the ability to destroy Xiao Zhang's layout? Just go find He Yuelian









