Hunting in America: Starting Solitary in the Wilderness

Is the author here? I see that the comment area is polarized. Many people complained about the sudden collapse of the protagonist. I would like to express my personal opinion. I feel that this is indeed your problem, the author, because you, the author, have fallen into a misunderstanding. You think that if the protagonist does not eat food from space, it is not cheating. No, your protagonist is cheating if he uses space. You used space to carry stones when building a shelter. Time, this saves energy. After eating the seasoning in the space, the seasoning will also replenish energy. How can this not be considered cheating? You are already ahead of others, how can this collapse? Even if you are acting, if you want to avoid being criticized, don't use any space from beginning to end, not even a little bit of seasoning. Use your strength to win the championship. Space ability, even if you use it once, it will be considered cheating. Don't use it and it will collapse.

The writing is okay. The penultimate chapter is inexplicable. You suddenly start a confession of your life experience and then participate in this competition for the sake of your wife and children. There is no foreshadowing at all. Or you think that the previous chapter is foreshadowing, but you really can't see it. The transition is very inexplicable and the psychological state is not right. People with golden fingers will not say that they started selling miserably because of food shortages. You might as well write it in a novel and say it is purely for performance in front of the camera. I originally wanted to read it, but the chapter about selling out was really baffling.

Why isn't Mine Clearance in the introduction? After reading one chapter, I thought the male protagonist loved his wife so much, but I didn't expect there were multiple female protagonists.

Your theme is hunting, use three golden cards to create a nerve-wracking experience, and then use all kinds of inexplicable memory killing and intelligence-dampening operations. And then you still have multiple female protagonists, which makes it even more conflicting.

Chapters 1 and 2 can be completely deleted. Just start from Chapter 3. When the protagonist is reborn, just save your wife. No reader will go out of his way to see the protagonist's life before he was reborn. It's very discouraging from the beginning.

This is a good novel so far, please keep writing.

This star is reduced only for those chapters that are forcibly sensational, and those chapters are really disgusting to read.

I am looking for a new book from the author. Apart from being a bit literary and using too much force in some descriptions, there is nothing wrong with it. It suits my taste.

A very good book, the details are well described and the content is very rich.

Later on, Goldfinger only has an inconspicuous physical enhancement. In the first plot, he uses space to pull heavy objects, but later on he just lifts them by himself. I can't understand it without using my golden finger. I feel like I'm full.