Being in the Modeling Circle, My Information is Refreshed Every Day

The veteran author who came to Qidian for Enlightenment from outside the site does not talk about his previous works. This book has written something of his own. The protagonist is an indigenous person. It uses the prototype profession in the author's life: the modeling industry as the entry point. The writing is very convincing, very natural and smooth, especially in the content design of the intelligence system, the daily plot is very gripping. But when it came to the stage of choosing a model in Russia, the author's plot rhythm began to mess up, and a lot of details were lost. The transition from the career line to the entertainment industry was obviously not as smooth as in the early stage. The characters changed frequently, and the entrance and exit were completely driven by the information that appeared every day. It made people feel that the protagonist was in a hurry, and his career was a hammer and a stick, and women were welcome to accept anyone. It was too rushed! To be honest, from the early stage, it has been regarded as a bright work in the urban intelligence genre in recent years. In addition, the author's updates and outline setting are no problem. It is fully capable of writing a great masterpiece. However, the plot connection and rhythm are messed up. From the early stage, the daily life is all about intelligence, and there is no other life. It is a pity to become a tool of the system.

The information includes work contacts, social interactions, and leaks in all aspects of daily life (from brand-name jewelry to instant savings in bank life). It looks relatively ordinary, and the work and life are not exaggerated. The author even posts pictures himself (high praise in capital letters). After reading more than twenty chapters, there is no big poisonous point. The typos and typos in the wrong sentences are not correct enough. I heard that the author is now writing books full-time (I heard from the grapevine that the author had a related profession before). I suggest that the remaining typos and wrong sentences should be corrected based on the comments. There is also 95🌸 (Nannan Xiaoda), a good urban novel. The minor flaws do not affect reading, and the 1.6 Million words can be exploited.

This is a relatively large novel. It is written in the early stage of a relatively unfamiliar model circle. I am not familiar with it, and it has little sense of involvement, so it is difficult to evaluate. Things get better later, food and grass.

It was well written before arriving in Russia. It is a rare protagonist in the fashion industry. The author is an insider and writes well. It's also an intelligence flow, plus a lucky draw.