Immortal Cultivation: Start by Becoming a Disciple of the Beautiful Master

Immortal Cultivation: Start by Becoming a Disciple of the Beautiful Master

by Ode To The Bright Moon

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About This Novel

Lin Yun traveled through the world of immortality and became the eldest son of a wealthy family. He thought he would be able to live a peaceful life, but unexpectedly, his family encountered a crisis. In order to seek refuge, he chose to join the Tianyuan Sect. But as he is already familiar with the script, he knows that he is just an "NPC", a stepping stone to help other growth characters, a proper "passer-by" and "ordinary" three-no character. For this reason, he decided to change his fate against fate. ... Immortals caress my head, knot my hair and receive immortality: Become a disciple of the beautiful master Mu Zixi; The master looks good on the surface, but he has an unknown side; his father was killed by the elders of Tianyuan Sect a few years ago. In order to find out the truth, he worked hard and endured humiliation. Lin Yun: "Master, you don't want your identity to be discovered, right?" Senior sister Su Xiaoying; she was killed in her family when she was young, and was rescued by monsters in the mountains. She possesses the best Heavenly Spirit Root, a clear sword heart and a strong constitution, and later became a disciple of Mu Zixi. --In order to take revenge on the Tianyuan Sect, Mu Zixi viciously cultivated talented female disciples until they became injured Zhongyong. Lin Yun: "Senior sister, if you stick to my elbows, you'll have to do it!" --The trapped dragon turns into a dragon, steps forward, awakens the insects, rises!

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Book Friends 20230208544_de39mo ago

If the three views are not correct, the sword will go astray. Give up at the beginning.

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However39mo ago

Gentlemen, let me test the poison for you first.

Everyone, wait for me to come back. If I don't come back, run away. I bet my more than a thousand hours of reading time and say goodbye.

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Άδης_bb39mo ago

It's a bit hard to hold on! It's nice to have less protagonists!

The plot is too dragging, the plot of the core disciple competition is too dragging, a bit watery! There are also too few interesting things about the protagonist, and I can't bring them in. The master's character is a bit off-putting😑. The main reason is that the plot advances too slowly and brings too little interesting things to people. Your previous writing is a bit watered down😚, but it's still readable, after all, there are so few words now!

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Flower Prayer, Rice Leaves38mo ago

At the beginning, the protagonist unexpectedly comes to the world of cultivating immortals.

HO
However39mo ago

Generally a bit poisonous

Indeed, I usually give four stars plus 6 recommendation votes to show encouragement.

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You Who Like the Night Breeze39mo ago

writer of sensational headlines

The content is okay, but there are typos in some places.

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