Global Elf Live

If not change it to Lucario, you can also call it Kadian. It would be easier for Bird to explain why he spoke. And it's more human-shaped, so it should take a wider path.

Why did you get recommended? You, the eunuch, are a bit sloppy.

There's something wrong with the subject matter you chose. I haven't seen Elf before, and I must be pretty old when I've seen it, and the subject matter is too niche. There are a lot of things that those of us who haven't watched this anime don't know what they are. Choosing a book's subject matter is key, bro. I hope you can improve in the next one.

In fact, this is considered a recommendation, right?

At least make up for the flying problem. If you just cut it off, I feel bad.

I'm tired of reading those articles about system flow, rebirth, and invincibility. I've been reading them over and over again. You really think this one is quite fresh. I'm still learning, so I don't have the money. I'm sorry, but I can vote for you every day, and I'll give you some of them.

1. Some places may appear awkward and not feel very real. The novel is a novel and the reality is reality, but you must have a sense of substitution. We will always inadvertently bring reality into the novel, and the author is not writing an imaginary world. 2. The idea can be to combine the real city with the Pokémon world, but the problem comes again. The current heroine (possibly) is the granddaughter of Dr. Ohmu. Su Damu was also mentioned in the book review area, which is a bit funny. In addition, the Pokémon world is Japanese, and then we are a Chinese city. Emmm, it depends on how the author writes it. 3. The pacing problem is very fast. What we want to see is not the outline, but a summary of the current plot. We travel through the live broadcast, talk sluts, fight a lemon spirit that has been dehumanized to show off, survive in the wilderness, and be ridiculed by another lemon spirit that has been dehumanized. Although it is said to be a wilderness survival, it is just a title of wilderness survival. The purpose is to advance the main plot, get props, meet the mythical beasts, participate in the gorgeous competition, and then around People have become fools. This is not a problem that we think is stupid from a God's perspective. First of all, the live broadcast means slutty talk, and then a big boss appears inexplicably in the small live broadcast. I have a friend who does live broadcast. If someone doesn't happen to like his live broadcast, he may not make any money. 5 Hours, 12.5 Yuan. Due to the identity of the heroine, if the tycoon knows the identity of the heroine, then it will be fine. 3. The author's writing style is completely acceptable. In fact, many places do not use too many modifiers, such as jade hands, jade feet, and silver teeth. Simple descriptions are also fine and will not force the style down too much. On the contrary, others have repeated this kind of words a lot, which makes people feel that the author's words are no different from others, and he wants to complain. (Representing only personal opinions) Next is the plot that I imagined. This is originally a game played with the heroine. The live broadcast is particularly good. It is all an illusion. The rich man is also an illusion. I just want to find an opportunity to satisfy the vanity of the heroine so that she can go home. The live broadcast has a part of his grandfather. It is impossible for him to not know about the desert island incident. From the conversation, he not only knows the crown but also Lukia, and also knows the purpose of Tris coming here. Yes, I am just acting with them. The purpose is to let my granddaughter see the world. People have to grow up. Everyone can see the abnormality of Spearow. Even though he can parrot words and knows too much, he doesn't feel like an elf. If he is not specially trained to read the manuscript, what will happen? Dr. Omu may know that there is nothing he can do about his granddaughter, and he may want to talk to Spearow. Finally, I would like to make some small suggestions. Please use the official translation of the Pokémon name. Finally, let me say that Quasi-God refers to Pokémon with a race value of 600. Divine beasts refer to specific Pokémon. Most of the racial values are above 600, except for a small number, such as three silly birds, three silly dogs, three holy mushrooms, etc. Lucario is just rare and has the power of waveguide. At present, if the author's progress is still so fast, he will be gone if he does not finish 300 pages. If the outline can write 300 pages, that would be quite impressive. Necessary psychological description and environmental description can make you feel more comfortable when pretending to be cool, otherwise it would be particularly embarrassing.

Yes, the writing is good=￣ω￣= 水水水

Do you know where I can buy razor blades?

In fact, if you wait a little longer, you still have a chance to get recommended.