
Edge of Thoughts
by Escape
About This Novel
Just write something casually, I don't know when the next one will be. None of the above is an introduction to the work. The real introduction to the work is: these are just some martial arts stories.
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Official(4)Scraped 2d ago
I plan to rewrite the story of livelihood to the age of thirteen
[get angry]
If you have any ideas, please tell me.
[turn back]
Big, for
Great God, the book Ten Drops of Blood you once wrote was so unforgettable. I wonder why it is missing now? Has it been taken off the shelves? Also changed the name significantly? I think Dada's previous name sounded good. Of course, whatever name Dada is called sounds good. I feel that my current writing style is different from before. I hope that I will not forget my original intention! Love you! 😷
I want to say
First of all, it starts with a series of action fights. The scene changes perspective very quickly, and it has the flavor of traditional martial arts, but it is difficult to flow smoothly at first glance. It would be more fascinating if more tension and suspense were added. The action and language descriptions are good. I think the characters would be even better if they added some expressions and tone of voice.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 2d ago
I plan to rewrite the story of livelihood to the age of thirteen
[get angry]
If you have any ideas, please tell me.
[turn back]
Big, for
Great God, the book Ten Drops of Blood you once wrote was so unforgettable. I wonder why it is missing now? Has it been taken off the shelves? Also changed the name significantly? I think Dada's previous name sounded good. Of course, whatever name Dada is called sounds good. I feel that my current writing style is different from before. I hope that I will not forget my original intention! Love you! 😷
I want to say
First of all, it starts with a series of action fights. The scene changes perspective very quickly, and it has the flavor of traditional martial arts, but it is difficult to flow smoothly at first glance. It would be more fascinating if more tension and suspense were added. The action and language descriptions are good. I think the characters would be even better if they added some expressions and tone of voice.









