
Two Cities: Sons of Zaun
by White Horse Looks Like A Horse But Not A Horse
About This Novel
The door to the research room located in a remote corner of the college was pushed open, and Marcos, the police chief of Piltover, stepped in. This humble research laboratory belongs to a Zaunite, a great inventor who has become famous in recent years. His appearance is as glamorous as that of Jess Tallis in his prime. And Marcos knew the other side of him. "I heard Councilman Jess got you into trouble." At this time, this well-known inventor was bare-chested, hammering away at something. The bluebird tattoo on his back seemed to be moving with the contraction of his muscles, as if he was about to spread his wings and fly. "Yes, Mr. Kristol, he ordered me to investigate all suspicious transactions, and..." "So what are you doing here? Looking for me to support you?" "No... It's just Zu An's side..." \
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Official(9)Scraped 1mo ago
The writing is really good, my ideal fanfic, I like it very much
The beautiful love you spent a lot of time describing ended in mediocrity, wonderful but👹👹👹
It feels like it's the same with or without you. What do you do?
There are commonalities but no individuality. The protagonist is here but seems not to be there.
Come on, it's very well written, it's great
Could it be possible to return Wei after she comes out, and maybe write a bit more from the past perspective?
I shouldn't expect without permission😓
Um, every time I feel that there are expectations for a different plot, I go back to the original main plot, um😓 and it feels even worse than the original plot. I originally thought that the protagonist would show the wounds on his chest and his experiences, and then speak earnestly and emotionally, and persuade Wei rationally. When I saw this, I thought it would be a little different. As a result, you turned around and then went back to the original place. In the end, Vi impulsively went to steal Jace, and even the reason was the same. It's hard to understand, why did you lay so much groundwork? Can't you find something for Wei to do? Wei Yuan's plot is so outrageous. Most of the reason is because Wei has no time to spare. Does Wei have to steal Jace's things in order to develop? 😋 Also, I originally thought that after Fandel was caught on his own initiative, the matter would be settled. Fandel's surrender would give the protagonist a period of peaceful development. The protagonist can finally develop his own team. I started taking a different route than before. I was expecting another wave without permission, without any foreshadowing. Silko suddenly appeared and suddenly knocked the protagonist unconscious. In the original plot, it seemed that Fandel could still fight this monster, but the protagonist showed no resistance at all and was suddenly kicked unconscious. And Fander shouldn't be that far away from the protagonist, right? Just got caught, the problem here is really big, really sudden, and then forced into a plot that is no different from the original drama. And it seems to be even worse. 😋If you want to write the original path, don't show the feeling that you don't want to follow the original path. Okay, just twist and turn, turn left and right. Finally, I turned around and returned to the original road. After spending some enthusiasm, I ended up looking forward to it in vain😋. There are still some advantages, the protagonist's personality and dialogue still feel like the original drama. I feel that the author should understand what the readers want to see, and he also wants to write something different, but he just wants to go back to the original place. This is my personal understanding, don't comment if you don't like it😎😎
I've read Chapter 16 and the plot hasn't changed at all.
Why not watch anime instead of writing like this? What is the meaning of writing? What is a fan?
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Community(0)
Official(9)Scraped 1mo ago
The writing is really good, my ideal fanfic, I like it very much
The beautiful love you spent a lot of time describing ended in mediocrity, wonderful but👹👹👹
It feels like it's the same with or without you. What do you do?
There are commonalities but no individuality. The protagonist is here but seems not to be there.
Come on, it's very well written, it's great
Could it be possible to return Wei after she comes out, and maybe write a bit more from the past perspective?
I shouldn't expect without permission😓
Um, every time I feel that there are expectations for a different plot, I go back to the original main plot, um😓 and it feels even worse than the original plot. I originally thought that the protagonist would show the wounds on his chest and his experiences, and then speak earnestly and emotionally, and persuade Wei rationally. When I saw this, I thought it would be a little different. As a result, you turned around and then went back to the original place. In the end, Vi impulsively went to steal Jace, and even the reason was the same. It's hard to understand, why did you lay so much groundwork? Can't you find something for Wei to do? Wei Yuan's plot is so outrageous. Most of the reason is because Wei has no time to spare. Does Wei have to steal Jace's things in order to develop? 😋 Also, I originally thought that after Fandel was caught on his own initiative, the matter would be settled. Fandel's surrender would give the protagonist a period of peaceful development. The protagonist can finally develop his own team. I started taking a different route than before. I was expecting another wave without permission, without any foreshadowing. Silko suddenly appeared and suddenly knocked the protagonist unconscious. In the original plot, it seemed that Fandel could still fight this monster, but the protagonist showed no resistance at all and was suddenly kicked unconscious. And Fander shouldn't be that far away from the protagonist, right? Just got caught, the problem here is really big, really sudden, and then forced into a plot that is no different from the original drama. And it seems to be even worse. 😋If you want to write the original path, don't show the feeling that you don't want to follow the original path. Okay, just twist and turn, turn left and right. Finally, I turned around and returned to the original road. After spending some enthusiasm, I ended up looking forward to it in vain😋. There are still some advantages, the protagonist's personality and dialogue still feel like the original drama. I feel that the author should understand what the readers want to see, and he also wants to write something different, but he just wants to go back to the original place. This is my personal understanding, don't comment if you don't like it😎😎
I've read Chapter 16 and the plot hasn't changed at all.
Why not watch anime instead of writing like this? What is the meaning of writing? What is a fan?










