Age of Empires: Through the Middle Ages

I have always had a conflict when writing European history. I don't know whether it is better to write with magic or without magic! Once you bring magic, it will be difficult for ordinary people to have a chance to rise. Without magic, I am afraid that ordinary people will rebel successfully.

The punctuation marks are so tiring to read. After reading a paragraph, I still have to think about whether there are any mistakes in sentence segmentation...

I have to give full marks to the introduction, it all depends on the author's skills.

This book was so hard to read. Wording in short sentences is very messy

This one is pretty good. I wrote a novel when I was bored. The protagonist travels through the last 180 years of the Eastern Han Dynasty and becomes a clan member of the Han Dynasty. He thinks that he cannot save this chaotic era and plans to run away. Before running away, he defrauded Liu Hong of his money. After getting the money, he strongly demanded that the landlords pay food, and then took hundreds of thousands of people by boat to Europe. After developing for decades, he came back and found Boss Cao. By the way, he said to Boss Cao, you see the world is so big, why do you only focus on this little land. It's actually a waste of time when I write it down. The 470,000-word manuscript is just a waste in my hands. I won't make much money if I publish it, which wastes my time.