
The Sword Drinks the Horse
by Shi Mu Zhao
About This Novel
What are rivers and lakes? The moment Yan Shao stepped out of his house with his sword, everything he looked at and his heart turned to were rivers and lakes.
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Official(3)Scraped 14d ago
A little sense of reading
From the first six chapters, it can be seen that the writing style is relatively smooth and the wording does not make people skip the scene. The shortcomings are that the sense of plot substitution is not strong and there are few descriptions of the environment. It cannot create the tense atmosphere of the confrontation between the two armies. Also, the protagonist of these chapters, Tang Da Scar, is too much like a puppet. If there are more details to describe his reputation, and the words are more refined, the effect will be better.
Shu Huang collected a wave of support for you.
Looking forward to the next new plot, come on!
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 14d ago
A little sense of reading
From the first six chapters, it can be seen that the writing style is relatively smooth and the wording does not make people skip the scene. The shortcomings are that the sense of plot substitution is not strong and there are few descriptions of the environment. It cannot create the tense atmosphere of the confrontation between the two armies. Also, the protagonist of these chapters, Tang Da Scar, is too much like a puppet. If there are more details to describe his reputation, and the words are more refined, the effect will be better.
Shu Huang collected a wave of support for you.
Looking forward to the next new plot, come on!









