Meet the Dragon King

Compared with the previous martial arts, the combat power value and world view have been greatly enlarged. It is very similar to the ordinary martial arts in the early stage, which will be medium and high martial arts in the middle stage, and then directly enter the high martial arts of the immortals and gods in the later stage, or even something like the Supreme Lord. The difference between the early stage, middle stage and the later stage is not the same at all. From a world view point of view, the concept is quite good. Let's talk about the characters and plots. I have read 40 chapters so far. To be honest, I have been reading the book for more than ten years and I hate the Riddler a little. After all, I don't write suspense-type articles specifically, so there is no need to write so much about the Riddler. The second thing is when the protagonist awakens his memory. If you are not sure about this at the beginning of the chapter, it is best to mention it at the beginning, otherwise at least more than half of the people will leave... After all, your opening scenario is that the soul of a normal modern adult travels through the body of a baby. Even if you assume that the body of a baby a few years ago cannot support the soul of an adult, you can just talk about the memory, and then it is engraved in the body to instinctively have a good impression of the so-called mother. But after reading Chapter 40, it seems that the memory has been awakened very early. At least from a certain description, it is shown that because of the memory of the past life, I have been studying very hard and studying very hard. I just don't know why I made my "mother" angry at the age of 9, and then there was the Riddler, and the description of incomplete memory... And then various other modern novels, games and other memories were interspersed. If according to the setting, even if you were only 20 years old before time travel, you have lived here for more than ten years, and you are close to 40 years old. Then the obsession with the so-called "mother" described in the text seems to be affected by the "newspaper ghost" in the mysterious resurgence worldview. Every time I see this description, I am very embarrassed... The introduction is obviously about a serious time travel, but the writing style is close to the writing style of martial arts novels from decades ago. It has a feeling of sitting and forgetting, but it just feels like it is caused by the inability to control it, not that works of the sitting and forgetting type are specifically written about this feeling, so it makes people very uncomfortable. Taken together, what I wrote in the early stage is true and it is a bit confusing. I am also 30 years old and have been reading books for more than ten years. If I read a cool article, I will read it without thinking about it. The author does not want to write that kind of pure cool article. He needs to add some logic and inner things, but if it is not written well, it will make people feel uncomfortable, and then he keeps asking the Riddler... To be honest, in the martial arts level of the ordinary world view, don't engage in the kind of thing where a time traveler has survived in this world for more than ten years and still has a child's mentality. There is no need for so many level events that are beyond the level of the martial arts world view in the early stage. It also makes the reader aware, and the protagonist is not aware. Otherwise, it would be difficult for normal humans to understand the author's mental state. After all, you have traveled through at least 20 years of age. You can still understand that you have not awakened your memory as a baby. When you awaken your memory at the age of 5.6, The mother in normal logic is only 24.5 Years old according to the martial arts worldview. My readers rationally told me that the protagonist's situation is most likely caused by cognitive problems, such as skills such as thinking stamps... But the protagonist cannot notice it, and describes it too much, which can easily cause drama. When this kind of problem occurs at a certain level, it is better to spend some chapters to solve it. The period of free chapters is the easiest period to attract traffic. This kind of writing method will drive away a lot of people.

As we all know, ten words can equal a comment.

What is revealed between the lines is: I want hydrology.

I can't sleep at night. I can't sleep at night.

It feels okay, but the subject matter is a bit too open