
The Witch Collects the Scent
by You Wish
About This Novel
Witches are special women who were chosen by the gods of the abyss because they endured extreme pain. The greater the pain they endure, the more terrifying the supernatural power they can draw upon. But his character tends to become more twisted, vicious and cruel, and he is a time bomb lurking in modern society and human civilization. In order to protect the safety of mankind, these witches must be eliminated. --------"But what if you can't defeat the witch?" "Retreat temporarily first, and then seek support from the headquarters." "What if you can't escape?" "Deal with the opponent, try not to anger her, and focus on protecting yourself." "Then what if the witch wants you to fall in love with her, otherwise she will destroy the world?" "... I will tell her to calm down."
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Official(13)Scraped 11d ago
If you don't know how to write, don't write randomly. It means nothing.
I'm dizzy. There are too many political correctness and office politics, and they still reflect reality every day. They are all half-baked. Most of them are from British movies. What you have here is a fantasy novel with special abilities. Also, it's almost 400,000 words. Has my sister said a few words?
What do you want to describe? Why are people so miserable? What is the reason? It seems that the world view is not fully explained, and then it becomes miserable I can't even figure out why everyone is so miserable one by one. But logically speaking, this worldview shouldn't be like this, even if the goal is miserable, it's wrong. Ridiculous, it seems to be full of enthusiasm, but in fact in recent years It's much more full than him, so it's nothing. Such ridicule is meaningless, because Seriously, I don't feel invested yet. Too far away, or too close, obviously wants to adjust reality, but it is not realistic at all (not much), and the world view is not too complete. Why is it so miserable? Is it because it is weird? It doesn't feel like
Too much political establishment, serious fragmentation, and failure to understand the audience
There is too much about building politics, and under the guise of love stories, it is full of office literature. It is seriously fragmented and the audience is not clear. And the sister who is an important character has basically no plot.
The protagonist is so weird
Although he is a time-traveler, he seems to be more indigenous than the natives. He does not look like a time-traveler at all. The natives are more open-minded than him. The protagonist is like a combination of a righteous partner and a sister-in-law. He is quite similar to Emiya Shirou, but he is not lewd at all. The more he reads, the weirder he becomes. This book looks quite depressing. The protagonist becomes more depressive and the more he reads, the more uncomfortable he becomes. It is not clear what era the protagonist came through.
The content is seriously inconsistent with the title of the book.
I've been reading for a long time, but I haven't seen any published articles yet. Basically, it's a Cthulhu story about living a good life with good people and a good place + daily sensationalism about rebirth in the harem + the birth of a witch plus confrontation. I didn't see anything that I fell in love with. But that's not the point. The point is that you said at the beginning that you had to trade fire with the Ocean God for the sake of your sister, and then you said that you had to stand up for the world? What are you writing about?
I want to read the extras of this book~
I want to read the extras of this book I want to read the extras of this book
I haven't finished writing the extras for the previous book yet.
I haven't finished writing the extras for the previous book yet. I haven't finished writing the extras for the previous book yet.
It feels good, come on, pig!
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Official(13)Scraped 11d ago
If you don't know how to write, don't write randomly. It means nothing.
I'm dizzy. There are too many political correctness and office politics, and they still reflect reality every day. They are all half-baked. Most of them are from British movies. What you have here is a fantasy novel with special abilities. Also, it's almost 400,000 words. Has my sister said a few words?
What do you want to describe? Why are people so miserable? What is the reason? It seems that the world view is not fully explained, and then it becomes miserable I can't even figure out why everyone is so miserable one by one. But logically speaking, this worldview shouldn't be like this, even if the goal is miserable, it's wrong. Ridiculous, it seems to be full of enthusiasm, but in fact in recent years It's much more full than him, so it's nothing. Such ridicule is meaningless, because Seriously, I don't feel invested yet. Too far away, or too close, obviously wants to adjust reality, but it is not realistic at all (not much), and the world view is not too complete. Why is it so miserable? Is it because it is weird? It doesn't feel like
Too much political establishment, serious fragmentation, and failure to understand the audience
There is too much about building politics, and under the guise of love stories, it is full of office literature. It is seriously fragmented and the audience is not clear. And the sister who is an important character has basically no plot.
The protagonist is so weird
Although he is a time-traveler, he seems to be more indigenous than the natives. He does not look like a time-traveler at all. The natives are more open-minded than him. The protagonist is like a combination of a righteous partner and a sister-in-law. He is quite similar to Emiya Shirou, but he is not lewd at all. The more he reads, the weirder he becomes. This book looks quite depressing. The protagonist becomes more depressive and the more he reads, the more uncomfortable he becomes. It is not clear what era the protagonist came through.
The content is seriously inconsistent with the title of the book.
I've been reading for a long time, but I haven't seen any published articles yet. Basically, it's a Cthulhu story about living a good life with good people and a good place + daily sensationalism about rebirth in the harem + the birth of a witch plus confrontation. I didn't see anything that I fell in love with. But that's not the point. The point is that you said at the beginning that you had to trade fire with the Ocean God for the sake of your sister, and then you said that you had to stand up for the world? What are you writing about?
I want to read the extras of this book~
I want to read the extras of this book I want to read the extras of this book
I haven't finished writing the extras for the previous book yet.
I haven't finished writing the extras for the previous book yet. I haven't finished writing the extras for the previous book yet.
It feels good, come on, pig!
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You 🐷's new book, I haven't started reading it yet, this author has a habit of starting high and going low at the end and I can't stand it anymore!




[Impression score: 80 points] [Tag: Women chasing men] [Introduction: A modern fantasy novel in the mysterious style of Cthulhu, a light novel with a plot of a woman chasing a man. In the setting of this book, the witch is a special woman who was selected by the God of the Abyss because she endured pain and torture, and possesses "divine nature". The male protagonist is a "beautiful, strong and miserable" template, and his sick and weak sister at home serves as a guide to promote the development of the male protagonist's plot. In the first thirty chapters of the book, two female protagonists who are suspected of being witches appear. As witches who feel the pain due to the death of the male protagonist, they are reborn to stage a story of a woman chasing a man. The author's writing is delicate, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and the characters he portrays are not inconsistent. Although the plot is a bit cliche and the foreshadowing arrangements are a bit stiff, the interesting story content makes readers want to read on. ]



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