Dou Po: My Daughter Came Down from the Mountain and Boasted That I Was the Peerless Dou Emperor

The theme of this book is quite good. I enjoyed reading the first few chapters, but I was really speechless at the end. First of all, this is a fanfic, but I didn't even understand the setting of the original book. First of all, there was the issue of Dou Emperor's bloodline. The daughter of Dou Emperor must at least be a Dou Sage at birth (don't say why there is such a thing) There was a Dou Emperor in our ancestors, but he was a rubbish Fighter. That's because after several generations of dilution, almost no one has the Dou Emperor bloodline anymore.) As a result, Qi Yaner showed up with the fifth level of Dou Qi when she appeared. This kind of talent is indeed awesome in the Jiama Empire, but he said that his father was a Dou Emperor! Then there is the issue of intelligence reduction. The entire Gama Empire may only know how many existences are above the Dou Emperor but the Yunlan Sect. After all, their ancestors came from Dou Zun, and then you, a Wutan City, actually know about the Dou Emperor? Next, a little girl of seven or eight years old took out a sixth-grade elixir or something, and then no one suspected it, and no one snatched it away. She just praised her awesomeness, her father was awesome, this book is a pure and stupid book about the daughter looking for a harem on her father's behalf, and then there are the main issues and other issues. After reading for so long, I don't know who is the main one. I started writing about the protagonist's daughter, but ended up writing more than a dozen pictures of her father and Yun Yun in the middle. Then the protagonist's daughter also followed the route of the original work, first going to Wutan City, then to the desert, and then to Canaan College. There was nothing new at all. Finally, there was the problem of the protagonist. The protagonist's strength improved too slowly. Outside, her daughter urged her to become the Dou Emperor. As a result, he is in a higher realm than her daughter. He was even restricted to be within five kilometers. And then it seems that he will be asked to go to Canaan College later. I don't understand. What should I do if he can only be within five kilometers? The protagonist, a scumbag of a fighter, went to watch a fight between Dou Emperors. At least there were medicines to help with inflammation, which could temporarily improve his strength. However, the protagonist's system could only be used by his daughter. Even after the protagonist lived in a cave for a few days, he just missed his daughter when he came out. I was really convinced. There are still many problems, so I won't go into details. In short, this book magically changes the plot of the original work. According to this book, the original Nalan Yanran may have been cheated by dozens of people, and then it does not adhere to the original setting. If you change it a little, you will understand that what you have changed is basically another setting. The whole book is basically a daughter pretending to brag about her father's brainless pleasure. Everyone has been reduced to intelligence. It seems to me that except for the daughter, even the protagonist has been reduced to intelligence. Then there is the issue of strength. The protagonist and his daughter have no specific strength improvement process. The daughter just casually upgrades several levels a day, and the protagonist is stupid because the setting is one level higher than him. The daughter was born so fast in one day, why did she reach fifth level after seven years? Even if the fighting spirit breaks through and the fighter has to awaken his attributes, Xiao Yan in the original book has the fire attribute, with a hint of wood attribute. In this book, when the protagonist's daughter was fighting, she didn't say any attributes, and the protagonist didn't say anything either. Oh, forget it, let's not talk about it anymore, it's all shortcomings. I've said so much, but I haven't finished yet, so that's it. I originally wanted to give it a three-star rating, but the more I talked about it, the more it felt like rubbish. One star is fine.

Is this simply not true? Dou Emperor has blood. His father is Dou Emperor. Is it possible that his daughter is at least a Dou Saint? Referring to Xiao Xiao, Xiao Yan became the Fighting Emperor, and Xiao Xiao directly became the Nine-Star Fighting Saint.

This kind of plot in other worlds is easy to say, but it is really difficult to write this kind of plot about fighting against the Dou Emperor's bloodline. If the male protagonist is a Dou Emperor, his daughter will be born as a Dou Saint, and fighting spirit and other things are simply impossible. Moreover, Dou Di had gone off grains for a long time, but her daughter still cooked for him? This kind of plot is about a daughter's adventure. No matter what, the male protagonist is indeed invincible, but he just doesn't know it. Everything in the house is imperial weapons and immortal weapons, and the animals he raises are all kinds of powerful demon emperors. So what did you write? The male protagonist is only one level older than his daughter, so why can't he be too far away from home? It's just a seclusion in the mountains, but it's still near Qingshan Town...

I guess I don't want to write it anymore. Otherwise, according to the previous auction, which sold 100 chapters, this book will be at least twice the size of the original. Her character has long since collapsed. She did two things: find her mother and avenge her. As a result, her enemy hasn't even touched a finger. She is still living a happy life, and she is not invincible. She can even be crushed to death with just a move of her fingers. Moreover, it's not that the opponent's connections are incredible. The heroine can also crush the opponent in terms of connections, even the opponent's boss. , The other party's biggest supporter is the heroine's own people, but if she doesn't move him, she just wants the other party to live well. After three minutes of heat, she completely forgets about it, and just thinks about how she can have fun. When she thinks about having fun, she previously attached great importance to family ties and looked like she must find her mother. It looks like she is pretending.

The plot is a bit too intellectual. In the original novel, Nalan Yanran was only fifteen years old when she came to break off the engagement. She has a seven-year-old daughter? Who would believe it if I tell it? Could the author use some brains when conceiving the plot?

Nothing to see, just like a fool,

What kind of rubbish ending is like a **

They had an affair more than ten years ago, and a year later they had a baby girl, who turned out to be only 7 years old. So where did the remaining two years go?

Who is Yan'er's mother? I hope it's Luo Li in The Great Master

Xun'er's character is broken. Xun'er's character is the kind of mindless licking character, but here he actually becomes self-aware. This is outrageous. What's the difference between this and that inflatable thing that suddenly becomes self-aware? ?