My Virtual Game

Ten years ago in May, a person liked me and he married a young and beautiful girlfriend. In May last year, another person liked me and he won 5 million. In May of this year, people who liked me all married young and beautiful girls and won 5 million on their wedding day. Don't say I don't mean enough, I've already put it here

Such a beautiful product has such a low rating. There is a shady story behind it.

The character of the protagonist makes me very unhappy. He can't walk when he sees a woman. He has a golden finger but can't develop. I feel so useless. There are many other places that are not good, so I won't go into them👎

The author needs to hold on, it's better to have fewer eunuchs...

You don't even know the existence of Gongsun Wan'er. Give your own world back and dominate it, piggy🙃🙃

Can it be more compact? The author is great! 🤥

The author is great. Your book is invincible from the beginning. What you need to develop your own game is to control the overall situation. Gongsun Wan'er's trap is a bit awkward. Pig's feet don't know, it's understandable. The system doesn't even know what it is, do you want to write a virus?

Virtual reality can turn any virtual thing into reality. This ability is very good😊

You can't walk when you see a beautiful woman. Why don't you want as much as you want when you become awesome? Your mental power imprints are sent to people you are familiar with first, so you are not afraid of being traced? If I give it out randomly in the early stage and rely on luck to get it, I'll see what you do when you get caught.

I found this novel from reviews of other novels. At the beginning, I liked it very much, and the author's arrangement of the virtual world was quite reasonable. However, in the middle period, there were huge loopholes in the protagonist's character. First, the protagonist's diaosi mentality has not changed much. In his handling of a series of things, he hesitates or even hesitates. Second, there is too much nonsense, and when explaining things, it is a bit verbose. This is also one of the reasons for problem one. Third, forced explanation. In the shaping of the protagonist's character, a lot of unnecessary explanations are made, which is slightly deliberate. On the contrary, the evaluation of the protagonist's character in the eyes of readers decreases. In addition to character problems, the author's position in the novel is also blurred. It turns out that this novel is mainly based on a virtual world, but the author has inserted a lot of real-world foreshadowing into it. Coupled with the setting of the protagonist, readers can basically guess the ending. At the same time, the shortcomings of the protagonist's character also make the protagonist open his golden fingers wildly, and it is the kind of one person who can achieve enlightenment and chickens and dogs ascend to heaven. But in my opinion, this form makes me a little disgusting. Because this dilutes the protagonist and makes people feel that without this adventure, the protagonist is a loser. Overall, as the story of this novel progresses, the holes start to increase. But for now, Shuhuang can still be read.