Lord's Secret World
by Mu Yiguang
About This Novel
In the aura of decay, in the fog that persists all year round, who is staring at the ancient continent in the abyss of the past - the dilapidated territory, crazy cultists, countless weird "abnormal" events, and the special professional career system... Land deeds, farming, steam, Warcraft; weirdness, curses, evil gods and endless "abnormal" events. This is the history of a lord's fortune in building a territory, and it is also a "knight" legend... The story begins in a dilapidated violet territory, and may end there for the rest of his life; until Chen Shu encounters an "abnormal" incident of losing his face - No.: Old Days 2334-[Crow's Realm]... (Originally I wanted to write a cool article, but after thinking about it, I decided to calm down and write slowly. The story needs to be told slowly. People's hearts are too impetuous nowadays.)
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Official(33)Scraped 6d ago
Good start, but weak follow-up
At the beginning, although the protagonist was like a boss in Avril years ago, he changed his mind after a few chapters. The protagonist also has enough dignity in front of his subordinates, which is much better than those silly novels where he wants to be a master and be friends with his subordinates. The setting and plot are also brilliant. Later, the style changed drastically. The main character, Mary Sue, appeared on the body. First, the protagonist Mary Sue's spirit was released, and the Warcraft was inexplicably willing to look after the protagonist's house. Then, the powerful goblin did not rob the protagonist. The protagonist also showed the spirit of the Virgin and asked the goblin whether he was afraid of losing his life by selling elves. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have been killed long ago. Afterwards, the Virgin possessed her again. Just because of her compassion, the prodigal protagonist spent the savings of several generations in the territory to buy an elf and let her go. Of course, under the halo of the protagonist Mary Sue, the elf would definitely not run away. The subsequent plot is also full of sensationalism and death. I guess the author is a woman, Mary Sue + Madonna + Sensation + Literary Youth, a typical female novel
medieval background
As a lord, the protagonist was slapped by his fiancée. Can you believe that this fiancée is also the adopted daughter of the protagonist's father, that is, a child bride?
As lord of the west,
As a lord in the West, living like a dog is a waste. He is even more rubbish than the lord before time travel.
Where did the protagonist travel through time?
If you are a modern person, it is impossible not to have read Andersen's fairy tales and Grimm's fairy tales.
It's so bloody written, and it's trying to flirt, it's so disgusting, TMD,
It's disgusting, stupid. If you don't know how to write, don't write so much. It makes me sick when I read it.
I think it's very beautiful
I think the world view and power system are very good!
The author gives you some advice
This is the anomaly in you. Don't get dizzy reading it in English. Just express it in words. Although the novel you wrote has some Western elements, we readers are not Westerners. OK
The protagonist is kind
I prefer, neither evil nor good, Zhongwen
I feel like the protagonist's name should be changed. The narrator's name is Chen Shu. After time travel, he is called John. His name before time travel is discarded.
Where is the author?
Why is it not updated? Why is it not updated?
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Official(33)Scraped 6d ago
Good start, but weak follow-up
At the beginning, although the protagonist was like a boss in Avril years ago, he changed his mind after a few chapters. The protagonist also has enough dignity in front of his subordinates, which is much better than those silly novels where he wants to be a master and be friends with his subordinates. The setting and plot are also brilliant. Later, the style changed drastically. The main character, Mary Sue, appeared on the body. First, the protagonist Mary Sue's spirit was released, and the Warcraft was inexplicably willing to look after the protagonist's house. Then, the powerful goblin did not rob the protagonist. The protagonist also showed the spirit of the Virgin and asked the goblin whether he was afraid of losing his life by selling elves. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have been killed long ago. Afterwards, the Virgin possessed her again. Just because of her compassion, the prodigal protagonist spent the savings of several generations in the territory to buy an elf and let her go. Of course, under the halo of the protagonist Mary Sue, the elf would definitely not run away. The subsequent plot is also full of sensationalism and death. I guess the author is a woman, Mary Sue + Madonna + Sensation + Literary Youth, a typical female novel
medieval background
As a lord, the protagonist was slapped by his fiancée. Can you believe that this fiancée is also the adopted daughter of the protagonist's father, that is, a child bride?
As lord of the west,
As a lord in the West, living like a dog is a waste. He is even more rubbish than the lord before time travel.
Where did the protagonist travel through time?
If you are a modern person, it is impossible not to have read Andersen's fairy tales and Grimm's fairy tales.
It's so bloody written, and it's trying to flirt, it's so disgusting, TMD,
It's disgusting, stupid. If you don't know how to write, don't write so much. It makes me sick when I read it.
I think it's very beautiful
I think the world view and power system are very good!
The author gives you some advice
This is the anomaly in you. Don't get dizzy reading it in English. Just express it in words. Although the novel you wrote has some Western elements, we readers are not Westerners. OK
The protagonist is kind
I prefer, neither evil nor good, Zhongwen
I feel like the protagonist's name should be changed. The narrator's name is Chen Shu. After time travel, he is called John. His name before time travel is discarded.
Where is the author?
Why is it not updated? Why is it not updated?
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