The Dark Sun Hangs High
by Doctor Zero
About This Novel
The miners are hammering away in the crystallized mines that never see the light of day. Orders from the Council of Mages are passed back and forth between the kingdoms. The emerging steam ordnance became popular at an alarming rate. Even the giant-eared goblins, who had always been bold, became nervous. In this world he created with his own hands, Sugar Ernst was at a loss. He didn't know too many details. But he knew that the black sun, symbolizing destruction and a new era, was about to come. ............ PS: A lot of fantasy, a little steampunk, a dash of Dioctulu, and an imaginary world war (fog). Hope you all like it~
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Is the author not updated? Or is it for other reasons?
In the early stage, you can go all the way to the family underground. But it won't work from the beginning of the campaign. The magic has been overly weakened. So far, I can't see the use of pig's feet. To be honest, if you are writing about the changes of the great era, it is better to just write about the indigenous pig's feet. (Personal understanding) After all, we will have higher expectations for time travellers.
There is no graminess, and the protagonist is getting more and more like a virgin. There are a lot of little bits and pieces that make people dislike it.
After reading two hundred chapters, I feel like it has nothing to do with Cthulhu. And the pace is ridiculously slow, no wonder the results are not good. Moreover, it is very poisonous to go red under the Ke background. . . The Madonna disease started to appear out of nowhere, and there are a lot of problems with the setting. The Cthulhu worldview should be pseudo-science, and knowledge can lead to madness. Your technology has a restraining effect on the followers of the evil god and is mutually exclusive. It is very OOC. I am writing this with half a bottle of water in the summer. Forget about the Cthulhu label. Chun Chun is just selling sheep heads and selling dog meat to make some kind of public property revolution in another world. In addition, there are a bunch of brain can loopholes that cannot be looked at carefully. Just after he finished talking about swallowing up the memories of the lake-level magic association and the memories of the magicians, dozens of chapters later, in chapter 294, he said that he was still at the apprentice level in terms of orthodox legal attainments. There are also inexplicable and bloody sensationalism, which is too silent. . . I've wasted my writing skills, what's the point of writing?
Such a good book, why are so few people reading it?
An illegitimate son didn't get any benefits. Instead, he went to the battlefield after becoming the heir of the family, and he had been living in a city of a hostile country. Why did he start to poison for no reason? He also said that he could integrate into the country by going to the battlefield. There was no benefit at all. He just relied on his blood to integrate into the country.
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Generally speaking, it's okay, but your combat power is already at the middle of the plot, and you can't beat the protagonist. You still know the plot.
It looks okay, why is there no one in the comment section?
There are only thirteen articles in total. The back part is pretty cool. I quite like the writing style.
The last update was in May
It's already July 12th and there's still no update. Is it unfinished?
Quick update
Hurry! Update soon! ! ! Can you write faster?
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Official(15)Scraped 6d ago
Is the author not updated? Or is it for other reasons?
In the early stage, you can go all the way to the family underground. But it won't work from the beginning of the campaign. The magic has been overly weakened. So far, I can't see the use of pig's feet. To be honest, if you are writing about the changes of the great era, it is better to just write about the indigenous pig's feet. (Personal understanding) After all, we will have higher expectations for time travellers.
There is no graminess, and the protagonist is getting more and more like a virgin. There are a lot of little bits and pieces that make people dislike it.
After reading two hundred chapters, I feel like it has nothing to do with Cthulhu. And the pace is ridiculously slow, no wonder the results are not good. Moreover, it is very poisonous to go red under the Ke background. . . The Madonna disease started to appear out of nowhere, and there are a lot of problems with the setting. The Cthulhu worldview should be pseudo-science, and knowledge can lead to madness. Your technology has a restraining effect on the followers of the evil god and is mutually exclusive. It is very OOC. I am writing this with half a bottle of water in the summer. Forget about the Cthulhu label. Chun Chun is just selling sheep heads and selling dog meat to make some kind of public property revolution in another world. In addition, there are a bunch of brain can loopholes that cannot be looked at carefully. Just after he finished talking about swallowing up the memories of the lake-level magic association and the memories of the magicians, dozens of chapters later, in chapter 294, he said that he was still at the apprentice level in terms of orthodox legal attainments. There are also inexplicable and bloody sensationalism, which is too silent. . . I've wasted my writing skills, what's the point of writing?
Such a good book, why are so few people reading it?
An illegitimate son didn't get any benefits. Instead, he went to the battlefield after becoming the heir of the family, and he had been living in a city of a hostile country. Why did he start to poison for no reason? He also said that he could integrate into the country by going to the battlefield. There was no benefit at all. He just relied on his blood to integrate into the country.
Sign in
Lose a wave of experience
Generally speaking, it's okay, but your combat power is already at the middle of the plot, and you can't beat the protagonist. You still know the plot.
It looks okay, why is there no one in the comment section?
There are only thirteen articles in total. The back part is pretty cool. I quite like the writing style.
The last update was in May
It's already July 12th and there's still no update. Is it unfinished?
Quick update
Hurry! Update soon! ! ! Can you write faster?
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Doctor Zero's works are as good as ever in dark and depressing world views and storylines that are not too depressing to accept. Although the plot is a bit trivial and bloated, and some of the twists are not very good, overall the sense of epic fantasy is still very strong. My personal rating is seven points and three points.
Surprisingly good
It looks pretty good now
Western fantasy + some restraints. The protagonist travels to a game world designed by himself, but the time is a hundred years ago in the background. Countries, ethnic groups, steam and magic, beliefs, old gods and dark abyss... Starting from the prelude of Salem City, witness and participate in the wave of world change. The author's writing style is still good. The paragraph descriptions and appropriate metaphors are very visual. The setting is also good. Corresponding to the writing style, the protagonist's personality is relatively calm and calm. However, I feel that the pace is a bit slow, and it takes a long time to write a million words. . Also, the main plot of the game that the protagonist is familiar with is set two hundred years later, and I don't know if it will be continued. I am quite looking forward to the current progress of the plot. It has probably reached a critical node, so I will give it a try...
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