
Comprehensive Martial Arts: a Fire Dragon Ball at the Beginning
by Pink Durian
About This Novel
Chu Wanxin traveled to a familiar yet unfamiliar world of martial arts, only to find that this world was far more exciting than what he knew in his previous life. As soon as he woke up, he discovered that there was a fire dragon ball in his body, thus starting his legendary life!
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Official(55)Scraped 18d ago
The protagonist has a loser mentality, and the author deliberately suppresses the protagonist's level
Practicing the Dragon Divine Art for the first time can directly break the eight extraordinary meridians and reach the Qi Sea state. However, the author found a bunch of reasons to be afraid of affecting his foundation and why he should aspire to the top of martial arts. What a garbage protagonist. Did you forget that you still have enemies Chu Tianxing and Zhu Di? If you don't improve your strength as soon as possible, kill Chu Tianxing and Zhu Di, kill Zhu Di's son and grandson and rebel against him, and become the emperor, but he thinks about the peak of martial arts. What a garbage protagonist.
I said in the early stage that I should be patient, but suddenly I came to an auction, and it felt like a novel from another world 15 years ago. The protagonist pretended to be cool and attracted girls, but I didn't know why he was so weak and confident? Those who don't know how to read can read it, but those who pay attention to some details should not read it, it is a bit harsh on the eyes.
The black market was really trying to persuade him to quit at the beginning. He was already in a lot of troubles, and his background was a big problem. He had no power of his own, and his strength was not very high. With the Dragon God, not to mention being invincible in the world, at least people would not dare to look down upon him. He was still jumping around when he wanted nothing, but when the author needed it, the protagonist's opponents were not his opponents. When he didn't need it, he suppressed the protagonist's strength. The author did whatever he wanted, without any logic. If nothing else, at least it conforms to the logic of the background you set.
Shen Nong died of poisoning, and his comments were deleted!
Even if there are contradictions in the settings before and after, there is still such a disgusting plot
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If nothing else, the name for the division of this realm is retreat. Even if you copy the old-fashioned realm, I won't have any objections. But please don't overdo it and be self-righteous. The name of your realm division is not an innovation. It is just a change of name. What's the point of changing your name like this? It can only give people an awkward feeling.
If you insist on integrating Shuiyuedongtian, you might as well start traveling with the Dragon Divine Art, the levels are different! It's hard for you to integrate. **That means I'm not good at literature, otherwise I'd have to become a god.
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How did you write the Enlightenment function? Come on, let's be funny. I'm really speechless when I see where the Mending Technique is. Turning on the Enlightenment function has improved part of the Mending Technique. Do you have enough understanding of martial arts? Nothing comes out of thin air, and top-level Enlightenment is really funny. It's like someone else is passing on that skill to you. How can this be called Enlightenment? Such a high-level state is speechless when you write such rubbish.
Hodgepodge
Fool. . . . . . I've never seen such an idiot with a good book
The start is interesting
After that, he wandered around and flirted with the girls, without any purpose.
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Official(55)Scraped 18d ago
The protagonist has a loser mentality, and the author deliberately suppresses the protagonist's level
Practicing the Dragon Divine Art for the first time can directly break the eight extraordinary meridians and reach the Qi Sea state. However, the author found a bunch of reasons to be afraid of affecting his foundation and why he should aspire to the top of martial arts. What a garbage protagonist. Did you forget that you still have enemies Chu Tianxing and Zhu Di? If you don't improve your strength as soon as possible, kill Chu Tianxing and Zhu Di, kill Zhu Di's son and grandson and rebel against him, and become the emperor, but he thinks about the peak of martial arts. What a garbage protagonist.
I said in the early stage that I should be patient, but suddenly I came to an auction, and it felt like a novel from another world 15 years ago. The protagonist pretended to be cool and attracted girls, but I didn't know why he was so weak and confident? Those who don't know how to read can read it, but those who pay attention to some details should not read it, it is a bit harsh on the eyes.
The black market was really trying to persuade him to quit at the beginning. He was already in a lot of troubles, and his background was a big problem. He had no power of his own, and his strength was not very high. With the Dragon God, not to mention being invincible in the world, at least people would not dare to look down upon him. He was still jumping around when he wanted nothing, but when the author needed it, the protagonist's opponents were not his opponents. When he didn't need it, he suppressed the protagonist's strength. The author did whatever he wanted, without any logic. If nothing else, at least it conforms to the logic of the background you set.
Shen Nong died of poisoning, and his comments were deleted!
Even if there are contradictions in the settings before and after, there is still such a disgusting plot
...
If nothing else, the name for the division of this realm is retreat. Even if you copy the old-fashioned realm, I won't have any objections. But please don't overdo it and be self-righteous. The name of your realm division is not an innovation. It is just a change of name. What's the point of changing your name like this? It can only give people an awkward feeling.
If you insist on integrating Shuiyuedongtian, you might as well start traveling with the Dragon Divine Art, the levels are different! It's hard for you to integrate. **That means I'm not good at literature, otherwise I'd have to become a god.
?
How did you write the Enlightenment function? Come on, let's be funny. I'm really speechless when I see where the Mending Technique is. Turning on the Enlightenment function has improved part of the Mending Technique. Do you have enough understanding of martial arts? Nothing comes out of thin air, and top-level Enlightenment is really funny. It's like someone else is passing on that skill to you. How can this be called Enlightenment? Such a high-level state is speechless when you write such rubbish.
Hodgepodge
Fool. . . . . . I've never seen such an idiot with a good book
The start is interesting
After that, he wandered around and flirted with the girls, without any purpose.













