Secret: I Can Play Two Paths

Sorry, I can't hold it any longer... But it's not the author's problem, it's my problem. The book is still very good, and the setting is also very good, so I gave it a five-star rating. Just, who knew this was a pure stream of consciousness novel... Even among those large literary works that use hypnotic and painful masks, the stream of consciousness stuff is the most tortured part. There are long sections of inner activities, various intentions that need to be pondered, and messy perspective changes. It's damning. It is unavoidable to have mysterious fan stories that symbolize intentions, but a large amount of intentions are stuffed into an inner monologue in which the perspective is constantly changing... It really tests one's literary skills and reading comprehension ability. It's so painful. I'm just a broken novelist. If you, the author, are just writing this article for the love of electricity and want to fulfill the regrets in your heart, I am just complaining regretfully because I can't hold on, but if you want more readers... The elegance of literature often means that we mortals can understand but cannot accept it. Just like so many big masterpieces, everyone knows them well, but few people can read them_(:з∠). Most of the people who can come to this website to find articles are casual readers. How many of them can meet the reading requirements of this book? It's so difficult to be a human being...😊😊😊😊

Two paths, one hunter and one assassin, androgynous two-in-one equals the angel path! Sequence Zero God!

The early stage is well written, both the path and the confessional opening are well written. The middle stage is a bit confusing, and I can see the late stage being rushed to completion. Mr. Ke has not become the master of the mystery.

Chapter 170 of this book is still talking about about 200 chapters of the original work, and it is finished in chapter 350. The plot in the later stages is very fast, and there is nothing novel or exciting. There is a part of the dialogue between the male protagonist and Bai Zao, which is very boring and there are many dialogues without any plot progress. Later in the plot, there are more dialogues and less content. It is acceptable to skip and watch. The protagonist's skills are many and weak. In sequence 5, his skills are weak for four or five chapters, and many of them are not used. There are some Kamen Rider things that I don't like or hate, I just mentioned them to help others avoid lightning. The heroine is basically useless. The heroine has a very strong one-way arrow, but it only appears when advancing the plot. The reason for the one-way arrow is that although the hero likes the heroine psychologically, he does not have any physical or vocal actions. He is just like an ordinary colleague, and some take advantage of the heroine. You can feel that the author is not good at writing emotional lines.

The protagonist is thinking too much when he is very weak. If you come up with this idea when the protagonist is Sequence Four, at least in Sequence Four, it can be used as an adjustment. Why did you come up with this idea when the protagonist was only Sequence Nine? This is not a daydream, what is it? The method of returning the protagonist feels the same as a TM nanny. After reading the first volume, honestly. I have mixed feelings, but I decided to give up on this novel. After all, I can't appreciate it at all, even though I can relate to it. But there is always an awkward feeling, uncomfortable.

I beg you to stop being so arrogant. The writing is very good. Why are you so arrogant?

Klein's dog-licking golden finger is so awesome that they still circle around him

It feels so watery, what a lot of nonsense.

It would be great if the assassin was destined to come.

The main theme of this article is sincerity, without hesitation, exchanging sincerity for sincerity, and quickly informing the relevant people of the traveler's prophetic performance. As a result, Xiao Ke's vest was lifted at the first time, and the two earth fellows successfully joined forces to create a Tarot Society. The protagonist's hang-up is relatively large, and the effect is just like the title. He jumps repeatedly in many sequences, making him almost omniscient and omnipotent. From a story-telling perspective, the pacing is pretty good. Although there are not many of my own ideas, they subvert the plot... The problem is that it is a bit watery, and I often write expository and argumentative essays. Overall OK