Survive on a Desert Island by Farming and Opening a Shop

In fact, the writing was quite good at the beginning, making it feel like playing a tower defense game, until that inexplicable loli appeared. First of all, the protagonist could not determine who she was at all. When the protagonist was not even obedient to swallow the flower, a system was left that clearly stated that she was a person from other star fields who came from the trick door. , Just because she looks like a human being, the protagonist feels that she is not a threat, which leads to the protagonist's caution described before disappearing. Then, no matter what the protagonist asks her, she is uncooperative, does not answer, and does not know. The protagonist also provides her with food and housing. She only helps the protagonist sweep the floor, and her role is almost zero. Isn't she working as a nanny? This can be regarded as the protagonist's kindness. The interaction between the protagonist and her at the end (the part where the protagonist gives her melon seeds) is written like a duck. It's so embarrassing that it can fill up a villa. Moreover, I wrote that the loli dislikes the protagonist at every turn. I really don't know why the protagonist takes in a little girl who has no origin and dislikes him at every turn. She just said a few words that made her miserable. What if she lied? The protagonist has a hard time dealing with the monsters in the trick door. Her quality and role are useless later on. It was in that chapter that I quit poisoning. Now no one likes to watch her as a licker. If the protagonist's preparations for the time and space cage and her own plants are well written, it will be more interesting than this kind of awkward and awkward interaction.

The writing is pretty good, much more interesting than those that cheat the system.

After all, he is a time traveler, but why is he so uneducated? The protagonist is a time traveler. If you don't understand the Internet knowledge in the big environment, you should have heard a little bit. Is it so difficult to identify based on online games? It's one thing to understand or not, but why don't you learn? The protagonist in the plant introduction knows about Plants vs. Zombies, but you don't understand this and don't ask about that. It seems so ignorant. He doesn't look like a time traveler at all. I only see a fool. Travelers must be wary at the first time I hope the author can re-plan it. For example, let's introduce the functions of plant information in detail, character information, professions, treasure functions, many types. This is a personal understanding.

It's so drunk to raise a swallowing flower as a daughter. How much do you want to be a father?

It's written about stupid people, games or not, survival or survival, inexplicable garbage novels. After reading it for a long time, I still know what kind of idiots it is about. Is this really a novel written by a human being? Alien-like thinking logic

I have read so many of the previous Cute Thief Book Friends that I gave up before even reading the second page. . Those talents and skills are just nonsense. .

As a rare male non-stallion novel, I actually had high expectations for it, but the patriarchal preference at the beginning is really disgusting, and it is mentioned again and again later, just like feeding a fly into your mouth again and again. There are also things like swallowing flowers as followers. It doesn't protect what its master wants it to do. Even if the daughter sees her father in danger, she will protect her. And later on, the food cooked by the protagonist was robbed and he didn't even eat it. Is this raising three children or three ancestors?

The focus should be on farming, upgrading, fighting monsters, and tasks. There must be continuity so that you can have a sense of fighting monsters and upgrading. What you wrote seems to have a lot of unnecessary things. People will find it boring after reading it, and they will not want to continue reading. The star gate should be linked to the character level, so that people who come in are at the same level as the monsters and characters, and there will be no counter-attacks. Also, Trumpet and Gru should be at the same level as the characters. It is not necessary for the protagonist to fight and plant flowers and plants on the side to watch. What's the use of coming? It's boring to watch.