Father: Song Yuanqiao
by Morning And Evening V Evening And Evening
About This Novel
Travel through Yitian and become Song Qingshu. Guangmingding: If you want to hurt my junior brother Wuji, get over my body first. Wudang Hall: Don't hurt my master. Zhu Yuanzhang: Is this a bowl? ? ? What Zhou Zhiruo will only affect my speed of drawing the sword. . . . . . There seems to be something wrong with this plot No system, no plug-ins.
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Official(13)Scraped 3d ago
It's hilarious. He keeps sending women to the protagonist without thinking, and because of his own character design, he can only write Zhang Wuji to death later. This author is also very good.
Author, you are a little disgusted. Why did you write Zhang Wuji to death? He is the protagonist's son of fate. You accept her woman. There is no need to do this. Wouldn't it be better to leave Yin Li for him?
The writing is okay, but it's not what I like. I prefer the kind that's a little more calm, and I don't rely too heavily on it. I still practice on my own. I think I can push the timeline forward a little bit.
this book is very good
This book should be a hit. The story is good and the pace is exciting. It is a very enjoyable book.
Speechless
It's so outrageous. It's as outrageous as the Douyin comment section. Zhang Wuji receives a lunch box and Zhang Sanfeng kills indiscriminately? In Journey to the West, Sun Wukong was shot to death by a black bear spirit, Erlang Shen wiped out all the demons, and the man in charge was praised as the Master of Qingyuan Miaodao who killed the nine sons of the Jade Emperor. He really had the demeanor of causing trouble in the Heavenly Palace. Looking at it, it feels as uncomfortable as eating Shi
"If you like him, chase him. Don't be half-hearted. I, Wudang, don't care who the other person is." Yu Lianzhou said calmly. It's too dramatic. He also traveled through time?
I think it's well written. Do you want to consider adding some funny elements?
Since the protagonist is a time traveler, he can also go to the location of the divine eagle in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" to try his luck. What if he can learn the Dugu Nine Swords in "Dugu Qiufei"? I remember in "The Swordsman", didn't Feng Qingyang and Linghu Chong learn the Dugu Nine Swords of "Dugu Qiufei"? When I go to see the girl in yellow shirt later, I don't know if I can arrange to learn Yang Guo's Sad Ecstasy Palm.
Did the author delete the following content today? Are you planning to rewrite the next part?
To be honest, there are actually quite a lot of dark parts between Mr. Jin and Zhu Yuanzhang in the original work "The Story of Heaven and the Dragon Sword". If the protagonist in this book does not become the emperor, it is best to make friends with Zhu Yuanzhang as soon as possible
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Official(13)Scraped 3d ago
It's hilarious. He keeps sending women to the protagonist without thinking, and because of his own character design, he can only write Zhang Wuji to death later. This author is also very good.
Author, you are a little disgusted. Why did you write Zhang Wuji to death? He is the protagonist's son of fate. You accept her woman. There is no need to do this. Wouldn't it be better to leave Yin Li for him?
The writing is okay, but it's not what I like. I prefer the kind that's a little more calm, and I don't rely too heavily on it. I still practice on my own. I think I can push the timeline forward a little bit.
this book is very good
This book should be a hit. The story is good and the pace is exciting. It is a very enjoyable book.
Speechless
It's so outrageous. It's as outrageous as the Douyin comment section. Zhang Wuji receives a lunch box and Zhang Sanfeng kills indiscriminately? In Journey to the West, Sun Wukong was shot to death by a black bear spirit, Erlang Shen wiped out all the demons, and the man in charge was praised as the Master of Qingyuan Miaodao who killed the nine sons of the Jade Emperor. He really had the demeanor of causing trouble in the Heavenly Palace. Looking at it, it feels as uncomfortable as eating Shi
"If you like him, chase him. Don't be half-hearted. I, Wudang, don't care who the other person is." Yu Lianzhou said calmly. It's too dramatic. He also traveled through time?
I think it's well written. Do you want to consider adding some funny elements?
Since the protagonist is a time traveler, he can also go to the location of the divine eagle in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" to try his luck. What if he can learn the Dugu Nine Swords in "Dugu Qiufei"? I remember in "The Swordsman", didn't Feng Qingyang and Linghu Chong learn the Dugu Nine Swords of "Dugu Qiufei"? When I go to see the girl in yellow shirt later, I don't know if I can arrange to learn Yang Guo's Sad Ecstasy Palm.
Did the author delete the following content today? Are you planning to rewrite the next part?
To be honest, there are actually quite a lot of dark parts between Mr. Jin and Zhu Yuanzhang in the original work "The Story of Heaven and the Dragon Sword". If the protagonist in this book does not become the emperor, it is best to make friends with Zhu Yuanzhang as soon as possible
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