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Li Xun, a young screenwriter waiting to be hired at Penguin Video, met a beautiful woman who boasted that she was the vice president of a Fortune 500 company and had an annual salary of over 10 million yuan the day before she officially joined the job. This beautiful woman was obviously drunk, so she asked Li Xun to kiss her and gave him a hundred yuan for her kiss? So Li Xun, who had earned 10,000 yuan, left with satisfaction. Unexpectedly, when he officially joined Penguin Video the next day, he was confused. That woman turned out to be...? This is the story of a small screenwriter who, under the pressure of his beautiful boss, shocked the entire Internet with "Young Bao Qingtian", repeatedly broke records with "Detective Di Renjie", became a god with "The Punisher of the Song Dynasty", and created another glory with "The Twelve Hours of Chang'an", and finally gradually became the top master of suspense dramas in China. But when people think he is only good at writing suspense dramas, he will use his actions to make people's eyes shattered.
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Official(83)Scraped 13d ago
There is it at the beginning
So an accomplished woman would lose her temper before a delivery boy? Does the author himself often have such dreams? Illogical, you know? Abandoned!
Too strong
You can't drink, you drink by force, a woman asks you to force her to kiss you, and a woman relies on you. Are you so strong?
No common sense
Will there be Meituan in 10 years? You can't be more serious. You can't write nonsense when writing about parallel worlds.
The book is good
The book is so good, the poisonous points are just right, and it has received five-star reviews. I will give it to you in five installments.
I took a look at the first 10 chapters. Overall, your writing at the beginning is not very good. For old bookworms, it will cause slight discomfort at most, but for some newbies, it will immediately persuade them to quit, because they have not learned to read novels without thinking like old bookworms. For example, if the protagonist delivers food to the vice president for less than 24 hours, there will be no impression of it. This is a poisonous point, but the old bookworm can use the excuse that he only cares about comfort and did not pay attention to the name she said or the protagonist was drunk; and the ex-girlfriend is also a big poisonous point. It is impossible for childhood sweethearts of more than ten years to have no feelings at all. At least describe the scene when they broke up to lay a foreshadowing, otherwise if you do a reversal later, it will be very abrupt. You actually brushed off such an important foreshadowing. It seems to me that you want to quickly solve the ex-girlfriend's role so that you can start a new plot, but you can't rush things like this. Once you are anxious, it will easily break down and eventually become a poisonous point. (The above opinions are only based on the first ten chapters. If the circle comes back or is reversed later, just pretend I didn't say it)
A bit broken
The first part is written well, but the second part keeps on bragging, and I can't stop one after another. How about you give him some living space and give readers a different taste? Is it useful to keep writing about XX works with high ratings? I'm so tired that I don't even want to read the title anymore. The most taboo thing about urban writing is to go all the way to the dark side. No matter how good your writing is, it will be boring if it loses its interest! Humble opinion.
Tai Shui, one thing is repeated too many times. Even if there is a story line about this incident, there is no need to repeat it so much.
You are the sea, all water, water, water
good water
The plot is really too watery. The content in one script can be watery for more than half a chapter.
? ? ?
This book is arranged into suspense, but I am confused? ? ?
Holy mother bitch is a bit
It's nt. People who travel through time are all so nt.
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Official(83)Scraped 13d ago
There is it at the beginning
So an accomplished woman would lose her temper before a delivery boy? Does the author himself often have such dreams? Illogical, you know? Abandoned!
Too strong
You can't drink, you drink by force, a woman asks you to force her to kiss you, and a woman relies on you. Are you so strong?
No common sense
Will there be Meituan in 10 years? You can't be more serious. You can't write nonsense when writing about parallel worlds.
The book is good
The book is so good, the poisonous points are just right, and it has received five-star reviews. I will give it to you in five installments.
I took a look at the first 10 chapters. Overall, your writing at the beginning is not very good. For old bookworms, it will cause slight discomfort at most, but for some newbies, it will immediately persuade them to quit, because they have not learned to read novels without thinking like old bookworms. For example, if the protagonist delivers food to the vice president for less than 24 hours, there will be no impression of it. This is a poisonous point, but the old bookworm can use the excuse that he only cares about comfort and did not pay attention to the name she said or the protagonist was drunk; and the ex-girlfriend is also a big poisonous point. It is impossible for childhood sweethearts of more than ten years to have no feelings at all. At least describe the scene when they broke up to lay a foreshadowing, otherwise if you do a reversal later, it will be very abrupt. You actually brushed off such an important foreshadowing. It seems to me that you want to quickly solve the ex-girlfriend's role so that you can start a new plot, but you can't rush things like this. Once you are anxious, it will easily break down and eventually become a poisonous point. (The above opinions are only based on the first ten chapters. If the circle comes back or is reversed later, just pretend I didn't say it)
A bit broken
The first part is written well, but the second part keeps on bragging, and I can't stop one after another. How about you give him some living space and give readers a different taste? Is it useful to keep writing about XX works with high ratings? I'm so tired that I don't even want to read the title anymore. The most taboo thing about urban writing is to go all the way to the dark side. No matter how good your writing is, it will be boring if it loses its interest! Humble opinion.
Tai Shui, one thing is repeated too many times. Even if there is a story line about this incident, there is no need to repeat it so much.
You are the sea, all water, water, water
good water
The plot is really too watery. The content in one script can be watery for more than half a chapter.
? ? ?
This book is arranged into suspense, but I am confused? ? ?
Holy mother bitch is a bit
It's nt. People who travel through time are all so nt.
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Li Xun, a young screenwriter waiting to be hired at Penguin Video, met a beautiful woman who boasted that she was the vice president of a Fortune 500 company and had an annual salary of over 10 million yuan the day before she officially joined the job. This beautiful woman was obviously drunk, so she asked Li Xun to kiss her and gave him a hundred yuan for her kiss? So Li Xun, who had earned 10,000 yuan, left with satisfaction. Unexpectedly, when he officially joined Penguin Video the next day, he was confused. That woman turned out to be...?
Overall, the book is pretty good, and I at least have the desire to continue reading it. There are some small poisonous points that can be ignored. The only green tea green plum scene should be almost finished. But I have a personal opinion. The script copied by the protagonist had too much original plot during the filming process. The long sections of the original plot make people have no desire to read it. You can consider putting the description of the original plot in the TV series and showing it from the audience's perspective. Now there are large sections of the original work during filming, but there is very little plot during broadcasting. I don't think many people like to watch the original plot of Shui's work while the protagonist is filming, right? Instead, it would be more natural to intersperse the plot with the audience during the broadcast.
It's an entertainment fanfic, a copycat type, but the writing is very good. I think about it and won't talk about the two I copied so far to reduce my expectations. However, there is a poisonous point in the early stage, which I suggest you just ignore and not read, which is about the ex-girlfriend. In addition, it is strongly recommended not to search for prototypes of female CEOs, as those with good looks may not feel comfortable.
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