Ember Gun

I don't understand why those rubbish articles are on the list, and no one wants to read good novels. I hope the author can persist. After all, Ash Wings is already a pity.

It's a pity that this kind of high-quality novel is not popular. I can't even read it. I'm lucky

The author's book is like "the sound of loud music sweeping away the shadows", like "pushing away the clouds and mist to see the blue sky." It makes book friends like me see hope and the future! Bolt from the blue and enlightenment may not be enough to describe the contingency of the master's article. The moving clouds of Wushan Mountain and the flowing water of the Yangtze River are even more difficult to compare with the master's literary talent. Huang Zhongda Lu is inspiring and enlightening. Your candle illuminates the world, and you can clearly see thousands of miles away. You bring rain and dew to the common people, and you bring benefits to all directions. Through your profound words, I seem to see your majestic and heroic posture, looking at wolves and looking at wolves, walking like dragons and tigers; I seem to see your wisdom and demeanor, writing articles all over the world with a big pen as big as a rafter; I seem to see your heroic spirit when you press your sword and look around. After reading this book sentence by sentence, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time. It was so shocking! Why are there such good books? I have been browsing the Internet for many years, and I thought that no book would ever touch me again. I didn't expect to see such a wonderful book today. Author, it is you who made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is heaven outside the world". Thank you. After reading this book, I did not reply immediately because I was afraid that my vulgar reply would tarnish this rare book on the Internet. But I still replied, because I felt that if I couldn't leave my own footprints in such a wonderful book, then I would never die in peace. How proud it is to be able to leave my own footprints in such a wonderful book. Author, please forgive my selfishness. I know that no matter how gorgeous the words are, it is not enough and hypocritical to describe the brilliance of your book. So I just want to say: your book is really beautiful. I am willing to read it for the rest of my life. This book has a novel concept, unique subject matter, clear paragraphs, strange plot, ups and downs, clear main line, fascinating, and ordinary literary skills. It can be said that every word is precious and every sentence is a classic. It is a model that our generation should learn from. From the perspective of novel art, this book is not too successful, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. As the saying goes: A galloping horse, a shooting vulture and a bow, the heaven and the earth are in my heart!" The author truly deserves to be the founder of the new generation of Wuli World. Originally, I had been disappointed with the entire online literary world and felt that there was no future for me. My heart was filled with sadness. But after reading your book, I regained hope in the online literary world. It is you who rekindled the fire of hope in my heart, it was you who revived my heart, and it was you who saved my heart that was cold and cold. Originally I decided not to come back to the online literature world, but after reading your book, I told myself that this book is a must-read. This is a good book that is rare to see in a century. The sky has eyes, allowing me to read such a wonderful book in my lifetime.

I have read the first few dozen chapters for the time being, and overall I feel very good about it, but I still feel that the writing is a bit lagging behind, like a few grains of uncooked rice in a bowl of hot white rice. Mainly: The picture quality is not good enough, like 720p videos, although they look very cool, they should obviously be able to be opened to 1080p. Then sometimes there is a bit of drama, which is generally reflected in some modern vocabulary and Arthur. It may be because the name Arthur is abused in various animations and novels. The pace is a bit fast, I'm not sure whether it's the early stages or the overall situation, but the progress is very comfortable.

The writing style is very good, but the plot progress is a bit slow, and the supporting characters are a bit unclear due to too much ink. The overall atmosphere is well rendered, almost no less mysterious. When I first looked at it, I couldn't see the core yet. If the core settings are good, it's basically a magic grass. Come on come on

I don't know since when, detective stories (or detective TV series, such as White Night Walk, Psychological Crime) will start to have a burden, usually students who have just graduated from the police academy, all passionate, all reckless, and all plot development (getting into trouble a few times, being saved by the protagonist a few times, starting to grow, and then the two begin to bond and can help the protagonist). Just like the royal plot in Japanese comics, assembly line engineering. Where did this trend come from? Mystery novels seem to be unable to develop without such characters, Sherlock Holmes does not (Watson is not a liability), and neither does the book written by Edogawa Ranpo. So which genius invented this plot? It's really poisonous. Maybe at the beginning, this kind of character growth will be very interesting, but after reading too much, I really feel like I am being fed💩. As soon as the policewoman appeared on the scene, I had an ominous premonition. As a result, the plot really developed like that. There were a lot of people in the comment area, saying that the characters were so vivid, I... In the end, I could only hope that this was just a sideshow, but the spoiler boss in the comment section debunked me, saying that this was an important character with many scenes to follow. I'm really worried about the development. The development is the same and the character growth line is barely posted. Why do some people still say that the characters are fresh? If you can't bear it, you can't bear it. Goodbye👋

It's finally finished. After watching it, I have mixed feelings. This is a good book, a novel that can be read slowly from beginning to end. First of all, the power system grading of this book is not clear, or even has no grading. This is a devastating shortcoming for some novels that upgrade the Kuaiwen style, but it is one of the selling points of this book. No one has a higher level, only one has higher means. Physical strength and erosion are only one aspect of strength, and wisdom is the key to victory or defeat. Secondly, the firm concept of the characters in this book is rare among the online articles I have read. Different from the past Internet articles where bad people are just bad and born bad, the current mainstream Internet articles seem to be aware of this and have begun to write some characters such as villains and saviors. However, these characters are not vividly written and cannot allow readers to see the ideas and will he should have. And Edlen, Lawrence, etc. In this book, they are villains, they kill people, they start wars, they castrate history and wisdom, they know this is bad, but they are willing to do it to purge the demons; they will be tired, they will die, they will experience failure again and again, but they will never give up. Their will is as fierce as fire, making people outside the screen feel the heat, and as solid as steel, which will shock you. The feeling of each character fighting for their own religious piety and solemn ideals really makes me want to stop. Finally, the writing style of this book is excellent. It makes you feel full of pictures without being artificial. It is really exciting. And I want to scold the author, why is the writing so good? I'm so exhausted after reading it, ugh!

I really like this kind of steampunk style book

This is my first time to write a review, emm, overall it is very engaging and the writing is also very good. The steampunk in the western fantasy background is quite interesting and the details are quite good. It is just that the direction of some places is a bit strange, but the sense of substitution is very strong. Emm, that's it

"Mr. Holmes, life is a gamble. You try to win everything in life with the only chips you have. I think I have done it, but it's just a little bit short, just a little bit short..." --Saab