This Summons is Not Quite Right
About This Novel
"Students with humanoid shadows, do you want to have close contact with seniors with eight-pack abs? Come to our close combat club!" "For those who are interested in modern machinery, come to our Thermal Weapons Research Institute to learn about aircraft cannons, rocket launchers, sniper rifles, and broadsword mines. This is the truth! I will show you the greatness of technology and industry!" "Come to our magic club, have you seen Harry Potter? We are going to be the Order of the Phoenix at Explorers Academy!" In this era, there is a shadow around everyone, warriors, wizards, pistols, tanks, holographic projections, positron cannons... Human beings stand on the ruins of prehistoric civilization, looking up at the stars and peering into the source of destruction. ... Lin Yu woke up from his desk and found that something was not right with the world. The first summons begins. The first summons will result in four stars. Annihilator Pistol, Portable Type 1 (4 stars) A general's sword from an ancient dynasty (4 stars) Liezi (4 stars) "Why is this routine so familiar..." "Wait! This doesn't matter. Why can't we travel two days later when the college entrance examination is tomorrow? "
What Readers Think
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Official(23)Scraped 3d ago
There is no reason to rush into the street
Although the score of this book is definitely low, But the author also has problems. First of all, 1. There are too many typos. 2. The quality star rating is ambiguous. The author did not specify what the star rating is based on. 3. The protagonist's first phantom ability, Wind Control, has a large number of developable skills, but the author insists on not allowing development of skills such as Wind Knife (melee combat), Wind Bullet (low damage), air pressure, vacuum, storm, etc. (There are a bunch of others I'll tell you in this chapter to see for yourself) (it took more than 180 and 190 before I was finally willing to develop a Rasengan). The above points are flaws, although the plot is okay (ok) So it's not without reason to say that I'm on the street.
I've finished reading it now, but I can't stand the next updates. The subject matter is okay, but there are a few things I don't understand. One is the system, which is of no use at the moment. Apart from having more choices than others, it doesn't help much. One is the development of abilities. To be honest, so far in this novel, I have basically no idea about the abilities of the protagonist. His abilities and strength are mediocre. Apart from participating in the plot, there are not a few supporting characters that stand out. The final assessment in the depths of the dream is not an important plot at all. You spend 10 chapters writing it, and I was tired of reading it.
This book is well written.
I want to ask a question here. Just reading novels, reading faster and faster, faster and faster. And impatient. I often read novels at a glance, and after reading them, sometimes I don't even know the name of the protagonist.
conscientious author
Is the article well written? I'm not sure yet because I haven't read it. The reason why I gave it five stars is because the free chapter is 180.
generally
The only drawback is that there is no climax. Plain and simple. Not much poison. Not much fun either. . It doesn't feel like it's describing the protagonist. Too many shots for others. . The protagonist is involved in various things. It feels like soy sauce. It feels the same with or without him. So I said I didn't have an orgasm. . It's the center point. . The protagonist is not strong either. . There is no room to become stronger. . It feels like a story is being told around the main character. . It can be seen from the strength and participation of the protagonist. The protagonist is a soy sauce party. . It's because there is no room to become stronger. No matter what, you will never be able to compare with others. . When I come out, I feel no weaker than the protagonist.
Well enough
The subject matter is very good, but the protagonist feels like a supporting role, and the summoning and matching feel are very forced, bland, and not exciting.
Personal advice
The protagonist is reborn and traveled through time. Her summons can be found in real life, such as League of Legends, Pokemon Glory, etc. It is also convenient to write it this way. Readers, it will be easier to understand.
How to say it! !
Were you not attracted by the novel at the beginning? Just a Huang family troublemaker, it looks a bit annoying but the subject matter is okay, let's check it out again
So many typos, sorry Didn't the author even check it? ? ? 😂😂
Author, you are suitable for writing everyday articles about farming, but not suitable for writing cool articles.
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Official(23)Scraped 3d ago
There is no reason to rush into the street
Although the score of this book is definitely low, But the author also has problems. First of all, 1. There are too many typos. 2. The quality star rating is ambiguous. The author did not specify what the star rating is based on. 3. The protagonist's first phantom ability, Wind Control, has a large number of developable skills, but the author insists on not allowing development of skills such as Wind Knife (melee combat), Wind Bullet (low damage), air pressure, vacuum, storm, etc. (There are a bunch of others I'll tell you in this chapter to see for yourself) (it took more than 180 and 190 before I was finally willing to develop a Rasengan). The above points are flaws, although the plot is okay (ok) So it's not without reason to say that I'm on the street.
I've finished reading it now, but I can't stand the next updates. The subject matter is okay, but there are a few things I don't understand. One is the system, which is of no use at the moment. Apart from having more choices than others, it doesn't help much. One is the development of abilities. To be honest, so far in this novel, I have basically no idea about the abilities of the protagonist. His abilities and strength are mediocre. Apart from participating in the plot, there are not a few supporting characters that stand out. The final assessment in the depths of the dream is not an important plot at all. You spend 10 chapters writing it, and I was tired of reading it.
This book is well written.
I want to ask a question here. Just reading novels, reading faster and faster, faster and faster. And impatient. I often read novels at a glance, and after reading them, sometimes I don't even know the name of the protagonist.
conscientious author
Is the article well written? I'm not sure yet because I haven't read it. The reason why I gave it five stars is because the free chapter is 180.
generally
The only drawback is that there is no climax. Plain and simple. Not much poison. Not much fun either. . It doesn't feel like it's describing the protagonist. Too many shots for others. . The protagonist is involved in various things. It feels like soy sauce. It feels the same with or without him. So I said I didn't have an orgasm. . It's the center point. . The protagonist is not strong either. . There is no room to become stronger. . It feels like a story is being told around the main character. . It can be seen from the strength and participation of the protagonist. The protagonist is a soy sauce party. . It's because there is no room to become stronger. No matter what, you will never be able to compare with others. . When I come out, I feel no weaker than the protagonist.
Well enough
The subject matter is very good, but the protagonist feels like a supporting role, and the summoning and matching feel are very forced, bland, and not exciting.
Personal advice
The protagonist is reborn and traveled through time. Her summons can be found in real life, such as League of Legends, Pokemon Glory, etc. It is also convenient to write it this way. Readers, it will be easier to understand.
How to say it! !
Were you not attracted by the novel at the beginning? Just a Huang family troublemaker, it looks a bit annoying but the subject matter is okay, let's check it out again
So many typos, sorry Didn't the author even check it? ? ? 😂😂
Author, you are suitable for writing everyday articles about farming, but not suitable for writing cool articles.
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Not bad, food and grass
The urban genre should be considered the urban supernatural genre. I have mixed tastes and I also like this kind of book, and it seems that the setting of this book is slightly different. Although he is also exploring various restricted areas, his ability is shadow. Overall, the writing style is good, and there are not too many pretense and slap-in-the-face routines. I like this very much, but I think the updates are too slow (´-ω-`).
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