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It sucks, but it's well written. . . But the original work is also. . Why

I have read Chapter 58 so far. What can I say? The idea and design are very good, the subject matter is very novel, and the interaction between the protagonist and Ning Xue is very interesting. But the plot of the monster hunting and study tour gave me a very fragmented, compact and complex feeling. Moreover, the three villains I met, Lu Yilin, officer Li Gang, and ancient capital student Gu Ming, all looked at Ning Xue with lewd eyes or words, which gave me a very disgusting feeling. I don't know whether to say whether the villain's design is good or bad. Moreover, these three people all appeared in the study tour dungeon, which was too frequent. Oh, Dongfang Lie's cultivation level design is also very problematic. If he was an intermediate level three cultivation base at that time, it would mean that he would stay at this level without progress for more than three years until he was selected by the government.

It always feels very awkward. It is equivalent to giving talents by opening a hook, but it is also the same as having a hard relationship with Mu Ningxue in the first wear to make the second wear not the third one. By influencing B Fan to take away his first kiss when he was a child, he is like a mentally retarded person. It is too deliberate and he will definitely open a harem. I don't understand that women with normal views would accept a harem without any brain. Even in the finale of the original work, Mu Ye and the two girls just acquiesced in this triangular relationship, and there was no actual meeting between the two girls, let alone the marriage and post-marriage events. Therefore, there is only one ending to opening a harem. The people included in the harem are all idiots. The author writes people into idiots. This is the emotional line. In terms of the main plot, from the head-on attack on Mu Ningxue, we knew we should not take the Mo Fan Lingling route. The new wiring is fine, but it looks boring. Most of them are small adventures where evil does not prevail over good, occasionally interspersed with cheating, and there is no shining point in sight.

It's just an author who writes novels. He tells us readers in the comment area that the novels he writes are about pure love. Is he reliable? I recently read a novel. I just finished reading it. The misunderstandings between the male and female protagonists in the first and middle stages were very sad. The ending is pure love. However, the author has written a second novel and said it is still pure love. Is what he said credible? Do ordinary authors deceive readers when they speak?

It's okay, it would be better if it were longer.

All I can say is that you, the mage, are here to fight for things. You really want to piss me off.

666 Why is there a eunuch again?

First of all, this book amazed me at the beginning. I am a snow chef, so I should have the blessing of feelings. I really like to teach the heroine, but now it is all. There are very few single female protagonists in Fadong. Even if they do, they are too cheap and make me feel uncomfortable. I'm almost finished reading it now. The author's writing style is also very good. There are no major problems at the moment, but I feel that I hope the author can balance the cheats and combat power of the protagonist so that it doesn't collapse later. After all, I like this book very much. Now, I have summarized the reasons for the eunuchs at the end of most fanfics. It is probably caused by the collapse of combat power. If the author can think about the balance of the standing system in detail, I hope the author can write longer and longer.

The author is sorry, your QQ reading and the updates of Determined Reading are different.