Three Feet of Red Makeup
About This Novel
The new book "Mountains and Rivers Remember Human Affairs" has been released. The new book is the first to read. This is my second book. I hope everyone will support it~ Please collect~, please recommend~ ... Introduction to "Mountains and Rivers Remember Human Affairs" In the spring of the tenth year of Jing'an, a mansion was built on a valuable piece of land in Junlin City. That mansion was called Prince Ding's Mansion. In the following ten years, countless heroes and pillars of the country came out of this palace. In the spring of the 20th year of Jingan, the world-famous Dingwang Palace was burned to ashes by a fire. The heroes and pillars of the country who walked out of the palace stood behind the fire and remained silent without saying a word. In the spring of the 22nd year of Jingan, a young man holding a sword walked down the unknown barren mountain. For the young man, the biggest truth in the world is that that person should live, but that person is dead, so he should have a good talk with the world and the temple... ... The new book has been released, readers are welcome to come and read it, thank you~
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Official(11)Scraped 11d ago
A little humble opinion from a young reader who has been in the game for four years
I have been reading online articles for four years, and have gradually developed my own tastes and preferences, as well as some disdain for writing styles. First of all, the author's subject matter is very novel. We fell in love when we were young and agreed to protect each other. It can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the current trend of Internet articles that are popular in the face-slapping B style. To be honest, I was attracted by this name and came here for the beauty of "promising with a beautiful woman". But the author's writing style is indeed unflattering. "The text seems to look at mountains and dislike the level." The protagonist's development is too smooth, and some of his ideas are too idealistic. Without a more delicate description of people's hearts, the world seems too idealistic and not real enough. Except for the part about paying homage to my parents at the beginning, the other descriptions really didn't attract me. In addition, the connection between events is too hasty. Every time I go to a place, I encounter something and then solve it. It's really boring. The reason why I say so much is that I just hope that the author can continue to create and constantly improve his creative skills. There are really not many authors who can come up with such a romantic beginning. I really hope that you can succeed. Come on, big brother
Why don't the author change his name? No one will read the three-foot red makeup 😂
Haven't watched it yet
As soon as I saw this name, my mind automatically began to imagine and emerge some plots... What is the name of the sword? The first thing that came to my mind was that the protagonist's sword is "Hongzhuang" I don't know how to read this book, so I'll add it to your collection.
At the end of the reading, I felt like it was written in vernacular.
The writing is so casual, just like writing an essay
This is too pitiful, no one read Chapter 179
What should I say? Give the author some advice. I suggest the author divide it into more sections. I especially hate seeing a lot of them crowded together.
🎐As long as life is simple 🎐As long as you have a healthy life 🎐Just live a happy life
Nothing, I just want to have some water.
It's impossible to write the text seriously, it's just watery at most
The book is good
The book is very good, but overall the protagonist's journey seems a bit too flat, making it difficult for the content to be exciting and catch the reader's attention. This book is indeed very good now. Judging from the overall story arrangement, the author can appropriately add some of the protagonist's mental journey and arrange some turning plots, which can better promote the overall reading experience. .
Divide it into sections and then divide it into more sections.
Divide it into more sections. Ah!
I feel sorry for the author for three seconds
When I came here, I only had three comments, and I still feel sorry for the author.
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Official(11)Scraped 11d ago
A little humble opinion from a young reader who has been in the game for four years
I have been reading online articles for four years, and have gradually developed my own tastes and preferences, as well as some disdain for writing styles. First of all, the author's subject matter is very novel. We fell in love when we were young and agreed to protect each other. It can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the current trend of Internet articles that are popular in the face-slapping B style. To be honest, I was attracted by this name and came here for the beauty of "promising with a beautiful woman". But the author's writing style is indeed unflattering. "The text seems to look at mountains and dislike the level." The protagonist's development is too smooth, and some of his ideas are too idealistic. Without a more delicate description of people's hearts, the world seems too idealistic and not real enough. Except for the part about paying homage to my parents at the beginning, the other descriptions really didn't attract me. In addition, the connection between events is too hasty. Every time I go to a place, I encounter something and then solve it. It's really boring. The reason why I say so much is that I just hope that the author can continue to create and constantly improve his creative skills. There are really not many authors who can come up with such a romantic beginning. I really hope that you can succeed. Come on, big brother
Why don't the author change his name? No one will read the three-foot red makeup 😂
Haven't watched it yet
As soon as I saw this name, my mind automatically began to imagine and emerge some plots... What is the name of the sword? The first thing that came to my mind was that the protagonist's sword is "Hongzhuang" I don't know how to read this book, so I'll add it to your collection.
At the end of the reading, I felt like it was written in vernacular.
The writing is so casual, just like writing an essay
This is too pitiful, no one read Chapter 179
What should I say? Give the author some advice. I suggest the author divide it into more sections. I especially hate seeing a lot of them crowded together.
🎐As long as life is simple 🎐As long as you have a healthy life 🎐Just live a happy life
Nothing, I just want to have some water.
It's impossible to write the text seriously, it's just watery at most
The book is good
The book is very good, but overall the protagonist's journey seems a bit too flat, making it difficult for the content to be exciting and catch the reader's attention. This book is indeed very good now. Judging from the overall story arrangement, the author can appropriately add some of the protagonist's mental journey and arrange some turning plots, which can better promote the overall reading experience. .
Divide it into sections and then divide it into more sections.
Divide it into more sections. Ah!
I feel sorry for the author for three seconds
When I came here, I only had three comments, and I still feel sorry for the author.
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