Zhaozhou

The protagonist's age may be due to age issues, so did it have to be written so young? When you are twelve years old, it would actually be awkward to imagine the way you speak. Since it is fictional history, it doesn't matter if you are older. When you are twelve, it is really difficult to imagine what a twelve-year-old looks like in ancient times. Even if you are a genius, the images can only be used in modern terms. When you are twelve, it is very difficult to imagine when you are speaking very powerful words.

There is a problem with the setting of Lin Erniang. She comes from a wealthy family and has seen the world. How could she not be scheming and be bullied miserably? It is impossible that she is just proficient in piano, chess, calligraphy and painting. Giving her a huge status later will only make the previous foreshadowing unreasonable.

For the sake of the plot conflict, the pig's feet are set too badly at the beginning. In ancient times, such a plot would be impossible. Even a bastard would not let him become a current person. Such a family head is unqualified! !

First, in feudal society, a son born to a concubine could only be called the mistress' mother. Second, if you separate the family, I can just beat you to death😊

Later on, the scene where the eldest mother will cause trouble... Is too tiring and boring to watch.

I followed this author. Two books already. I feel like the writing is really good.

I haven't read a history book since I read The Son-in-Law, but I fell in love with this one. But as far as I have only read a few dozen pictures so far, the only shortcoming of the author is that you have read too many fantasy novels. Why are the characters' expressions all full of bitter smiles? Really, all the characters in a chapter (the main ones in this chapter, I won't talk about it for passers-by) add up to an average of two times. It should be improved.

What about this author? He just clings to a street weaver girl who wants to get ahead while not wanting to delay others. He just pretends to be innocent, but he is actually a scumbag at heart. Then, the heroine cannot be designed, and he looks very stiff in the later stage. The male protagonist, sometimes you will think he is mentally retarded. But this is what I think is the bigger poisonous point. If you can bear it, you should look good. If you are not interested, just leave, and then don't make some indecent remarks (›´ω`‹)

To be honest, the routines are the same, so why can't we just go in the direction of the ministers and govern the country in a curved way? At first, the main character was set to have a low status as a concubine, and then the main character's family background and relationship were set to become higher and higher. In the middle period, the supporting characters were forcibly reduced to intelligence. It seemed like there were no officials in the imperial court to govern the country except the main character. Then the next emperor was set to be very stupid, making the people miserable. When I saw this, I You can guess the plot behind it. The world is in chaos for a period of time. The protagonist has to hold a lot of military power. He is jealous of the emperor and has been fighting overtly and covertly. Finally, the protagonist is specially highlighted to be benevolent, righteous, resourceful, and replace the emperor as the emperor. Then when the protagonist becomes the emperor, he sweeps away the barbarians on the border, and the country enters a prosperous age under the governance of the protagonist.

There is a problem with the setting of the protagonist. Before his rebirth, the protagonist's family background was average. Although he was a liberal arts student who didn't know much about chemistry, he learned physics and chemistry in high school in vain? When fighting, none of the knowledge before rebirth is used. It's useless except for talking.