Dou Po: Sign in to the Chaos Divine Body at the Beginning
by Milk At The Corner Of The Mouth
About This Novel
Xiao Bai traveled through the world of Dou Qi and signed into the Chaos Divine Body at the beginning, opening the way for his physical body to crush everything. "Ding~ Sign in successfully, host charm +9999" "Ding~ Sign in successfully, get the Strange Fire Capture Ball*10" "Ding~ Sign in successfully, 100% immune to fire attribute attacks!" "Ding~ Sign in successfully, 100% immune to soul attacks!" "Ding, you signed in successfully and received an automatic alchemy furnace*1. The success rate of refining medicine is 100!" Xiao Yan: I always feel like someone is targeting me, but I have no evidence... Xiao Bai: What I have achieved is all the result of my own hard work! System, sign in!
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Official(23)Scraped 18d ago
Advice for you
You should conceive of the plot before writing, don't write it by force. The protagonist is just made up of numbers, and the character cannot be established. He is not likeable and has no characteristics of his own. All the characters are broken as written, including Xiao Yan and Xiao Xun'er in the original work. I think it is a bit difficult for you to write now, and it will become more and more difficult in the future, because you have no plot in your head and just make up the text. Cut it out. Read it carefully. I suggest you change the book and write it again.
Book club group: 964437964
Book club group: 964437964 Although the book club group is useless, chapters that cannot be posted in the text, blocked chapters, "unabridged version" chapters, etc. Will all be posted in the book club group in the future. You know~
I feel like there's something wrong with the male protagonist
Can't the male protagonist wait until the stall is closed before killing that mercenary? But in front of a large public, and his strength has not yet reached a state of arrogance, isn't this looking for death?
Come on, author, update it, I think it looks great! ! !
I like this book very much, keep up the good work
The book is good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, I hope it will be updated and updated.
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200,000 hits and you don't update anymore
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Well, well, well, well, well
Come on, author
Let me give you a five-star review first (number of words)
Unfinished articles are like your unfinished life
You suck, you, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah,
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Community(0)
Official(23)Scraped 18d ago
Advice for you
You should conceive of the plot before writing, don't write it by force. The protagonist is just made up of numbers, and the character cannot be established. He is not likeable and has no characteristics of his own. All the characters are broken as written, including Xiao Yan and Xiao Xun'er in the original work. I think it is a bit difficult for you to write now, and it will become more and more difficult in the future, because you have no plot in your head and just make up the text. Cut it out. Read it carefully. I suggest you change the book and write it again.
Book club group: 964437964
Book club group: 964437964 Although the book club group is useless, chapters that cannot be posted in the text, blocked chapters, "unabridged version" chapters, etc. Will all be posted in the book club group in the future. You know~
I feel like there's something wrong with the male protagonist
Can't the male protagonist wait until the stall is closed before killing that mercenary? But in front of a large public, and his strength has not yet reached a state of arrogance, isn't this looking for death?
Come on, author, update it, I think it looks great! ! !
I like this book very much, keep up the good work
The book is good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, I hope it will be updated and updated.
.
200,000 hits and you don't update anymore
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Well, well, well, well, well
Come on, author
Let me give you a five-star review first (number of words)
Unfinished articles are like your unfinished life
You suck, you, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah,
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