
Naruto: I Live in Konoha, My Name is Uzumaki Menma
by Tofu Brain Needs To Be Spicy
About This Novel
"Hahaha! It's fake! It's all fake!" Under the scarlet moon, Uzumaki Menma, who provoked the Fourth Ninja War, faced the 80,000 ninja coalition and used the Nine Tails to kill everyone. "There is no Sage of Six Paths! There is no Kaguya Otsutsuki! This world is all fake!" Feeling the rejection of the 'Limited Tsukuyomi' world, Uzumaki Menma condensed a small dark purple ball in his right hand, wrapped in the wind release chakra, and slowly landed on the ground. "This is a parting gift to this world." With a flash of white light, the world of 'Limited Tsukuyomi' disappeared. When he opened his eyes again, it was the night of the Kyuubi. Menma, who was being held by the mysterious masked man, saw Naruto in the arms of Namikaze Minato across from him. 'Grass (a plant)! '
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Official(90)Scraped 7d ago
It's well written. I used to have a template for your reference.
Name: Uzumaki Menma Changing state of youth Ninjutsu Fire escape: Hao fire ball, Hao fire extinguished, Hao dragon fire, Fire attachment, Tianlao, Haohuo Tianlao (inaction) Wind Escape: Vacuum Jade, Vacuum Continuous Wave, Vacuum Blade, Wind Whirl Strike, Wind Attached, Release Strike (modified from Su Nuo), Eight Cut (modified from Su Nuo) Water escape: water cut (similar to skating), water breaking wave, water formation wall, water dragon bullet, waterfall technique, water mirror technique (bug technique) Thunder Release: Thunder Cut, Gratitude Wave, Thunder Lead, Thunder Explosion, Thunder Armor Earth Escape: Yellow Spring Marsh, Inaction Transformation, Ant Hell, Sneaking in the Earth, Heart Beheading Technique, Heavy Rock, Light and Heavy Rock, Earth Current Wall, Limits of Blood Succession: Crystal Escape, Magnetic Escape, Sand Gold [Needless to say Mine Shadow, necessary for lack of money], Ice Escape, Melt Escape, Lan Escape, Melt Escape, Burn Escape, Explosion Escape, Boiling Escape Onika Mei's physique: Corpse Vein, Sharingan, Petrification Demonic Hand (in Mikazuki Theatrical Version, manifested as irreversible petrification), weather control (with Tai, JB Strong, controlling the weather and weather, combined with some ninjutsu or other blood successors will be doubled! This thing is necessary!), Tai Escape, Steel Escape [Note that in my settings, the Nine-faced Fox can each control one kind of blood successor. The full version of Oniyaluo comes with 6, so there are 15 in total. 9 Blood successors can be separated during battle! You can return to the original body when needed Awakened Blood Successor: Whirlpool, Wood Release (fused with White Zetsu cells), Samsara Eye (not yet awakened) Weapons: Thunder God's Sword, Ninja Sword Thunder Fang, homemade Ninja Sword (it's best to use Hero Water to burst the fire, it has its own chakra characteristics that can be enhanced dozens of times) Target countries: Takumi Ninja Village (Ninja Tool Resurrection Technology, this thing is also very important! Don't kill the researchers, they still have to mass-produce early scientific ninja tools!), Sora Ninja Village (aircraft carrier) Special props: Star (the fragment before the Ten-Tails seal), Grayl Vein (vitality replenishment, with some mutant abilities in the theatrical version), Dragon Vein, Box of Bliss, Hero's Water (from Taki Ninja Village, eliminating side effects and dilution, ready for battle, better than military food pills, strategic materials!) Forbidden magic: Oni Loya no Jutsu (full version, no need to eat people, only blood and some body cells are needed for complete fusion), Thunder Release·Leimeng Leiren Nine-faced Subaha, the Great Spiral Yu, Reincarnation of the Earth (full version developed by Orochimaru), Flying Thunder God Technique, Spiritual Transformation Technique, Angry Sky (can be used as a missile in the future), Self-reincarnation, Izanagi (cooperated with cloning) , teasing the God of Death), Four Symbols Seal, Bagua Seal, Earth Release·Ultimate Creation Technique·Soil of the Dead, Zero Tail Technique, Seal of Self-karma Curse Binding, Super Chakra·Seal, Crescent Moon Rasengan, Super Chakra·Rasengan. [After the inheritance of the Kong Ninja Village is obtained, the important thing is mass production and the manufacture of ammunition. At this time, Boruto's cheating future scientific ninja tool mentioned the role of inspiration. The mini scroll is shrunk by compressing ninjutsu into the scroll, and can be crushed and released when needed. This is an inspiration! You can use the sealing technique to turn the necessary ninjutsu into ammunition! Compress multiple layers of seals in the scroll. The core is [Explosive Escape], the middle layer is Wind Escape, and the outer layer is Amaterasu. It's just such a scroll! From this mass production, the middle layer can also be water escape, the outer layer can be ice escape, and so on! This is made into a mini scroll, which can be used to create "cluster bombs"! Carpet bombing! [Also, when Naruto was a child and went out with Jiraiya, Boruto's Otsutsuki Ura Shiki went back to the past. Don't waste his body samples and eyes! There are also props for traveling through time, so naturally I have to take them back and study them carefully! Okay, the above is my original template outline. The author can choose some to apply if necessary😑
It's still a novel at the beginning, but it's like a primary school composition later on.
How about not mentioning the story? Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. If you don't have inspiration for a serialized novel, you don't have to worry about filling it in. If you write about daily expenses, you can fill it with dozens of chapters. What you're afraid of is filling it in from the narrative. In a story about intensified conflicts, everyone should be described first when meeting each other, without highlighting the characterization of the main characters. Each supporting character will take a turn first, the main character will say a few words, and then the supporting characters will take another turn when fighting. Even the effects of each person's moves must be described in a few sentences. Your description of humanistic skills is more detailed than that of a fairy tale. There was so much foreshadowing in "Night of Genocide", but in the end, just by looking at the title of the dozen or so chapters, I could understand the tens of thousands of words in it, which was the same as before. After reading the book for more than ten years, it was the first time that it was serialized into a big plot, which made me sick to my stomach.
It's really not ordinary💩The front is fine, but what the hell is written in the back? Even the compositions written by elementary school students are better than this
Generally speaking, it is estimated that a book written in the normal way will be less than a million words, but the various adjectives and sentences, which are like this for any supporting role or protagonist, still describe the psychology of the time, highlighting one point and hard-hitting. Descriptions of psychological activities and descriptions of combat. In the description of special psychological activities, the water is too exaggerated. Others are water in a few sentences, but this is a long paragraph of water. The protagonist's appearance is also about describing the feelings of the other party, highlighting a "pressing water", including using AI to expand it. Although there are many people using AI nowadays, to be honest, there are very few people who use AI like this. Water is irrelevant to other people. If water is removed horizontally, it is like grabbing any place where there is water and forcing it in. Each supporting character can be found out when he is desperate, and there are long descriptions... There is also the shuttle of dragon veins, and I went to the past to do it again...
It's such nonsense, the plot is so slow,
As I write, it becomes more and more confusing. I am really speechless.
There are a lot of words, not ordinary water
It's hard to imagine how horny everyone is. I can continue to read this kind of obscene article. I can't say that there is no plot logic, but it's better than none. It's very sweet. It can make Ku Da Qiu Shen and Asasi exchange each other in just one chapter. To be honest, it makes me feel sick to take on someone else's obscenity.
A three-year-old kid with absolutely no strength at all is so talkative and causing trouble everywhere! ! ! Like a fool! ! !
Why are the words always wrong at the end, up becomes down, male becomes female, low becomes high, yes becomes no, it looks weird.
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Official(90)Scraped 7d ago
It's well written. I used to have a template for your reference.
Name: Uzumaki Menma Changing state of youth Ninjutsu Fire escape: Hao fire ball, Hao fire extinguished, Hao dragon fire, Fire attachment, Tianlao, Haohuo Tianlao (inaction) Wind Escape: Vacuum Jade, Vacuum Continuous Wave, Vacuum Blade, Wind Whirl Strike, Wind Attached, Release Strike (modified from Su Nuo), Eight Cut (modified from Su Nuo) Water escape: water cut (similar to skating), water breaking wave, water formation wall, water dragon bullet, waterfall technique, water mirror technique (bug technique) Thunder Release: Thunder Cut, Gratitude Wave, Thunder Lead, Thunder Explosion, Thunder Armor Earth Escape: Yellow Spring Marsh, Inaction Transformation, Ant Hell, Sneaking in the Earth, Heart Beheading Technique, Heavy Rock, Light and Heavy Rock, Earth Current Wall, Limits of Blood Succession: Crystal Escape, Magnetic Escape, Sand Gold [Needless to say Mine Shadow, necessary for lack of money], Ice Escape, Melt Escape, Lan Escape, Melt Escape, Burn Escape, Explosion Escape, Boiling Escape Onika Mei's physique: Corpse Vein, Sharingan, Petrification Demonic Hand (in Mikazuki Theatrical Version, manifested as irreversible petrification), weather control (with Tai, JB Strong, controlling the weather and weather, combined with some ninjutsu or other blood successors will be doubled! This thing is necessary!), Tai Escape, Steel Escape [Note that in my settings, the Nine-faced Fox can each control one kind of blood successor. The full version of Oniyaluo comes with 6, so there are 15 in total. 9 Blood successors can be separated during battle! You can return to the original body when needed Awakened Blood Successor: Whirlpool, Wood Release (fused with White Zetsu cells), Samsara Eye (not yet awakened) Weapons: Thunder God's Sword, Ninja Sword Thunder Fang, homemade Ninja Sword (it's best to use Hero Water to burst the fire, it has its own chakra characteristics that can be enhanced dozens of times) Target countries: Takumi Ninja Village (Ninja Tool Resurrection Technology, this thing is also very important! Don't kill the researchers, they still have to mass-produce early scientific ninja tools!), Sora Ninja Village (aircraft carrier) Special props: Star (the fragment before the Ten-Tails seal), Grayl Vein (vitality replenishment, with some mutant abilities in the theatrical version), Dragon Vein, Box of Bliss, Hero's Water (from Taki Ninja Village, eliminating side effects and dilution, ready for battle, better than military food pills, strategic materials!) Forbidden magic: Oni Loya no Jutsu (full version, no need to eat people, only blood and some body cells are needed for complete fusion), Thunder Release·Leimeng Leiren Nine-faced Subaha, the Great Spiral Yu, Reincarnation of the Earth (full version developed by Orochimaru), Flying Thunder God Technique, Spiritual Transformation Technique, Angry Sky (can be used as a missile in the future), Self-reincarnation, Izanagi (cooperated with cloning) , teasing the God of Death), Four Symbols Seal, Bagua Seal, Earth Release·Ultimate Creation Technique·Soil of the Dead, Zero Tail Technique, Seal of Self-karma Curse Binding, Super Chakra·Seal, Crescent Moon Rasengan, Super Chakra·Rasengan. [After the inheritance of the Kong Ninja Village is obtained, the important thing is mass production and the manufacture of ammunition. At this time, Boruto's cheating future scientific ninja tool mentioned the role of inspiration. The mini scroll is shrunk by compressing ninjutsu into the scroll, and can be crushed and released when needed. This is an inspiration! You can use the sealing technique to turn the necessary ninjutsu into ammunition! Compress multiple layers of seals in the scroll. The core is [Explosive Escape], the middle layer is Wind Escape, and the outer layer is Amaterasu. It's just such a scroll! From this mass production, the middle layer can also be water escape, the outer layer can be ice escape, and so on! This is made into a mini scroll, which can be used to create "cluster bombs"! Carpet bombing! [Also, when Naruto was a child and went out with Jiraiya, Boruto's Otsutsuki Ura Shiki went back to the past. Don't waste his body samples and eyes! There are also props for traveling through time, so naturally I have to take them back and study them carefully! Okay, the above is my original template outline. The author can choose some to apply if necessary😑
It's still a novel at the beginning, but it's like a primary school composition later on.
How about not mentioning the story? Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. If you don't have inspiration for a serialized novel, you don't have to worry about filling it in. If you write about daily expenses, you can fill it with dozens of chapters. What you're afraid of is filling it in from the narrative. In a story about intensified conflicts, everyone should be described first when meeting each other, without highlighting the characterization of the main characters. Each supporting character will take a turn first, the main character will say a few words, and then the supporting characters will take another turn when fighting. Even the effects of each person's moves must be described in a few sentences. Your description of humanistic skills is more detailed than that of a fairy tale. There was so much foreshadowing in "Night of Genocide", but in the end, just by looking at the title of the dozen or so chapters, I could understand the tens of thousands of words in it, which was the same as before. After reading the book for more than ten years, it was the first time that it was serialized into a big plot, which made me sick to my stomach.
It's really not ordinary💩The front is fine, but what the hell is written in the back? Even the compositions written by elementary school students are better than this
Generally speaking, it is estimated that a book written in the normal way will be less than a million words, but the various adjectives and sentences, which are like this for any supporting role or protagonist, still describe the psychology of the time, highlighting one point and hard-hitting. Descriptions of psychological activities and descriptions of combat. In the description of special psychological activities, the water is too exaggerated. Others are water in a few sentences, but this is a long paragraph of water. The protagonist's appearance is also about describing the feelings of the other party, highlighting a "pressing water", including using AI to expand it. Although there are many people using AI nowadays, to be honest, there are very few people who use AI like this. Water is irrelevant to other people. If water is removed horizontally, it is like grabbing any place where there is water and forcing it in. Each supporting character can be found out when he is desperate, and there are long descriptions... There is also the shuttle of dragon veins, and I went to the past to do it again...
It's such nonsense, the plot is so slow,
As I write, it becomes more and more confusing. I am really speechless.
There are a lot of words, not ordinary water
It's hard to imagine how horny everyone is. I can continue to read this kind of obscene article. I can't say that there is no plot logic, but it's better than none. It's very sweet. It can make Ku Da Qiu Shen and Asasi exchange each other in just one chapter. To be honest, it makes me feel sick to take on someone else's obscenity.
A three-year-old kid with absolutely no strength at all is so talkative and causing trouble everywhere! ! ! Like a fool! ! !
Why are the words always wrong at the end, up becomes down, male becomes female, low becomes high, yes becomes no, it looks weird.










