Become an Immortal Alone

The biggest highlight of this novel is the good foreshadowing at the beginning and the end, which makes the subsequent plot full of ups and downs, very interesting, and makes people fall into a desperate situation. It is very good to watch.

After reading the beginning, I can see that the characters are well drawn, the writing is delicate, and the descriptions are also good. I hope you will continue to work hard. Bangbangda will always support you.

There are relatively few visitors to the book review section of Chuangshi, and many book friends mentioned that updates are slow. Hammer can only say sorry for this. Two updates a day, totaling 4K words. For book lovers, scanning it only takes a minute or two. But for hammers that are not very fast, it will take at least three hours. Sometimes, even four or five hours may not be enough to write in the case of Cavan. There is nothing innovative about this novel, so its results have always been low. It is also the worst-performing novel among the several novels that Hammer has written, but it is the one that has lasted the longest. I don't even know how I ended up writing it now. Orders for this novel are only two hundred. Book friends who have subscribed should know how much it costs, just a few yuan a month, and the platform will share half of the manuscript fee. It's not enough to make money just by relying on this. Hammer has to support his family, so coding can only be a part-time job. Two updates a day, almost all the time after work is spent on coding. In the past, Hammer did its best to code, updating three times a day, every day for two months in a row. I worked hard for two months in a row, but my results didn't improve. It's too tiring to write supernormal words. Therefore, for book friends who urge for updates, Hammer is powerless. Please forgive me.

The writing is really great, and every link is arranged incisively and vividly. The article is vast, people are moved by it, and I follow it. Come on, don't give up.

First of all, this book has too many shadows of mortals cultivating immortals. The golden finger that can also make elixirs and spiritual herbs grow quickly also has a bloody trial. Even the scene of meeting the heroine is similar. When I saw this, I guessed that there would be a scene where the heroine was injured and risked her life to save her. She would definitely leave through the teleportation array and go overseas when the golden elixir was not up. The plot was indeed what I guessed. To put it bluntly, the overall outline is a plagiarism of a mortal's biography of immortality. I hope that the author can get rid of the influence of mortals and write something different.

After reading hundreds of chapters, I found that the protagonist is a cold-blooded character. I only went home once during my cultivation. I could make elixirs myself, but I didn't help my parents, siblings, or improve their health. Others helped him, but he ran away not wanting to get into trouble. The author is probably a person who doesn't pay much attention to the relationship between his parents. I'm afraid your outlook on life is even more distorted. The storyline is okay. It's a bit like a mortal's journey to immortality. Give it 3 stars. Stop watching.

Fuck, the novel about cultivating immortals is written as a fantasy novel, and it is just a mortal skin. While talking about how scheming the protagonist is, he is being plotted by others at every turn, and the author's own face is swollen. No matter where he goes, there is always a passerby who will cause trouble for the protagonist. If the protagonist does not solve it, then this person will cause more trouble for the protagonist and find someone to kill the protagonist. This is repeated three or four times before the protagonist kills the passerby. After reading only a few hundred chapters, there are at least seven or eight such passers-by. They are all the same plot, cliché! And no matter how many years he has been cultivating, no matter how high his cultivation level is, this passerby's mind is not that good. How can he treat a high-level monk as a fool and live like a dog for hundreds of years? Is it possible that immortal cultivators still have Alzheimer's disease? The problem with the plot of the mortals is that there are no demented monks among the mortals.

I can only say that it is average. It looks good from the front, but becomes less and less interesting from the back. I thought the plot and battle descriptions were pretty good, so I kept reading. But as I read, I found that nearly 89% of the book is about battles, non-stop battles, constantly changing maps, and there are thousands of pages in the book without any emotional scenes, and there is no main line in the book. The protagonist jumps around like a toad, and is chased and killed by people after rising a few levels. He upgrades and chases and changes maps again and again. At first, it was okay once or twice, but later he became seriously tired of reading. Therefore, I would like to suggest that if you really want to watch it, you can abandon the part where you are chased into the sea by a man named Zhou. The rest is a routine, and I don't recommend you waste your time at all.

To me, it doesn't matter whether I imitate or not, as long as I'm not the kind of guy who likes to pretend to be a slap in the face, go around collecting gods' pets, and calling others brothers. I only saw Jin Dan Kuai Yuanying, so I stopped watching the rest of the story. I don't know whether he is a stallion or not. I don't know if he is a stallion or not. There are three women I care about at the moment, and two of these three seem to be married. As for those who like the protagonist, 80% of those I have met like him, okay?

Is it written in imitation of mortals cultivating immortality?