Abnormal Extraordinary World

Akali oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh

I have to tell the author here that I'm very sorry, I won't pursue it anymore. It's not because I don't have money or anything, but I feel like your character has collapsed. Looking at the first two hundred chapters, the protagonist you created is someone who dares to love and hate, is low-key, neither talkative nor bad-mouthed, and does not take the initiative to offend others. Since entering the void, the character panel has changed, and it has become the kind of Long Aotian, who is forced to waste, and plays all kinds of tricks. Overall, it is like a top student suddenly turned into a real elementary school student. You must have been lowered, the intelligence is so powerful! Tell me the truth. Did you ask another writer to write it later? . There are also some jokes, which are really the most deadly if they are forced to play.

Is there any from the evening clock?

I came in after reading the introduction, but I couldn't stand it after reading more than a dozen chapters. The routines are so old that you can guess what you are going to say next after reading the beginning. There is still a big problem with the protagonist's IQ. In the author's setting, the protagonist is a god-like existence in the network of another world, but he still complains about lack of money even though he has a computer? There is also the initial assembly of the computer. At first glance, there seems to be no problem, but the author just asked the heroine to mention a setting similar to that of an Internet cafe. Looking at the purpose of the protagonist's assembly of the computer, isn't it particularly stupid? I know some people will say that the protagonist can't access the Internet without an ID card, but as long as there are similar business places like this, there will be people who don't need an ID card through the back door. This is human nature. And after offending someone, he neither stood in an absolutely strong position nor made any plans. I don't know where the protagonist's inexplicable sense of superiority came from?

It's so slow, can the update be faster? Doesn't the author want to be a bit player? Wouldn't it be better to have a complementary building (✪▽✪) Ming! ! ! Isn't it okay to be careful? ? ?

The writing is so good. The author has fully written about the preservation of old technology by the people and the power of imperial technology. An ordinary person can find dozens of loopholes at once, and as long as the heat is dissipated, those mentally powerful mages cannot do it. A young lady has never played with computers. The description of the expressions of those characters is like the strongest elementary school students.

The author's handling in the early stage is foreshadowing. Do you think that a person with intellectual disabilities gradually becomes a normal person? Has he grown a lot? It seems that the protagonist has grown up quickly. Moreover, he did not kill people in the early stage because it is in line with the core socialist values. Don't fight and kill all day long. It is too violent.

This cover is so ugly that I don't want to read the book anymore. Sometimes the cover is also very important. For example, the cover of your Evening Bell is good.

I also thought about writing a novel. I applied for it and after writing the first word, I decisively gave up. Good news for newbies.

After reading Chapter 340, I really couldn't bear it. I won't say anything about it. I originally wanted to read it as a novice, but when I saw the school's saucy operations, I couldn't bear it anymore. A villain thought that the protagonist's mecha was broken and proposed a life-or-death fight. If you want to highlight that the school treats the protagonist well, you should ask the school to stop it. Okay, the protagonist is about to slap the villain to death. Your guard jumped out.