Death: Seireitei's Self-disciplined Captain

The time when this book was written is unknown, but the writing style is relatively ancient. I have collected it and haven't read it. I have been browsing it in the past few days without anything to do. I lament that the style and rhythm of this book are far behind the times. I also feel that I have just started to read this kind of writing. It is basically out of tune with the current genre. The character of the protagonist, Tsunayashiro Sakufou, is a typical early fanfic. He wants to eat more and take more... Noble status, he wants; connections, he wants; the superior favors the lower, he fears, he wants; the strength of the genius, he wants; the breakthrough in scientific research, he wants... What he does has nothing to do with the title, there is no self-discipline, and he is also the type who wants to enjoy power and not take responsibility; women, Shinigami, Arrancar, Quincy, they all want it, and they have to give it to themselves. Cultivation relies on plug-ins, and there is no such thing as self-exploration and persistence; official entertainment relies on tool people, and you don't touch it. As a time traveler, it seems that you have made a lot of changes and have to participate in everything, but you always find excuses to bring the situation back to the original plot after participating. You can only evaluate - if it is changed. In terms of plot, the earth of Pure Dragon Aotian revolves around the protagonist. The story is set before the original animation plot and during the period after the virtual event. That is to say, don't even think about Kurosaki Ichigo's main plot. This seems a bit poisonous to me, because he followed the part of the plot introduced as the background in the animation, which has a strong sense of existence but no innovation. Towards the end of the writing, I forcibly reproduced the original plot of Travel Disaster, which was specious. The specific manifestation is that he collected all the potential stocks of Kuchiki Rukia, but for fear of affecting the composition of other teams, he sent Renji and the like back to his original team on the grounds that other captains took the initiative to ask for it; because he had unreasonable thoughts about cultivating Rukia, and could not deal with the conflict with Aizen due to the existence of Hondama in her body, he forcibly set up Aizen to bury Hondama in In Hueco Mundo's enclosure movement, a series of Arrancars from Nelu were recruited in advance, and because Aizen was afraid that it would be difficult to plot the conspiracy behind the Xuye Palace, he left the group of Arrancars who worshiped the second child to Aizen... Can you see, the biggest problem is that the small head dominates the big head, and some manipulations are forcibly carried out in order to attract women, and men of the same status as women are pushed out to maintain the original plot. At the end, I have to admit that this is the most appropriate way for the author to handle it, because after the fast-paced decisive battle started, due to the plot changes, there was no reference to the original plot and a lot of original work was required, so the writing was indeed a bit messy and boring. Putting aside the plot and talking about the love line, it looks like a harem, but it is actually relatively low-level. It takes a long time to reach the base, and Shuofeng's own subjective initiative is also poor. It is a typical Japanese light novel "because I am kind, enthusiastic, and good to people, so the girls send it to me. I don't have that idea myself, but I can't let them down. It's so troublesome"... Well, the love line is like this, a mess, just stop there. With this atmosphere as the foundation, Shuofeng's path to upgrade is basically the combination of prophet and God. He knows everything, no difficulty is a problem, he has whatever he wants, and he can do whatever he wants others to do. Strength, power, women, wealth, technology, everything is there, no weaknesses, no setbacks, no effort required, no need to use your brain. Well, if you look at the above from another angle, they are the advantages of this article. After all, he followed the Long Aotian template and finished the article. He didn't do much trouble and was not very literary. The beginning was good and the middle was just the same. The quality was very stable. There are no surprises after watching it, and I won't be disgusted either. To sum it up, it's just so so.

To be promoted to captain, captain-level spiritual pressure is the most basic, and a lot of people are as surprised as if they were mentally retarded. I mentioned earlier that I want a dog but I am competing with Tosen for the captaincy. I'm really not afraid of Aizen. Although he obviously enjoys the rights of the nobility, he still hates the behavior of the Central Room 46, but in fact he looks the same I can't stand it anymore after watching it halfway through It's really rubbish, and it's still system writing. You shouldn't have any hope for system documentation

I talked about self-discipline, but I didn't see any self-discipline. The story has no main line, just click on it. Give the hammer a click. I have always said that I have no strength, but I can't see anything in the whole story where I work hard to become stronger through self-discipline. It can only be considered okay. Can see.

Overall it's pretty good, but the male protagonist's personal description is a bit unsatisfactory. We already have systems in place, but our capabilities are not digitized very much.

The author writes well. I would like to ask, will the next family and the protagonist group appear? It still didn't appear until the end.

(Personal opinion only) The first part was good, but the execution of Ichigo's father felt a bit lacking at first, and no one could really watch it. In the later period, there were too many harems, and it felt like they were collected just for the sake of collecting, which was a bit disappointing, but it was still full of confusion

I don't see any self-discipline, the plot is not interesting at all, and the protagonist has no purpose. It's like watching nonsense. It feels like nothing happened after a single operation. The top grid doesn't look good.

The timeline is too slow, and the exciting places have not been reached

The main character group almost didn't appear until the end. This fan made me feel lonely.

I haven't seen the heroine yet. Who is the author?