Douluo: Peerless Ling Guang

I don't recommend reading it. It starts high and starts low. After leaving the Noumenon Sect and entering Shrek Academy, it was a mess. It was actually fine before entering Shrek Academy. But after entering Shrek Academy, I realized that it was actually a stallion story. In just a few chapters, there were three people who were having an affair. Moreover, the first one was doing martial soul fusion skills with Ma Xiaotao, a very controversial character. It was disgusting, so I didn't read the rest. , But reading in the comment area, book friends said that they have developed a bunch of martial soul fusion skills and are just busy making stallions. There is no progress in plot 200, and after entering the Ice and Fire Eyes and getting the fairy grass, the first thing that came to mind was to raise Ma Xiaotao's attributes to the ultimate fire. I didn't think of my family. Chapter 200 gave a bunch of benefits to the Shrek women, which did not help the family at all. Holy shit, I am so speechless.

1. Multiple martial soul fusion skill partners: Not much to say about the harem, some people love it and some people hate it. But this kind of bus-like martial soul fusion is really cheap and has no outstanding effect (after winning the first soul master competition using martial soul fusion skills, it only has the function of increasing the speed of practice). 2. Clone flow: When readers advised against writing Clone flow as it could easily lead to poisonous points, the author insisted on writing Clone flow. And a large number of chapters are spent describing the clones (299 chapters in total as of the review, from the appearance of the clone in Chapter 213 to the death of the clone in Chapter 292, nearly one-third of the chapters are about the clone ), which can be said to steal the spotlight from the protagonist, which is really a poisonous point. The author did not listen to advice and was incapable of writing well. 3. Qiankun Dog Training: I thought that the clone was dead and I could return to the protagonist's plot, which was starting to feel a bit more exciting, but Qiankun trained the dog in the Valley to abuse the protagonist? Instead of giving readers more exciting plots to calm everyone's anger, it instead creates a plot where Qiankun trains Gougu Tang San to torture the protagonist and Huo Yuhao. Although the protagonist resisted the abuse of the dog and Tang San was punished by the gods for 10 years, don't you really think there is a problem? When everyone reads Douluo fanfics, don't they just read cool stories? Are you doing this? 4. Resurrection of the clone: ​​After watching the painful plot of the past few days, you revived the clone again? ? ? (Chapter 299: Clone Resurrection) You really don't listen to advice. If you don't have the ability, don't engage in these plots that are prone to poisonous points. You really can't control it. 5. There is nothing else to say. The level of this book is very different from the author's previous books. I wish you success.

I can only say that the protagonist is too disgusting. He started to double standard and lick his dog in the early stage. Although it broke out in the later stage, you have not brought any benefits to the family. The family members have not treated you well. You do not give any benefits to the family and family. You would rather give it to others than to the family and your own parents, right? Nausea! Also, in the fantasy world, one should do whatever it takes for one's own strength, but the protagonist is upright and upright, saying that the evil soul master is evil, so why don't you talk about those people in the army? Although the people he killed were not as troubled as the evil souls, they had no grudges against them. So what about the people he killed when he got married that some of them still had grudges against him? Why didn't you say that all the troops were killed too? I can only comment that the main character is disgusting, the plot is boring, and it makes people angry, so I will give it a low score and report it, and it will be withdrawn directly.

Giving a hundred thousand year soul ring is a bit outrageous. Zhang Lexuan is not qualified. He will not be of any use to the protagonist now or in the future.

I have some doubts that Huo Yuhao is actually the eye martial soul. He became the eyes + brain with Tian Meng. It was only by being nourished by Tian Meng's spiritual origin and combined with Tian Meng's soul skills that he became such a genius with dual cultivation of martial soul and soul guide.

You have really mastered the whole process. It has been dozens of chapters and you haven't even entered the plot yet. The main character's martial soul is so compatible with Tianmeng Iceworm, and he is also the original sect. You gave it to me. It's not that you don't fight without fighting. In addition, there is another word, water, and it looks ugly.

It's okay, neither good nor bad. The improvement of the protagonist and the progress of the book are too slow. I've read more than twenty Douluo fanfics. It's really rare for you to write more than a hundred chapters and you're only ten years old and your level is still at level 35. Can you write five hundred chapters to become a god at level 100? You can't write hundreds more chapters for things that have been mentioned in the world of gods. If you are passionate about creating, you can write a thousand chapters at this pace. Damn it. There is not much plot in one chapter and it is too watery. Jumping to dozens of chapters at once will not cause any problems. Anyway, the main plot is not all daily life. It is not a daily novel. What do you do to push the plot?

I'm convinced, 48 of the 50 pictures are about love. What on earth am I watching? There's no plot at all, all the girls are in the martial arts fusion server.

The protagonist never knows what he is doing. He just practices and wastes time everywhere. He doesn't know what is going on with him. The protagonist without cheats is worse than a dog. Your current setting really doesn't threaten Xiao Zha San. I really don't know if you are big-hearted or deliberately disgusting. To be honest If destruction and life are useful, he will not be forced to death in the original work. The protagonist is also very licking the dog. He talks big words and actually benefits those women all the time. Why don't I see you writing benefits for your own family? It's just a joke. Is it possible to get such a high score?

I want to ask a question, since Huo Yuhao and the protagonist follow the same route, and the protagonist keeps stealing opportunities from Huo Yuhao, is it necessary for such an opponent to be a dog? And if Tang San chose Huo Yuhao, would he let the protagonist easily enter his body? Not to mention that Destruction stared at him without intervening, and don't forget that his direct subordinates include the Poseidon Family and Haotian Sect? Secondly, even if Huo Yuhao is the son of destiny and has other opportunities, would Tang San be willing to look after Huo Yuhao and the protagonist? Besides, Huo Yuhao's character is only about the same as that of Tang San. Is it necessary to accept it?