The Legend of Dragon and Phoenix of Douluo

Author, if you finish writing this and continue to write about the heroine of Dragon King fan fiction or Gu Yuena, I will definitely hold you accountable to the end. As long as you keep writing this kind of thing, as long as I don't die, or you don't die, I will definitely hold you accountable to the end.

If Gu Yuena, the single heroine, is the only heroine, I would catch up to the end. I hope the author doesn't end it halfway through the book. I have also followed a Douluo novel before, and it was well-written and foreshadowed, but it jumped directly to the ending, which confused me. Come on, the author is optimistic about you

Is it possible to update and is there a female protagonist in this work?

It's just that Gu Yuena is too mentally retarded. The conversation between the protagonist and Gu Yuena is as awkward as the rebirth of Tang San

There are very few fanfics on Legend of the Dragon King. The quality of this one is already very good. The protagonist has a normal IQ and is self-consistent in logic.

After reading Chapter 198, what can I say? I just felt that the characters in it had no IQ, looked at things very one-sided, and said and did things that were a bit childish. (Very impulsive, without any consciousness of a high-ranking person) Whether it's the protagonist, Gu Yuena, or the Shrek Tangmen of the Temple of War, it's as if they have been forcibly subdued, and it's very uncomfortable to watch. Even if it's to advance the plot, you can't write it like this! This book was originally meant to be fun, but now what's the point of treating readers like little cuties? There may be such low-minded high-ranking people, but from God's perspective, they all look the same and have no tendency to think twice before acting. Just deadly. This book has become about forcing pleasure for the sake of pleasure. Basic character traits are not considered at all. Thinking about it, you know that becoming a high-ranking person cannot only rely on strength, but you still need to have basic tactics in Douluo.

I went there and felt that the so-called "Immortal Emperor" had lived for hundreds of millions of years and was really useless. As we all know, Douluo Continent is a hydrogen plane. The strongest Extreme Douluo seems to only live for two to three hundred years, which shows that the level of this kind of plane is appallingly low. But a guy who is known as the "Immortal Emperor" is actually afraid of the hydrogen god Tang Ricao in the end. This is like living on a pig for hundreds of millions of years. He is already ten years old and he still doesn't dare to kill Tang Ricao, right? The world where the so-called "Immortal Emperor" lives is probably just like the Douluo Continent, which is a hydrogen continent. Maybe it's not as good as that. Otherwise, a being that has been around for hundreds of millions of years is still timid. Most likely it is "Immortal Emperor" = Hydrogen God King. Anyway, just like the hydrogen plane, gods can live forever. Perhaps, this so-called protagonist is another hydrogen "Immortal Emperor" who has lived for hundreds of millions of years. What the protagonist did simply insulted the word Immortal Emperor. Pooh! ! ! ! ! !

As an old immortal who has lived for who knows how many years, after being seriously injured, I feel like I am stupid. The existence of destroying stars is so easy that you can't even break the rules of the world. Even if you are seriously injured, you are also an Immortal Emperor. What about the original level? Isn't it a basic operation to avoid all causes and effects? With all the restrictions, you might as well write about a grassroots background or a time-traveling story, that would be more reasonable. Playing with connections and relationships all day long now ruins the character. Why didn't you play with it when you were the Immortal Emperor? Gong Dou's writing is quite good, but the outline is wrong. It feels like the more I write, the more I reveal this aura of inferiority, wanting to be recognized and paid attention to by others all the time. This kind of thing is a bit disgusting to put on an old and immortal Immortal Emperor. PS: This Immortal Emperor is really low. He is not dead after being seriously injured. His essence is still there and even his body is still there. He has written it out abruptly. It is obvious that the beginning is too nb and he cannot control it later.

The most poisonous point of this book is that Tianduan still tries to be more powerful, the Immortal Emperor is really awesome, and in Chapter 429, he is still very powerful at killing gods.

I said you are not good at describing dragon and phoenix. What's wrong? You took away my description. You are good enough. Don't forget that I found you using mine.