Summon the Gods Starting from Douluo

Let's start with a thread of ideas, and eat the system from the beginning. When I saw this, I thought it was an invincible article, pretending to lead a girl to sing, but the more I read, the more confused I became. What is this thing? From Douluo to the Ultimate Class, what do you think of the author? What do you write about what comes to mind? Could it be that the villain boss at the end of your book is your own incarnation? Ahem, I'm sorry, I don't understand. In other words, you, the author, have a really powerful imagination. I admire you, I admire you.

Read the comments in Book Friends Circle In fact, I just say one thing: if you don't like it, don't complain. It's not easy for an author to write a book. If you don't like it, don't read it. If you find it annoying, then just abandon the article. You have to find a sense of presence in the book reviews, right? Besides, he is also a new author This is his first article There is no need for you to use your cunning eyes to evaluate Of course, I think what some people in the book review section said makes sense. I hope the author can clarify his ideas and write slowly Come on💪!

It's a big fight right away. Do you think this book can be saved?

Maybe my IQ is limited and I can't read your book. Goodbye when you have the chance.

I really don't understand

In fact, I think if you want to write this book, you should first write the protagonist, for example, travel to the ancient world and become a snake or something, and then get a tyrant system to evolve all the way. After evolving to the end, you will get a prop or something, and then travel through it to the Douluo plane, or be hunted down. For example, you have no choice but to use a prop and arrive in the Douluo plane, but the memory disappears, and then you evolve all the way in Douluo. Then if you insist on writing about the protagonist's hatred against Tang Sanjie, you must arrange your wife, the heroine, for example, how does he have a feud with Tang Sanjie? How did Tang San kill the protagonist when he was around? Was the protagonist not around at the time, or something? You'd better write it clearly. Then after you die, how will you write out the causes and consequences? For example, your book is about revenge right from the beginning, but the heroine is not mentioned at all. You don't know how she died, and you don't know how she got into revenge with Tang Sanjie? Then you don't know anything about the function of the system, and why she is a prehistoric creature, you didn't write it out, so it was very uncomfortable when watching it, and there was no sense of immersion. For another example, if you want to go to the Ultimate Class 1, and find the heroine in this plane, you can also write about rebirth. For example, the protagonist finds something, and then reincarnates, and then grows up in the Ultimate Class 1, and then guides and the like. I think this is better. Personal opinion, don't spray.

Emmm From a personal point of view, I think the plot is very "magical". To be honest, after reading more than ten chapters, I feel like I can't stand it anymore. I don't mean to criticize the author Da Da, and I don't mean to criticize the author Da Da. It's just that I think the dark novels written by the author are like invincible + cool novels. The dark novels are very cold, ruthless, and violent, but Yes, the author, you are quite cold and ruthless in the first few chapters, and it is basically unreadable later on. Moreover, I think the character setting written by the author is very inconsistent. There must be a transition between time travel stories. The plot develops very fast, which is not a good thing. If the manuscript is not saved, it may lead to a break or the palace. Finally, I really don't criticize the author!

What? Messy

Are we the kind of little brats who can't watch the plot 😂😂😂😂

It makes people a little curious as to what will happen next. To be honest, after reading the second chapter, I thought I would not be able to stand it anymore. However, my name is Zhang Yiyao, okay! ! ! !