My Pokemon Player

A standard game-farming genre, a very popular genre, and this should be the first Pokémon-themed book. I'm not saying it's morally bad, but if you don't care about your deeds, the protagonist is a waste, a hypocrite, a prodigal, and a hypocritical collection. As an adult before time travel, after time travel, he knows that he has constant internal and external troubles. There has just been a big disaster inside, the old lord is missing, and the residents of the city are in a low mood. It is a wonderful description of how miserable the protagonist is inside now. There is not enough food to eat, not enough wood, and the house is destroyed. The first thing to do with resources is to squander it. It's not like the protagonist doesn't know the value of Poké Balls. Why would you use Poke Balls to restrain Pokémon as your friends? Why use Poké Balls on Pokémon when the favorability level is full? At the same time, you don't want to use Pokémon as a tool, but at the same time you want to continue fighting to capture the world view. If you really want to be equal, go for the personal stream to mold the players into super newbies and let them fight Pokémon head-on. It is forbidden to capture Pokémon. The first thing to do when you get the Pokémon ball is to subdue the two Pokémon around you who are full of favorability. I am confused. People are confused. It is originally free. Without the golden finger, the protagonist is a waste. With the golden finger, the protagonist is still a waste. He has no confidence in what he says and no ideas in doing things. The waste flow protagonist in the title refers to the protagonist's state of mind. If the protagonist's qualifications are waste, it is understandable, but forget it about the state of mind. The first farming summons players are still Pokémon-themed. I am looking forward to this. The result is this

The setting of summoning players in Pokémon is very interesting, so I was very interested in it at first when I discovered this book. I read about 200 chapters in one go while I was happy, but then I gradually felt uninterested and had no particular desire to continue reading. The description of the plot is really not very good. To summarize, for example, two people are talking: A says a sentence and writes what A is thinking, B replies to A, B sees through what A is thinking and successfully counteracts it, and then writes that A hears B's answer and knows that B sees through what he is thinking... It is probably mainly this type of repetition. The descriptions are extremely boring, and the plot is written a lot. It took me a long time to figure out why I don't want to read it anymore (I personally need to find out the reasons why I don't like it, and summarize it so that I can give up earlier next time, and I don't have to read a lot of it to realize that I am a little resistant). No wonder I sometimes finish reading a chapter as if I haven't read anything, because for me, it is equivalent to writing a few sentences or even nothing at all. It feels like the author wants to make the protagonist a savior (something like this), wants to put the protagonist's status very high, and occasionally mentions that Pokémon and humans can coexist peacefully and become friends (roughly this is what it means). At first glance, it is exciting, but after calming down and observing the full text, you will find that it is really blunt. Such a protagonist needs to have excellent abilities and charisma. He is not supposed to be a savior, so he is really a savior when written. Some texts never mention saving the world, but every word and deed of the protagonist is about saving the world. Some texts talk about saving the world, but in fact it seems hypocritical. This is because the protagonist actually written by the author cannot reach this level, so it looks particularly funny after a certain chapter... The protagonist likes to pretend very much. Forget about pretending, the author also writes down the entire process of the protagonist's pretending, clearly and word by word, for fear that something is missing... What is true cannot be faked, what is false cannot be true, and if you cannot become an excellent leader, you cannot be one. No matter how much you pretend, you cannot change your inner self. It is useless to force the system (or similar plug-ins) to make up for the lack of ability. Hmm... Am I asking too much? This is completely different from the emotional feedback that some excellent fans give me... After a long time, when I think about those works now, I can really like the protagonists from the bottom of my heart, and I can also think of one or two supporting characters. Occasionally, I want to revisit some of my favorite clips, but this is not the case. I am only endlessly confused. Give it two stars, one star for the author's courage and hard work, and one star for this interesting setting. Note: There is a time limit for evaluation and will be reserved until February 2, 2024. If the author improves or modifies the article, resulting in the evaluation not meeting the requirements, please remind me to re-read and change the evaluation.

Pokémon ✘Farming is the current popular writing method, and adding a fourth natural disaster is a novel writing method. I could give it five stars in the early stage, but after seeing the latest 50 chapters, I can only give it three stars. The author explained that the Kingdom Age could not withstand the fourth natural disaster, so the number was deliberately limited. But what follows is nothing more than awkward power struggles and battles in the Pokémon novel. The nonsense is chapter by chapter, and the actual content can often be summarized in just one or two sentences or dozens of words. Please make it clear that the theme of this book is Pokémon ✘ Players OK? Not to mention that the number of players is so small, but every player is so honest, obeying the lord's orders to farm, fight, and lurk, making the players no different from NPCs who can be resurrected. The scope of activities is the territory and a city allowed by the protagonist. They are all good babies and don't do anything cool. In the last hundred chapters, the players are all tool men. Their appearance is to prepare the protagonist for his appearance, and then the protagonist jumps out and explains in a long way, nonsense, and even plays awkward and sensational games with Chaomeng. It's not that I can't describe the protagonist, but a Pokémon protagonist plays tricks and talks about development every day, but the actual progress is very little. Isn't it disgusting? 😎 Let's just talk about the Guanhai City controlled by the businessman. It has appeared in hundreds of chapters and hundreds of thousands of words. After deciding to fight it, I spent hundreds of thousands of words and I basically forgot about the story of gathering intelligence and burying players undercover.~_~ With two dragons and even more Pokémon, it should have been pushed forward long ago. The nonsense is written in a few chapters. In addition to being a time traveler who plays tricks on his mind, the protagonist is also a stingy miser. The more clumsy the author is, the more I feel that the protagonist's image is like Lu Mingfei in the Pokémon world. The difference is that Lu Mingfei will continue to be a waste after his life, but the protagonist does not dare to become a waste by relying on alpaca cheats. 😐 Other time-travelers have plug-ins given by Yangtuo, and players with unlimited respawning have taken off early. The theme of this book is Pokémon farming? OK! One million words will unify the kingdom and carry out large-scale farming with national infrastructure. Two million words will unify the whole world and carry out regional agriculture based on local conditions. Three million words will sit on the Double Dragon of Time and Space and lay down the future Pokémon world to carry out new era agriculture! Is that okay? Where is this book? The protagonist has two to three million words and only seven towns! 😋1/10 Of the southeastern province of an ancient kingdom has not been captured, and a broken Guanhai City has been dragged out for hundreds of thousands of words without starting a war! 😎 I wrote a good review for this book before and recommended it to book friends. Now I apologize. I didn't expect the book to be so bad.

Emmmm, to be honest, I wrote a similar Pokémon article before (handwritten for my classmates to read), but then I stopped writing it due to time constraints. Now that I think about it, it's still a bit regretful. I no longer have the motivation to create. After reading your book, I feel that my dream has come true. I won't say anything about the writing and plot. I'll give it 5 stars first. I'll point out if there are any problems.

I have been following this book since a long time ago, and frankly, I am very disappointed, very disappointed. I can understand that the author is in a bad state after an accident at home, but I can't tolerate the author bringing up the basin every day (it's still watery). The theme of this book: Pokémon + the fourth natural disaster + farming/Western-style lord struggle. The theme was very novel at the time, but the author's writing skills were not good enough or his ideas were wrong, resulting in this book becoming more and more rubbish. The biggest problems are going off topic, lots of nonsense, and slow progress. From the beginning, the author made it clear that the protagonist Ryan's goal is to reverse the ancient people's understanding of Warcraft and establish a kingdom where humans and Pokémon coexist harmoniously. Then what? The awkward aristocratic struggle, the self-described detailed strategy explanation, and a supporting role to brag about how great the protagonist Ryan is. At present, there are more than 2.6 Million words. Where is the progress of the unification? Several towns + Guanhai City + affiliated maritime territory, less than half of the southeastern province and less than one-tenth of a feudal country. It would take hundreds of thousands of words to defeat Guanhai City even though it was clearly overwhelming in terms of combat power (he also talked about hundreds of thousands of words of nonsense before the fight). For example, Shi Hao, Xiao Yan, Han Li, Li Huowang, Klein, Luo Feng, and Wang Lin teamed up to face off against Lao Da in a helicopter. The seven people surrounded Lao Da and elbowed each other for a long time. In the end, they succeeded in dragging the helicopter down before they won. They almost passed the level with full health (Li Huowang took a draw midway and started elbowing his teammates, causing some injuries). The forced protagonist Ryan comes together from time to time to put on a show of nobility, and then the players will brag about it, the opponents will praise it, and the friendly NPCs will lick it. The author also knows that the fourth natural disaster is a dimensionality reduction attack on feudal kingdoms, so he openly stated that he deliberately suppresses players. The result? It's just that the number of players has been unable to increase, and the players' Pokémon have also been unable to grow. After one or two million words, there are still players whose Pokémon are in the first and second forms (less than level 30). Each player is more filial to Ryan than to his biological father, and strictly obeys all orders of Ryan. So far, no player has done anything fancy. Players are like absolutely loyal NPCs summoned by the system. Their role is to work for the protagonist Ryan and talk a lot of nonsense for the author to write. It's understandable to a small number of players, and it's understandable if the author wants to write more carefully, but the author has never accepted the opinions that people have started to raise since the book was one million words long. The greatest advantage of the author of this book is that he does not delete comments and insists on finishing the book and giving readers an ending. It's like an elderly parent who never listens to what others say, but he only cares about you, so he hungry and heats up the leftovers he saved overnight and serves them to his children. Children who are financially independent have a complicated mind. They don't know whether to complain that their parents eat leftovers every day and hurt their health, or to move their parents to consider themselves wholeheartedly. "My Pokémon Player", what do readers want to see? It is the bond with Pokémon. It is the explosion of the bond that brings miracles and victory. It is the lawless mentality of the fourth natural disaster that is firmly locked by the bond. It wants to do things but doesn't dare to do them. It creates a lot of ridiculous but full of courage, love, chaos, adventure, and growth. The author may not be a Pokémon fan, he may not be a player, and he may not even write the book just for rice. But at least, 2.6 Million words have been written. At least the author should learn what a Pokémon farming article should have? March 23, 2025, a book lover.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not delicate enough, and the description of some characters can be said to be poor. For example, the farmer NPC in Chapter 27 is really an NPC. When he appears, he looks down on him. However, the player casually talks about some agricultural knowledge and agrees with it. Not to mention how they know whether the player is right or wrong without practice. He appears arrogant and does not fit the image of an honest and honest farmer. OK, arrogant. Let's be arrogant. Later, the players start to agree with each other as soon as their tiger bodies are shaken. Is this... Is the contrast too big? Isn't this just a pure NPC? Another example is the assassin in Chapter 34... Arrogant and talkative. If he can't succeed in a sneak attack, he will attack directly. If he can't, he will continue to stab. He will not run away when he is attacked. His main character is self-confidence... It's too dramatic. Generally speaking, the subject matter is good, but the details are still not that interesting. I need to work harder.

I always feel that the author makes the players too obedient, just like marionettes, and does not reflect the characteristics of the fourth natural disaster at all. None of the dozens of people tried to find bugs (only more than 200 chapters have been read so far). Just like the elf coin, it is just a simple metal product. It is too easy to imitate. Even if the players are afraid of being banned from making fakes, wouldn't they still encourage the natives to make fakes, and then find ways to rationally clean them up? Moreover, the author always uses account ban as an excuse. If the account ban can really dispel the player's death-seeking mentality, can it still be called the fourth natural disaster? In addition, the types of players are too simple. There are dozens of players who are all doing missions, and none of them likes adventure or seeking death. Just like when everyone goes out to play, when they arrive in a strange place, shouldn't they be curious, familiarize themselves with the local conditions, and then continue to explore? Switching to the game world, there will always be a few players who only like traveling and don't like liver tasks. Especially in this kind of world where Pokémon exists, there will only be more players who like traveling. Fortunately, the author has written many times about how well the protagonist builds his territory, but after reading more than two hundred chapters, I still feel that the protagonist's territory construction is extremely chaotic. There is no long-term goal, no preliminary ideas and plans, and no rules for player training. Instead, it is more about taking it one step at a time, relying entirely on the rewards obtained from lottery draws to promote development and construction.

If you can accept wisdom, it is a good book. Anyway, I took the poison twice before I could resist it. Some of the extremely toxic plots in the early stage, after getting over them, I found that the author also made things right. Let's talk about some poisonous points. 1. Realistic side-play combat upgrades the poisonous worldview. To be honest, when it was said in the first few chapters that the only way to improve your strength is to upgrade in combat, I felt that the author was a loser. Before writing, I didn't investigate the experience of my predecessors. Have you ever seen any book with a world view that is popular because of the elf text that upgrades combat? At most, combat upgrades are the prerogative of the protagonist, not the world view. However, around the 100th chapter, the author also made timely adjustments and changed it so that under the influence of Arceus, only the player's combat upgrade is obvious, and the other aborigines are still more realistic. 2. In the ancient background, the poisonous logic of modern science and technology appears. When I saw that you started to use modern technology, and you used it on a large scale, and it was completely unreasonable, I gave up the book on the spot. It feels like a mindless article. That is to say, Shu Huang, seeing that you have many words, comes back to lick them. It turned out that things got rounded out later. It has to be said that the author's imagination was still good, and he directly set the protagonist as a person who comes into contact with the future. Players speculate that they may be people from the future, or ancient people who have been in contact with the future. It is also creative that around chapter 450, there is a time travel, allowing players to get in touch with Xiaozhi, thereby perfecting the character. It perfectly explains the technological background of the protagonist. 3. The pace is too slow. Although most Pokémon fandoms are slow-paced, your plot and protagonist's character can't seem to be slow. There are so many things in daily life, and the level rises so slowly. It took almost two million words to barely survive the village fighting and come to the city battle. The mythical beasts that appear on the stage are just spectators, and the protagonist is weak. The players are useless, they are all low level and none of them are good. Yalang in front was even more forgotten and useless. But fortunately, the last few dozen chapters are good, and the following chapters should be much better. But that would probably be the case if it ended hastily. At first glance, this plot is just in the middle. If it doesn't have more than 3.5 Million words, it's probably a bad book. It is similar to the elf world next door that starts from scratch. The plot of the next dozens of chapters and hundreds of chapters is completed directly. 4. For trainers, if they don't have anything of their own, they will only rely on cheating and fighting to upgrade. To put it bluntly, it's cliche. The author's understanding of trainers is the understanding of players. There is nothing to talk about except battles, and the battle skills are not outstanding. Not as good as readers who play games. No real-life context is brought into it. This is why I gave up for the second time. It feels too bland. Apart from the battle and the daily life of the territory, there is nothing attractive. I feel like the author cannot write about Pokémon-related things. The biggest failure is the future technology in the early stage. Especially the skill learner really reduced my enthusiasm for reading. When watching Pokémon fan fiction, besides the players' tactics, isn't the greatest joy in cultivating Pokémon? But this book has almost nothing to say about elf cultivation. It is a continuous learning tool and a battle upgrade. Very boring. I think this point is very well written in two similar books that have already become high-quality products. One is "Starting the Elf World from Scratch", which is also an ancient text. It doesn't have any system and relies purely on technology. The elves become stronger by exercising themselves and upgrading the world view without fighting. It's all about nurturing. Learning skills also relies on the training and training of trainers. In the ancient world, the venues and props needed to learn skills all depended on the protagonist's imagination. Learn stronger skills, understand the essence of skills, become stronger, and finally cultivate ordinary elves to be stronger than legendary elves. In the process of leading the development of the elven territory, the protagonist established the Elf Alliance, and relied on the ordinary elves he cultivated to defeat the old forces that were said to be protected by elves one after another. The only bad thing about that book is that the ending is sloppy, almost bad, otherwise it would be at least on the same level as the Elf Master. The second book is naturally the well-known elf literature masterpiece "The Elf Master". This book is also very powerful in terms of cultivation, almost as good as "The Elf World from Zero". Whether it is training ideas or skills learning methods, both books achieve the combination of elves and trainers. For example, it is very classic. Ibrahimovic learned the power of emotion by learning the skill of repaying a favor, and the trainer provided brainstorming to let Ibrahimovic use the emotional energy of repaying a favor to strengthen himself, achieving an exercise effect that is more than ten times better than cumbersome use of exercise props. This is just one of those little nurturing things. Anyone who has read the following will understand. Finally, the protagonist also defines the gold content of a legendary trainer. Legendary trainers are those trainers who have cultivated ordinary elves into legendary elves (high legends), defeated high legends one-on-one, and conquered high legends. The only shortcoming of that book is that it doesn't have a female protagonist. It can be said that the emotional drama is terrible. There were several things that were ambiguous at first, but in the end nothing happened.

So far, it seems pretty good. It has the feel of Lord Elf writing, but also has the existence of the fourth natural disaster, and can coordinate the relationship between the two. At least for the moment, I don't feel any discomfort. The author, please give me a lot of encouragement. I hope you don't need eunuchs. There is an elf lord eunuch who initially favored Scorpio. I hope you can last longer. I would like to give you some suggestions, elf rations and human rations. There is still a slight difference. Although you can eat with humans, after all, tree fruits are better. You can issue some tasks to collect tree fruits later. I remember that the fields are planted with crops. The pace is a bit fast. One hundred changes is a bit too much. The Pokémon accepts it too exaggeratedly. Basically, there are more elves than people, and the food problem is a headache.

Author, I actually quite like this book. There are a few requirements, I hope you can meet them. About the copy. The first one is to hope that Yuye Kuangdao and the others can go to Sinnoh to debate with Shinji. The most essential difference is that although these players also choose Pokémon, they still regard Pokémon as friends. Never engage in high-intensity training with complete disregard for their health. As for Shinji, that goes without saying. The second thing is that I hope to go to the Carlos area. Well, Serena or Serena. Different version of the name. Anyway, when it comes to Ash's heroines, I like this one better. I hope the players can tell them carefully, Xiaozhi looks really anxious. Without directly confirming the relationship, at least let Xiaozhi understand Serena's feelings. The third point is that I hope players can understand Xiaozhi's life-release stories. Let the players tell Xiaozhi that this is wrong and bring back all the Pokémon that were released. Especially that Bi Diao. One more thought. Just let Ling Dang participate in that gorgeous contest. In the form of a saint from the Five Poisons Sect. Just like Harry, dressed like a demonic saint. Showing the terror of those poisonous snakes and insects.