Lord of Devouring Starry Sky

Like first. The humans in Devouring World looked quite unhappy. First of all, the original ancestor, who also trained a master of the universe sea, ended up going to seize the universe in a panic. The key is that he did not leave any assets for the clan. Later, when it comes to giant axes, just take a broken ax and go waste it. You really deserve to die. I don't think it's wrong. Just because of the human race's attitude towards the Earth's lineage, they can raise their will, open their mouths, and dedicate themselves to the race. From this, it can be inferred that the original lineage of the Yan God Clan could have been taken away or even had their bloodline extracted? Personally I think it's very possible. King Jin's body arrived, and the human race made a huge mess. **, Kill all the masters of the universe and make enemies all over the world. The result was good, ordinary humans were killed by aliens. Who will bear the blame? Obviously, the protagonist, City Lord Luo, needs to bear the responsibility, and Xueying comes from behind.

The setting is quite interesting, but I always feel that the protagonist has an indescribable stupidity, and it is a bit too open-minded. I accidentally discovered a place with the legacy of the beast god. I harvested hundreds of heavy treasures, several treasures, souls, realms, and palaces at once. It's awkward beyond description, and the clone is even more outrageous. I would rather see you get a clone through the genes of other races, rather than evolve a clone that is exactly the same as yourself. This is quite boring. It's better to write less about the plot of soul separation in another world. After all, you are here just to watch the star-devouring sky. If your other world takes up almost half of the plot, it will be difficult to get into it.

Can the world of Pagoda written in the skin of Devouring Starry Sky and Emperor Yan be cleared up? The original setting of Emperor Yan is a selfish and narrow-minded person...

Swallowing the Starry Sky and writing about Hammer brothers, can we fight together or make progress together? Do we have a common voice? Nerve

Alas, it's almost 20 chapters, and the author has really learned to hold back. I hope it won't get closer to a "female porn revenge article" (just pulling back and forth on one center: "How did the human race treat me back then") Wouldn't it be nice to just have some fun? The plot progress of these twenty chapters is too slow, and I have no desire to read it (click here=See the title=Oh, keep waiting) Really, the last 20 chapters are like a megaphone, a reason for arresting the protagonist is passed around, and then depending on the reactions from all parties, it's gone! ! ! [Most of the fans who read "Swallow" are boys, and they are also concerned about the advancement of the plot (except lsp). But the author, you have been piling up emotions in the last 20 chapters. To be honest, it is really not important. Instead, it makes the protagonist look like a joker. As a time traveler, I think no matter how long it takes, I will remember that I am in the second life. Is there a real sense of belonging? To some extent, in the world of Devouring, the gathering of thousands of great powers is what is truly attractive. The recent 20 chapters about the protagonist's betrayal/transformation have been too ink-tabulous (you have been updating more than once these days, but you have been slow to advance the plot). The recent episode of Star Prison made me forget the previous plot😅 (after all, I am not just reading this Devouring book)] I saw Chapter 157 today, "Jue Ran". I hope it will improve the rhythm. It was updated at 00:01 just now. I went to watch it! OK, look, today, I rebelled! ! ! Pick up the rhythm! ! ! ! !

The writing is okay, but the Devouring Stars fandom only writes about one-tenth of the original universe. Deleting these has nothing to do with Devouring the Stars fandom.

The setting is good, and the writing is new, but the plot is too slow, and the author's writing skills are also a bit poor, especially the world of Pagoda, which is too slow. Since it is in the small universe or secret realm of an unknown strongman in the Origin Continent, it should combine the advantages of both, the ultra-high clarity of the laws of the Origin Continent, and the ten thousand times the time flow rate of the Cosmic Sea. Moreover, the protagonist feels indescribably stupid.

Very good. Finally, there is someone who is anti-human. Those disgusting faces are no different from those of today's capitalists. I felt sick when I watched it. I give it a five-star rating.

Anyway, I personally don't have any great affection for the human race and always want to rob the earth. . Anyway, I am from Earth and someone is robbing your house. . Kick you out. . I don't have any good impressions

Writing Emperor Yan as a woman is also a fool. Have you never seen a woman? See a hole and want to insert it? You are an idiot even if you change the basic settings of the original work. If you like to change the original work so much, why don't you write your own book to create a fanfic?