Across the Heavens Chat Group

The levels are too confusing and inconsistent. Ip Man is at most one level higher. A mortal can reach 3 levels. Keisha is only 4 years old. Everyone is almost immortal. I just laughed.

It's really my fault for reading with my head in my head! ! !

To be honest, I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter. After traveling through eighteen years, I can't become a warrior if I can't do it! Is this funny? It has been more than ten years since you had your memories, but you still don't know how important your childhood learning is? Even if you are not a fool, you can learn something! What's more, traveling through time and becoming the heir of a marquis

I can't understand it at all, it's very confusing and I can't even read it smoothly.

Many people say that there is a problem with the division of strength, but I think it is very reasonable. The further back you go, the bigger the gap becomes.

The front is okay, but the back is a mess

The level is average. I doubt that the author didn't even call out the heroes of the super-god universe and the descendants of the heavens. When fighting, they would only fight hand-to-hand. The characteristics of different planes are not used at all. Will angels also take a fancy to Superman's genetic technology? The super-god universe explodes stars, splits planets, creates things from the sky, and rewrites reality in eight ways. Even dark energy cannot be used. Without the sun, it is meat on the chopping block. The magic power that Pig's Feet worked so hard to develop is not as good as the divine drive of a genetic engine. Equipped with the Ambition Engine, it is even more immortal as long as the dark data exists. And Gu Yi wouldn't dare to use time at will.

After persisting for 25 chapters, I decided to give it one star⭐It's so confusing that I can't understand it. Ip Man is level 3, and King of Angels Kesha is level 4. The levels are all unreasonable.

Brainless fun? Just have fun and don't care about logic at all

1: I suggest the author to read more popular Wanjie Qunliu books. 2: The author pays attention to punctuation marks and the division of natural paragraphs 3: It is recommended that the author should not be invincible all at once, but instead introduce some time travellers, reincarnations, reincarnations, rebirths, etc. There should be some good and some bad, not all bad. 4: I suggest the author not to be lazy and write in the following way: Protagonist: A new member has joined the group! Everyone is welcome! Actor 1: Welcome newcomers! Actor 2: Welcome newcomers! ... 5: Also, it is recommended that the author can write about the real world, add novels, movies, comics, animations, movies, etc., And not always have it in reality, but add more original works by the author. However, it is better not to use them in the early stage. After all, the author's writing style is not mature yet. Be more original in the later stage, but not too much, otherwise the protagonist will not be easy to play. Also, in the later stage, the protagonist's dreams can truly predict the future, otherwise it will not be fun. By the way, don't always spoil the story, otherwise it will not be easy to play. 6: It is recommended to add some awareness of the way of heaven and the great road, otherwise it is not very good. After all, they are also possible. There should not be only one chat group. It is recommended to write some bad time travelers to send chat groups specifically to the protagonist, such as the two-dimensional chat group, the ten thousand worlds chat group, the red envelope chat group, the three worlds chat group, the anti-travelers chat group, the master chat group... And so on.