Lord of Ashes
About This Novel
My name is Zhang Yanhang. I am an ordinary awakened person and a part-time college student. I live a monotonous life of three o'clock and one line every day. I go to school, practice, and go home. I neither smoke nor drink. My only hobby is to observe human beings when time is suspended. I thought this boring life would last forever, but when I was lying in bed getting ready to sleep that night, I unexpectedly encountered some interesting things. [Do you want to enter the world of ashes? ][Option 1: Yes (Successfully entered the Ashes World and gained the ability to digitize the body and the channel to become stronger, at the cost of staying up late and being late for school tomorrow.)][Option 2: No (Refuse to enter the Ashes World but felt that going to bed immediately was a waste, so he started playing games all night and practicing at the same time, at the cost of staying up late and causing morning sickness. You will be late for school tomorrow. )] [Option 3: Ignore this option for the time being (it is recommended for patients with difficulty choosing this option. Afterwards, you will sleep at two o'clock in the morning wondering whether to enter the ashes world. The price is that you may be late for school tomorrow because of staying up late.)] Ps: The protagonist is not a virgin, he is decisive in killing, and his brain circuit is different from ordinary people. If you don't like it, don't complain.
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Official(77)Scraped 19d ago
The book is good and the creativity is good too
But can you please stop being so watery? This is the first time in a long time that I have said that the writing is watery. After one chapter, 40% of the items are introduced repetitively, 40% of the protagonist's mental activities, and 20% of the plot advances. The first few chapters are okay, but then there is a lot of repetitive content.
This is too watery
Why do you have to repeat a paragraph several times? It's a bit too verbose. One attribute appears three times in one chapter, and some words are said repeatedly. Sometimes two or three chapters can't say a key point. Forget it, the free chapters are still available, and the paid chapters are still available. I'm not in the mood to read anymore.
The sea, you are all water
The sea, you are all water, the horse, you have four legs What a great plot. The author is telling you that you can't always keep dungeons in the future. It's so repetitive that I'm not interested anymore. I've kept more than 40 dungeons in a row and it's still a dungeon? Can't there be some other plot? Author, have you forgotten the real world? ㄟ(▔,▔)ㄏ
Not bad
The setting is so good, why is it so watery! ! ! Ah! The introduction is too detailed. In fact, in many cases, the data does not need to be too detailed, as long as the relevant content is introduced. And then there's still water. For example, if you want to advance, you have gathered the materials and met the conditions, and then you end up with a whole chapter explaining how to advance. I cried! Obviously you can take a wave, but you have to go through the psychological process of promotion. I'm so anxious that I want to eat the baby!
The writing is good, but the author is also really good at it
It took me some time to read Chapter 50, so I will post a preliminary book review. There are a lot of descriptions at the beginning. Many people talk about water. I think it is too wordy. There are some parts that can be mentioned in the front and can be omitted later. They are completely repeated every time, and it is within one chapter. Do you believe it if you say this is not water? Although free chapter water is not a problem. But not paying attention to the places that should be omitted is really quite discouraging. It's refreshing and unfocused. If it weren't for the current book shortage, I would have withdrawn it within three chapters. . . There are no other questions. If there are any, I will continue to fill them in after reading them.
It's a pretty good novel, thank you to the author for your hard work! ! !
Invincible in the water world
Really, it's too watery. There were still some improvements in the middle. It can be seen that some things have been removed, but there are still not many changes. Many unnecessary things are written with a lot of words, but the serious plot is a bit lacking. For example, the protagonist has become almost invincible in the second introduction, and the first-level monsters also took a lot of space to write, so some of them are unbearable later. The plot can be skipped by more than a dozen scenes without any impact. I sincerely recommend that the word count is less.
No heroine
I found it from the No Heroine Bar, and then checked it out, it's pretty good,
The sea! all water
I quite like the author's style, but it's a bit too watery. Be careful about peeing at night
A little water
But I like it: water, water, water, you are all water.
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Official(77)Scraped 19d ago
The book is good and the creativity is good too
But can you please stop being so watery? This is the first time in a long time that I have said that the writing is watery. After one chapter, 40% of the items are introduced repetitively, 40% of the protagonist's mental activities, and 20% of the plot advances. The first few chapters are okay, but then there is a lot of repetitive content.
This is too watery
Why do you have to repeat a paragraph several times? It's a bit too verbose. One attribute appears three times in one chapter, and some words are said repeatedly. Sometimes two or three chapters can't say a key point. Forget it, the free chapters are still available, and the paid chapters are still available. I'm not in the mood to read anymore.
The sea, you are all water
The sea, you are all water, the horse, you have four legs What a great plot. The author is telling you that you can't always keep dungeons in the future. It's so repetitive that I'm not interested anymore. I've kept more than 40 dungeons in a row and it's still a dungeon? Can't there be some other plot? Author, have you forgotten the real world? ㄟ(▔,▔)ㄏ
Not bad
The setting is so good, why is it so watery! ! ! Ah! The introduction is too detailed. In fact, in many cases, the data does not need to be too detailed, as long as the relevant content is introduced. And then there's still water. For example, if you want to advance, you have gathered the materials and met the conditions, and then you end up with a whole chapter explaining how to advance. I cried! Obviously you can take a wave, but you have to go through the psychological process of promotion. I'm so anxious that I want to eat the baby!
The writing is good, but the author is also really good at it
It took me some time to read Chapter 50, so I will post a preliminary book review. There are a lot of descriptions at the beginning. Many people talk about water. I think it is too wordy. There are some parts that can be mentioned in the front and can be omitted later. They are completely repeated every time, and it is within one chapter. Do you believe it if you say this is not water? Although free chapter water is not a problem. But not paying attention to the places that should be omitted is really quite discouraging. It's refreshing and unfocused. If it weren't for the current book shortage, I would have withdrawn it within three chapters. . . There are no other questions. If there are any, I will continue to fill them in after reading them.
It's a pretty good novel, thank you to the author for your hard work! ! !
Invincible in the water world
Really, it's too watery. There were still some improvements in the middle. It can be seen that some things have been removed, but there are still not many changes. Many unnecessary things are written with a lot of words, but the serious plot is a bit lacking. For example, the protagonist has become almost invincible in the second introduction, and the first-level monsters also took a lot of space to write, so some of them are unbearable later. The plot can be skipped by more than a dozen scenes without any impact. I sincerely recommend that the word count is less.
No heroine
I found it from the No Heroine Bar, and then checked it out, it's pretty good,
The sea! all water
I quite like the author's style, but it's a bit too watery. Be careful about peeing at night
A little water
But I like it: water, water, water, you are all water.
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My name is Zhang Yanhang. I am an ordinary awakened person and a part-time college student. I live a monotonous life of three o'clock and one line every day. I go to school, practice, and go home. I neither smoke nor drink. My only hobby is to observe human beings when time is suspended. I thought this boring life would last forever, but when I was lying in bed getting ready to sleep that night, I unexpectedly encountered some interesting things. [Do you want to enter the world of ashes? ] [Option 1: Yes (Successfully enter the world of ashes and gain the ability to digitize the body and a channel to become stronger, at the cost of staying up late and being late for school tomorrow.)] [Option 2: No (I refused to enter the world of ashes but felt that going to bed immediately was a waste, so I started playing games all night and practicing at the same time, at the cost of staying up late and being late for school tomorrow.)] [Option 3: Ignore it for the time being (It is recommended for patients with difficulty choosing this option. Afterwards, you will have trouble sleeping all night long, wondering whether to enter the ashes world. You will fall asleep at two o'clock in the morning. The price is that you may be late for school tomorrow because of staying up late.)] Ps: The protagonist is not a virgin, he kills decisively, and his brain circuit is different from ordinary people. If you don't like it, don't complain.
Everyone has their own opinions on whether the writing is good or not, and even the crazy Shui probably doesn't have an opinion.
Five-star recommendation:★★★★★ Looking. I thought it would fall on the ground, but unexpectedly it hung on the pine tree. Of course, this is not the point. Since he used the word "aftertaste", it means that the key point is the taste. When he stood next to Zhao Yalan, he I felt a sour smell that went straight to Tianling Gai. If As expected, this sour smell is highly irritating. The smell should come from Zhao Yalan's soles and exercise shoes. It is precisely because I feel this strong stimulation The sour smell of sex caused Zhang Yanhang to directly hide his power and Name, after kicking off the sneakers, I didn't even have time to appreciate the rear Continued changes simply slipped away. Although there may be some professionals who are happy to see you What did the staff do to Zhao Yalan's feet? This is sour and satisfying enough Awesome! ' And other evaluations, but Zhang Yanhang is obviously not That kind of person.
Big water fish, very watery
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