Resurrection of Spiritual Energy: the Great Pluto of All Realms

What annoys me the most is that a woman appears at the beginning, and the writing is very annoying.

Isn't this the same subject matter and similar plot as the new book by the author of I Have a City in the Heavens? Are you imitating him? However, his new book Eunuch has been in the works for a long time. He said that the plot was too messy and he changed it a few times and felt that it could not be written down later, so he just turned into Eunuch. He didn't write many chapters. Yours is the same routine as what he wrote. I don't know if you can write it down in the future.

So far it's quite to my liking. I've given you two monthly passes.

To innovate, call three people, what the hell is Huang Rong, she is in many such books, what are her advantages, beauty, I have no feeling, I have read all the versions, and you are a king, you must have your own character, you don't have the ability to talk to others so much, just let them think about it, each one is forty, fifty, or more than a hundred, who can't figure it out?

The first three chapters directly persuade you to quit. This was written ten years ago, right?

Chapter 1: There are conflicts and there are slaps in the face, but isn't this slap in the face too embarrassing? Then, the writing is not fluent and confusing; the key is that the protagonist still looks not very smart, how does he live to the age where he can share a single apartment with others? Seeing that woman named "Su Tiantian" speak, it was so poisonous that she died! What the hell? It's too disgusting! I endured the poison and casually glanced at the second chapter... Good guy, I wasted such a good subject in vain! In short, novices can barely read it, but old bookworms should be careful. If you want to practice Poison Kung Fu, you can try it. ...! ! ! I can't bear it anymore... Hurry up and let my wife out and give me drugs...

Seeing a woman unable to walk, Huang Rong can be written off with just one sentence. It is funny that the Qin Emperor and the Han Dynasty have such low martial arts merits. It is even more funny to confer Ying Zheng and Li Shimin with bad luck. A wise king in the prosperous age should be made an emperor, and a founding king should be made a king.

I have read a few chapters, and I don't know if the protagonist's mentality will change in the future, but judging from the first few chapters, it is easy for people to abandon the book. Regarding Huang Rong, I don't know whether the author has any obsession with Huang Rong or something else, but the protagonist is at least a Pluto. In comparison, it is It's an ancient emperor. Look at history, how can anyone dare to talk to the emperor like this? Brother Pluto, I'm really drunk. Even if you say that the protagonist has just obtained the reincarnation city and has the mentality of a young man in his twenties, he can accept time travel. This mentality cannot be adjusted. There is also a person who reads books. The introduction is a behind-the-scenes flow. You directly let the protagonist see his true face. Where does the behind-the-scenes flow come from? At least it should be covered up. Don't you feel contradictory, author? I guess these reincarnations will still appear in the real world. Even if there is this restriction, there will be no betrayal. Protagonist, you can also cover it up appropriately. Also, why are you talking about the founding of Samsara City? You can't pretend to be cool here, saying that you were damaged in a previous battle with some powerful people. At least you have to improve the protagonist's level. You must know that it's okay to show off properly, don't pretend to be cool all the time.

Author, every time a person comes to Samsara City, the protagonist has to ask if he wants the new person to work as a ghost. Why doesn't the protagonist ask the token before looking for the new person if he is willing? Every time he asks, where is the majesty of Pluto? Besides, you can also find a few employees!

I've only written a few chapters and there's a female protagonist. It's so rubbish.