The Hunyuan Overlord Who Devours the Starry Sky
About This Novel
Xu Yue traveled to "Swallowing Starry Sky" and became an ordinary soldier. In this era of raging beasts, fortunately, he has a powerful attribute bonus panel and top-level understanding, which allowed his strength to increase by leaps and bounds, and gradually became a top-notch existence in the army. After quelling the beast tide and once again establishing a prosperous age for the human race, Xu Yue went to outer space. In the original universe, the sea of three thousand universes, and many source worlds, Xu Yue left behind many legends. The will of the universe, the sea of life, and the original matter are all within Xu Yue's thoughts. With one thought born and one thought extinguished, Xu Yue gradually stood at the top of Chaotic Source...
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Official(27)Scraped 24d ago
Big logic problem
In the first four chapters, what kind of idiot commander would send a junior warrior hundreds of kilometers deep into the wilderness to do a mission? Important things were actually snatched away by a beast soldier. Speechless. What kind of beast soldiers attack the base just to grab one thing? It is most speechless to add more points. The speed has not changed at all as the power has increased. The power has not changed at all as the speed has increased significantly. Speechless.
In a word, the timeline changed a lot last night. Let's watch something else.
It can be said that there is something wrong with this protagonist. You made a lot of changes, including the timeline and everything. I might as well read the original. You arrange for the protagonist to take off immediately. Then you are not at the right time, you know. No matter how awesome you are? You can't just take off all at once either. You said you were sneaky, but I won't say that. You are so aboveboard, but you are afraid that others will not know. No other peak race would let him rise. It's unreasonable to write about being just and above board. You don't do assassination or anything. This isn't a sneaky peak talent competition, you're already participating. A trip to the chaotic universe. Tongtianqiao is only on the 9th floor, and no one here comes to assassinate it. Everyone else thinks they are idiots. The author's level needs to be improved, it's too natural. Not thinking things through enough. Chapter 200 then goes back to accept the protagonist as his apprentice. I think there is absolutely no need to go back and show off after taking off. If you can't push through this typical plot, come back and look for another plot.
The timeline is poisonous, right? The first time you meet Luo Feng in Chapter 40, the first place in the battle between geniuses in Chapter 200 (the class where Luo Feng participated in the original character) is 5,000 years apart. If you join the Virtual Universe Company, then the next Virtual Universe Company will be opened 10,000 years later. After Chapter 245, you arranged for a golden-horned behemoth crisis to break out on Earth. At this time, Luo Feng hadn't taken over yet? Looking at the title again, I had a deal with Babata before, but later I actually knew Babata...
Great, I give the author 6 stars, keep it up.
Lord of Thunder, hahahaha, not bad, a group of stars are competing for the inheritance of Lord of Thunder, comparable to Zhetian
I don't want to read it, your timeline is too confusing. The protagonist is about the same age as Luo Feng, but you have passed the genius battle, and it has been a hundred years since you went to Chaos for 30 years. You also went to the Xueluo World and the Magic Mountain to experience and returned to Earth, and the Golden Horned Behemoth Crisis broke out on Earth.
Did you take advantage of City Lord Luo? Aren't you afraid that the future incarnation will kill you directly?
It's really too poisonous. The names are all wrong. A Realm Lord dares to call him the Lord of Light.
It's a waste of time to read rubbish and make random changes. If the fanfic is written like this, it's acceptable. If you don't have the ability to create a new world, don't make random changes.
It's simply hard to say, just change your career and do something else as soon as possible.
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Official(27)Scraped 24d ago
Big logic problem
In the first four chapters, what kind of idiot commander would send a junior warrior hundreds of kilometers deep into the wilderness to do a mission? Important things were actually snatched away by a beast soldier. Speechless. What kind of beast soldiers attack the base just to grab one thing? It is most speechless to add more points. The speed has not changed at all as the power has increased. The power has not changed at all as the speed has increased significantly. Speechless.
In a word, the timeline changed a lot last night. Let's watch something else.
It can be said that there is something wrong with this protagonist. You made a lot of changes, including the timeline and everything. I might as well read the original. You arrange for the protagonist to take off immediately. Then you are not at the right time, you know. No matter how awesome you are? You can't just take off all at once either. You said you were sneaky, but I won't say that. You are so aboveboard, but you are afraid that others will not know. No other peak race would let him rise. It's unreasonable to write about being just and above board. You don't do assassination or anything. This isn't a sneaky peak talent competition, you're already participating. A trip to the chaotic universe. Tongtianqiao is only on the 9th floor, and no one here comes to assassinate it. Everyone else thinks they are idiots. The author's level needs to be improved, it's too natural. Not thinking things through enough. Chapter 200 then goes back to accept the protagonist as his apprentice. I think there is absolutely no need to go back and show off after taking off. If you can't push through this typical plot, come back and look for another plot.
The timeline is poisonous, right? The first time you meet Luo Feng in Chapter 40, the first place in the battle between geniuses in Chapter 200 (the class where Luo Feng participated in the original character) is 5,000 years apart. If you join the Virtual Universe Company, then the next Virtual Universe Company will be opened 10,000 years later. After Chapter 245, you arranged for a golden-horned behemoth crisis to break out on Earth. At this time, Luo Feng hadn't taken over yet? Looking at the title again, I had a deal with Babata before, but later I actually knew Babata...
Great, I give the author 6 stars, keep it up.
Lord of Thunder, hahahaha, not bad, a group of stars are competing for the inheritance of Lord of Thunder, comparable to Zhetian
I don't want to read it, your timeline is too confusing. The protagonist is about the same age as Luo Feng, but you have passed the genius battle, and it has been a hundred years since you went to Chaos for 30 years. You also went to the Xueluo World and the Magic Mountain to experience and returned to Earth, and the Golden Horned Behemoth Crisis broke out on Earth.
Did you take advantage of City Lord Luo? Aren't you afraid that the future incarnation will kill you directly?
It's really too poisonous. The names are all wrong. A Realm Lord dares to call him the Lord of Light.
It's a waste of time to read rubbish and make random changes. If the fanfic is written like this, it's acceptable. If you don't have the ability to create a new world, don't make random changes.
It's simply hard to say, just change your career and do something else as soon as possible.
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