The Film and Television Tie System of Time Travel and Rebirth
About This Novel
The story of a promising young man from later generations, carrying the film and television tie system, traveling through and being reborn into a parallel time and space, and constantly becoming stronger and growing.
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Official(27)Scraped 21d ago
The idea is good, but too watery
We don't need you to endlessly explain the working mechanism of Goldfinger, and we don't need your sister to be involved in every plot. Even people who haven't seen the movie won't care about the plot in the novel. We don't need to explain every sentence, and don't argue with the system for several chapters. It will upset the readers. We don't need to understand it so clearly. It should be your outline and setting. Otherwise, the reader will feel that the old lady's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long, and the water is flowing into the ocean.
Yes. of of of of of of. Abba Abba.
Is this how the author talks to others?
There are too many, so I just listened to them for a while and it was very uncomfortable.
Too wordy, too many repetitions, the same idea is expressed repeatedly
Okay, okay
Yes, there are too many. I listened to it. It was so unpleasant.
Author, do you feel uncomfortable if you don't use the word (that)?
I have read less than two, and from the beginning there are always words like that, that naturally, then, then this, then that. Author, do you want to add a beginning of that or something in front of every sentence?
The preface does not match the postscript
I don't know what the author was thinking. What he wrote is a preface that doesn't match the afterword. It's so messy that it gives me a headache to read it. It's not even in order.
I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter and felt the same throughout. Isn't it?
The style is okay but there is too much nonsense
I have read novels for so many years, but I have never read one with such a low number of words. It is really informative.
It's too wordy and a lot of nonsense. Everyone is reading novels and talking to themselves.
There's too much nonsense, so don't write it anymore. It's boring and no one will read it.
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Community(0)
Official(27)Scraped 21d ago
The idea is good, but too watery
We don't need you to endlessly explain the working mechanism of Goldfinger, and we don't need your sister to be involved in every plot. Even people who haven't seen the movie won't care about the plot in the novel. We don't need to explain every sentence, and don't argue with the system for several chapters. It will upset the readers. We don't need to understand it so clearly. It should be your outline and setting. Otherwise, the reader will feel that the old lady's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long, and the water is flowing into the ocean.
Yes. of of of of of of. Abba Abba.
Is this how the author talks to others?
There are too many, so I just listened to them for a while and it was very uncomfortable.
Too wordy, too many repetitions, the same idea is expressed repeatedly
Okay, okay
Yes, there are too many. I listened to it. It was so unpleasant.
Author, do you feel uncomfortable if you don't use the word (that)?
I have read less than two, and from the beginning there are always words like that, that naturally, then, then this, then that. Author, do you want to add a beginning of that or something in front of every sentence?
The preface does not match the postscript
I don't know what the author was thinking. What he wrote is a preface that doesn't match the afterword. It's so messy that it gives me a headache to read it. It's not even in order.
I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter and felt the same throughout. Isn't it?
The style is okay but there is too much nonsense
I have read novels for so many years, but I have never read one with such a low number of words. It is really informative.
It's too wordy and a lot of nonsense. Everyone is reading novels and talking to themselves.
There's too much nonsense, so don't write it anymore. It's boring and no one will read it.
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