America, My System is from 1885
by Terumatsuma
About This Novel
My name is Lin Wansheng, and I am a member of the high school team's water cooler. The day I awakened the system, I thought I was going to take off. It turned out that the system was one hundred and forty years late, so I must have been a Chinese coolie in 1885. On the first day, it asked me to establish relations with slave owners. The next day, it asked me to pick five kids to fight. On the third day, I crushed the defense team to pieces with one arm. Day N, Dameixing, King Lin Sheng
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Official(42)Scraped 25d ago
It turns out he plays rugby. To be honest, not only the protagonist can't understand your system, but the readers basically can't understand it either.
A depressed group
The main character just keeps struggling in a fucking cesspit, a bullshit football team, a bunch of bullshit, it's so disgusting to watch.
Miners system's rugby star
Thank you for the seven-day free membership Football + Miners System + Hell Joke Let me talk about something else first. There are really few novels about rugby. I hope the author can stick to it. The game part is indeed very exciting. Generally speaking, it is a story about ABC in the United States, who awakened to the system for a better tomorrow, strengthened his body, and became a quarterback of the school team with his unique interpretation ability, killing the game, and heading towards college and NFL performances in the future. The main plot is rugby, interspersed with after-school life, a part-time hell joke talk show, and a story about a female companion. Goldfinger is a miner system from 1885. The tasks triggered by the protagonist in reality are fed back to 1885 in a reasonable form, and a corresponding task prompt is given to strengthen himself. The main plot is not very clear at the moment. Is the protagonist going to become a professional athlete or will he start his career as an athlete and eventually become a lawyer? I haven't written it yet, but it seems to be more towards athletes. I'm looking at three heroines now, I'm not sure which one is the real heroine, it looks like a stock trader The overall rating is about 8 points for a campus football novel
Generally, there is a cheat, but then the protagonist doesn't know what to do and has no clear goal. I feel that writing about rugby is really just forcing me to play rugby in order to get a scholarship to college, with no priority. It sounds good, it's called American Everyday Life, but it sounds bad because it has no main line.
Please read the new book, collect it, and vote for it.
Foster fathers! The follow-up reading of the new book issue is really important to the author. New books are seriously unsalable. Can foster parents stay in the latest chapter for more than 30 seconds? Save the child Thank you...
Very good, just write less nonsense! ! ! Writing is too slow! !
Update time changed to 23:30
Guys, the update time will be fixed at 23:30 from now on. Sorry to change the time. Today I try my best to write ten thousand. Guarantee six and fight for eight tomorrow. Work hard to ensure six goals during the working day. Thank you guys for your support~
The plot is really outrageous... A high school competition, an ordinary competition, no conflict of interest, just an ordinary competition! We haven't even fought yet! Opponent players form a team in private to cause trouble for the protagonist's family? ?? More than a dozen people rushed into Chinatown............ Just write a killer route! Extremely fast pursuit... Otherwise it is really retarded! There is no logic at all! It's like a school game. Suddenly, the team members feel like their whole family is going to die. They have to kill each other's family members. Go ahead...
I don't understand it, I don't feel happy at all. Why it's rated so high is hard to understand.
What is the name of the puppy that Teacher Li rescued?
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Official(42)Scraped 25d ago
It turns out he plays rugby. To be honest, not only the protagonist can't understand your system, but the readers basically can't understand it either.
A depressed group
The main character just keeps struggling in a fucking cesspit, a bullshit football team, a bunch of bullshit, it's so disgusting to watch.
Miners system's rugby star
Thank you for the seven-day free membership Football + Miners System + Hell Joke Let me talk about something else first. There are really few novels about rugby. I hope the author can stick to it. The game part is indeed very exciting. Generally speaking, it is a story about ABC in the United States, who awakened to the system for a better tomorrow, strengthened his body, and became a quarterback of the school team with his unique interpretation ability, killing the game, and heading towards college and NFL performances in the future. The main plot is rugby, interspersed with after-school life, a part-time hell joke talk show, and a story about a female companion. Goldfinger is a miner system from 1885. The tasks triggered by the protagonist in reality are fed back to 1885 in a reasonable form, and a corresponding task prompt is given to strengthen himself. The main plot is not very clear at the moment. Is the protagonist going to become a professional athlete or will he start his career as an athlete and eventually become a lawyer? I haven't written it yet, but it seems to be more towards athletes. I'm looking at three heroines now, I'm not sure which one is the real heroine, it looks like a stock trader The overall rating is about 8 points for a campus football novel
Generally, there is a cheat, but then the protagonist doesn't know what to do and has no clear goal. I feel that writing about rugby is really just forcing me to play rugby in order to get a scholarship to college, with no priority. It sounds good, it's called American Everyday Life, but it sounds bad because it has no main line.
Please read the new book, collect it, and vote for it.
Foster fathers! The follow-up reading of the new book issue is really important to the author. New books are seriously unsalable. Can foster parents stay in the latest chapter for more than 30 seconds? Save the child Thank you...
Very good, just write less nonsense! ! ! Writing is too slow! !
Update time changed to 23:30
Guys, the update time will be fixed at 23:30 from now on. Sorry to change the time. Today I try my best to write ten thousand. Guarantee six and fight for eight tomorrow. Work hard to ensure six goals during the working day. Thank you guys for your support~
The plot is really outrageous... A high school competition, an ordinary competition, no conflict of interest, just an ordinary competition! We haven't even fought yet! Opponent players form a team in private to cause trouble for the protagonist's family? ?? More than a dozen people rushed into Chinatown............ Just write a killer route! Extremely fast pursuit... Otherwise it is really retarded! There is no logic at all! It's like a school game. Suddenly, the team members feel like their whole family is going to die. They have to kill each other's family members. Go ahead...
I don't understand it, I don't feel happy at all. Why it's rated so high is hard to understand.
What is the name of the puppy that Teacher Li rescued?
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The 1885 system was very well-written, and there was a lot of English (translation) in the text. The protagonist is an Aboriginal and a rugby player. There is a sense of fragmentation in the story, and his character is not very refreshing. I want to be famous, but I don't want to participate in group activities, nor do I want to participate in team activities. Overall, it's okay, the writing is relatively detailed, the supporting characters are also quite lengthy, and it's full of emotion and has a female-female feel to it. I don't understand rugby, but the writing about the game is quite exciting. If you like cool writing, enter with caution.
9-10, the characterization and plot are excellent, the writing is very visual, and the story is great. It's like watching an American TV series, a very good work. Updated to about 600,000 words, I hope there will be no eunuchs!
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