I Turned into a Wild Monster That Everyone Yelled At

Don't always use names, use he, she, it more. Also, don't date people, don't change people, don't take refuge in people. The biggest problem is that if you don't change the same person, no one will read it. After all, there are people who write about people, and there are people who write better than you, so it's better to stay the same person. The above only represents my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

The author has played all three games, and Mianhuang has made a lot of money😘😘😘

Too messy The background settings are completely inappropriate None of the characters seem to match the superficial background of the online game. Planes and stuff, we'll do that later. Don't write whatever comes to mind Since it is the prehistoric background of ancient Chinese mythology Just don't get modern thermal weapons like this. Very inconsistent The character description was good at the beginning Until Akali's gun appeared, I endured the poison and read a few more chapters Too novice, assassin Wu Liuqi, League of Legends all popped up, all have shortcomings at this time The characters are not well described, including the swordsman's unruliness, Jing Ke's hesitation, and the swordsman's indifference. Don't you think the names are very inconsistent? Background setting problem First, the little poisonous snake has the blood of Nuwa, which is a profile of the background. It proves that the prehistoric period has just passed not long ago The blood is rich For the main city, you can write various ancient place names in Luoyang as the main city. Second Plane War It's a matter of the later period

It was updated at around 4 o'clock, what about steel?

Although I still like to read this, the main thing is that what you wrote all at once is a bit hard to understand, and there are many loopholes. I suggest the author carefully check it from the beginning to the place you updated. It doesn't mean writing whatever comes to mind. After you finish writing, check it again. If you feel that the problem is not big, then update. This should be the first time the author writes. If he is a veteran, he will probably be beaten to death. Come on.

Interesting plot description, imaginative and funny pig's feet. Looking forward to more interesting plots in the future~ Come on

Awesome I love my vote.