Black Gate Leads to All Heavens

It feels like the rhythm of a stallion. . . . . . Ahhhhhhhhh

Seeing a woman unable to hold back her legs, it turns out that you, the author, are not suitable for writing emotional novels at all. Except for the first world, which is better, look at what you wrote later. The protagonist's brain is completely crazy. If you don't know how to write about female supporting characters or female protagonists, then don't write about it. They say women who fall in love have no brains, but I didn't expect that the main character, a man, would become a villain. I feel like this book has become obsolete. Please read it again. Just take it as a lesson. It's up to you whether you want to listen or not. If you want to delete the comments, feel free to delete them.

It feels a bit like forcibly torturing the owner...

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I don't understand the operation of the time-travel door. The time-travel door is the most important secret of the protagonist, but Qu Feiyan actually let Qu Feiyan know that he will travel with you. A little confused? Take her to the zombie world. There are soul-searching spells in there. It's okay, and soul exchange is possible. If there is someone who is such a good guy and you still use Soul Search for her, wait for Liangliang.

The protagonist is too brainless, he does things without using his brain, he doesn't understand anything, he doesn't know anything, and he just goes through it all recklessly.

Will the sci-fi world go, Super Out of Control, Megamind, Superman Serum in Edge of Tomorrow, Powers in Protagonist, The Adventures of Jackie Chan, Magic Phone, God Killer, Ninjutsu in Naruto, Saiyan bloodline in Dragon Ball, Saitama's physique in One Punch Man. ,, And then go to cultivate immortality, so that you can walk sideways in that world.

If you just write about martial arts and fairy tales, there won't be much to see. It needs to be fully developed. For example, if you have the serum in Super Villain and gain powers in God Killer, Superman can ignore all magic.